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Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!! (Page 13)

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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 4:33am | IP Logged
That's so sweeeet part.

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Episode 21

(Manasvi and shefali r in the kitchen preparing dinner 4 the family)

manasvi: acha..shefali..vegetables ready rakhna..ok?
shefali: ok bhabhi..
(bhoomi comes in)
manasvi: arre..bhoomi...tum yahan?
bhoomi: haan bhabhi..amin aapke aur shefali bhabhi ki koi help karna chahti...
shefali: help..no..no way...tumhe arram ki zaroorat hai..
bhoomi: nahin..bhabhi..main bilqul theek hoge...mujhe kaam karna hai..
manasvi: bhooi..kaa se kaam aapni ki liye nahin..tho..iss bache ka socho..tumhe arram ki zaroorat..
shefali: haan..doctor said it clear...bachay ke liye...theek nahin..hai..ek choti se garbar sab kuch spoil kar sakta hai..
bhoomi: ok bhabhi..
manasvi: aisa karo..tum dining table phar beto...main koi fruits lati ho tumhare liye...
shefali:haan..tumhe health ke liye..healthy cheezi khani chahe..
bhoomi: uff..theek hai..aap jeethi hum haare...ok?
manasvi: hehe....ok
(shaku comes in)

shaku: bhoomi..tum yahan..doctor ne kaha tha arram karne ke liye...jao..chalo..
bhoomi: acha...jab shefali bhabhi ki bari hoge..phir main buhut ache tarha unka khayal rakhongi...ya phir jab manasvi bhabhi ki bari..(stops)

(manasvi wipes a tear from her eye)

shefali: arre manasvi bhabhi..aap ro kyun rahe hai..? tho kya hua ki aap conceive nahin kar sakte...duniya ki sabse badi khushi aapke saath hai..khushi..(smiles and wipes her tears)
manasvi: u r rite...
shaku: acha..emotional scenes baand karo..aur jaldi se dinner karte hai..
bhoomi: oh..lekhen jhetji aur arjun nahin aaye?
shefali: unku phone karo...
bhoomi; main karte..kaam se kaam bait kar..main phone kar sakte...
manasvi: acha..jao..

(bhoomi dials up arjun's number...arjun-suraj r still in office..the reception picks up the phone)

recepion; hello..goenka group of companies..how may i help u?
bhoomi: erm..jee main mrs. bhoomika goenka bul rahe hoo..
reception; oh ye maam..baat kya hai?
bhhomi: jee..wahan phar arjun goenka hai?
reception: maam...voh kaafi busy hai..pata nahin kab voh phone phar aa sakte hai..lekhen main aapka message paas on karoge..
bhoomi: ok..thank u...ok..bye..
reception: bye..maam..(both hung up)

reception(through phone): erm..sir?
suraj: yeah..?
reception: erm...mrs.bhoomika goenka called up 4 arjun..she asked when he could call home..
suraj: ok..thanx 4 the message..i'll tell arjun..
reception: ok..(hungs up)
suraj; arjun..bhoomi called up..
arjun: really..?
suraj: but..reception said u were busy...i would suggets that u call bhoomi now..and tell u will be late...
arjun: relax bhaiyya i will...
(arjun gets his mobile..and calls up bhoomi)

bhoomi; arjun..
arjun: hi bhavri..
bhoomi: arjun...kaha ho tum? pata hai..main tumhara intazaar kar rahe hoo..
arjun: i no bhavri..lekhen main yahan phar busy hoo...aur..shayad puri raat thak kaam karna parega..
bhoomi(heartbroken): acha..matlaab tum ghar nahin aa sakte..?
arjun: erm..aaj raat nahin...
bhoomi: tumhare patni se ziada business aur important hogaya hai..
arjun: bhavri..aise baat nahin hai..dekho..subha ghar aaonga..phir baat karenge...ok?
bhoomi(feels pain in stomach): argh!!
arjun(concerned): bhavri..r u ok?
bhoomi: main theek ho..bas sar ka dard hai..headache...tum kaam karo..and bye..
arjun: and i luv...(but bhoomi hungs up)...u...
suraj; kya hua../
arjun: i dont no..lagta hai..usse bura laga hoga..
suraj: arjun..i think tumhe bhoomi ko ziada attention deena chahe...
arjun: lekhen bhaiyya...agar yeh kaam nahin hua..phir kakasaheb hume baarbaad kar sakta hai..
suraj: arjun..jab parivaar saath hoo..phir yeh business kuch bhi nahin..

(back at home..)

manasvi; kya hua..bhoomi?
bhoomi(crying a little): bhabhi..voh subha ko aayega...
manasvi: puri raat kaam karta rehega...?
bhoomi: haan...buhut maan kar raha tha..ki amin arjun ko batao ki main maa bane ali hoo..aur dekhna chahti thi ki uska reaction kya hoga..lekhen....abh...
manasvi: hey..bhoomi...dekho..suraj bhi busy..hai...aur main thori aise upset ho rahe hoo..
bhoomi; i guess so...
manasvi: jao...arram kar lo..have some sleep..
bhoomi: ok..bhabhi...

Precap: Yuv~Aksh plan more conspiracies against the two brothers, meanwhile Bhoomi tels Arjun.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 6:35am | IP Logged
hey thats gr8 fanfic Smile . keep it up Clap Clap
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 10:12am | IP Logged
hey tht really kool Wink pls contd Big smile
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
cool..Smile
gud goin... Clap n keep writing.. LOL
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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 4:07am | IP Logged
Just cool.Update soon
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Posted: 11 April 2006 at 4:57am | IP Logged
ok..thanx 4 the comments guys..updating episode 22 Big smile
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Episode 22

(Next morning-Bhoomi wakes up and finds that she was asleep all alone Ouchand sees arjun is not here yet)

bhoomi: abhi thak ghar nahin aaye...kabh aayega voh..phir main bataogi usse ki...(blushes)
LK: karam ka phaal tho tumhe milega..bhoomi...arjun zaroor ayega...sabar ka phaal hamesha meeta hota hai..
bhoomi: time kya hui..? (sees that it is 7:45)...uff..7:45...main fresh up kar lethi hoo..
LK: haan..tum fresh up karo...aur main dekh tha hoo..ki arjun ayaa ki nahin..
(bhoomi goes 2 freshen up..downstairs manasvi and shefali r serving breakfast)

manasvi; shefali..chalo..nashta ready?
shefali: haan..bhabhi..bhoomi kaha hai..?
manasvi: erm..shayad voh so rahe hoo..usse disturb nahin karna chahe...
shefali: hmm...i agree...main nashta laga thi hoo..aur aap suraj bhaiya aur arjun ko phone kare..
manasvi: ok..(but sees that arun-suraj r back at home)

manasvi: suraj..arjun..kaha thi tum dono?
suraj: manasvi..voh buhut kaam tha..iss liye raat ko kaam karna parha...lekhen.
manasvi: neva mind...arjun..bhoomi chahti thi..ki tum jaldi se ghar aao..voh tumhe kuch batana chahti thi..
arjun: kya...aise kaunse baat hai?
shefali: tum jao upar...
arjun: theek hai..(goes upstairs)

manasvi: chalo..suraj..nashta karte hai..

(arjun is upstairs in his room..)

arjun: bhavri...bhavri..kaha ho..?
(bhoomi comes out of the washroom)
bhoomi: kya hai?
arjun: bhavri..i'm sorry...
bhoomi(interrupts): sorry ki koi zarorat nahin hai..
arjun: bhavri..maansvi bhabhi keh rahe thi..ki tum mujhe kuch kehna chahti hoo....
bhoomi: haan..voh kya hai..ki main.....main...
arjun: main kya? come on tell me....kya hua?
bhoomi: ki main pregnant hoo..
arjun: sach...really...(getting happy); tum pregnant hoo?
bhoomi: haan..kal mujhe pata chala aur..main tumhe patana chahti thi...
arjun: bhavri...i'm so happy....(hugs her tightly)
bhoomi: lekhen arjun...main iss bachay ko akele nahin handle kar sakte..iss mein tumhare help ki zaroorat hai..
arjun: bhavri..tumhare liye aur apane bachay ke liye..main hamesha hoo..kabhi bhi kisi ki saath zaroorat hui..phir yaad rakhna ki main hoon tumhare liye...
bhoomi: thanx..arjun..(holds on 2 him)
arjun: ok...neeche chale..nashta bhi karna hai..
bhoomi: tum aaj office jaogi..?
arjun: nahin..pehle abhi abi office se ayaa hoo..aur doosra yeh ki abh main daddy bani wala hoo...
bhoomi(blushes): arjun...

(both come down)

arjun(happy):bhaiyya..i'm going 2 be a daddy....haha..
suraj(hugs him); congrats arjun..
arjun: really..i'm so happy...pata hai bhavri..hum kal aapni holiday ke liye chalti hai..
bhoomi: lekhen arjun...pehle jhetji aur manasvi bhabhi apane honeymoon phar jayee..phir uski baad..
arjun: oh haan..main tho bhool gaya...
suraj: nahin...pehle tum aur bhoomi jao..hpir hum dono jayege...
arjun: lekhen...bhaiyya..
manasvi(interrupts): haan arjun...suraj theek keh rahe hai...pehle tum dono jao...
shefali: abh aao..nashta ka time hogaya hai..
khushi(fully ready); daddy...main ready hoo....mujhe school drop off karo...
suraj: haan beta...chalo..(about 2 go)
shefali: erm..nahin surja bhaiyya...main isse chor thi hoo..
suraj: lekhen shefali...
shefali: bhaiyya...abh abhi kaam se wapis aaye hai..main isse chor thi hoo..aap nashta kar liye...
khushi: haan daddy...shefali aunty mujhe drop off karege...aap nahsta kar lo..
suraj: ok beta...as u wish...(hugs her)..ok..ache bache bana ok/
khushi: ok..
suraj: aur koi shararat maath karna..ok?
khushi: ok daddy...bye mummy...
s-m: bye...

(upstairs: mansen and mamaji)

mamaji: pata hai..jeeja...ki humari teen bahus se ek bahu maa bane wali hai?
mansen: kaun..shefali?
mamaji: arre shefali nahin jeeja...voh naukarani...bhoomika..
mansen: tho kya hua khushal..uski bachay bhi usse ki tarha naukar honge...
mamaji: lekhen jeeja...voh baat nahin hai..
mansen: tho kaunse baat hai?
mamaji: baat hai..ki agar bade dadaji ni yeh faisla kiya ki voh saare property uss bachay ki naam kar deengay..phir humare haath se voh property gaye..
mansen: theek kaha tumne khushal...
mamaji: hmm?
mansen: hume arjun aur bhoomi ki bachay ko jald se jald ko khatam karna parega..
mamaji: lekhen kaise jeeja?
mansen: fikhar maath karo khushal..voh bhi maine plan kar liya hai..
mamaji: abh kaniya bachay arjun aur bhoomika ki bache ko..(grins)

Precap: Arjun~Bhoomi reach their holiday destination, meanwhile Manasvi feels a strange feeling towards Suraj.

Howz dat, ppl?

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