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Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!! (Page 12)

Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 08 April 2006 at 2:31am | IP Logged
ok..ppl....updating episode 20... Big smile

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Episode 20

(Arjun~Suraj r getting ready for office...arjun calls bhoomi 2 do his tie)

bhoomi: acha...arjun...ghar jaldi aana ok?
arjun: kyun..sab theek hai..?
bhoomi: bas..aise...u no..like that..
arjun: wah..itne english kahan se seeka tumne..?
bhoomi: manasvi bhabhi aur shefali bhabhi se...
arjun: nice improvement..ok..mere tie karo...
bhooi: yeh kya arjun..tum aapne tie bhi nahin kar sakte..?
arjun: kar sakta hoo..lekhen jab mere itne cute aur beautiful wife hai..phir main nahin kar sakta...
bhoomi: kyun..nahin?
arjun: kyunki main haar waqt uski taraf dekh tha hoo...
bhoomi(blushes): arjun...stop it...
arjun:kya hai..?
bhoomi(finishing doing the tie): acha..hogaye tumhare tie...abh jao...
arjun: jaata hoo...(kisses her on the forehead..and hugs her..)
bhoomi: so sweet...
arjun: acha...nashta ke liye chale..?
bhoomi: haan chalo...

(both go down...meanwhile suraj is getting ready 4 office)

manasvi: khushi..jao nashta karo..phir daddy tumhe school drop off karnege...ok?
khushi: ok..daddy..?
suraj: haan beta?
khushi: main neeche honge...aap jaldi karo..ok..?
suraj: ok..my chhwweet gal...(hugs her)
khushi: ok..main jaa rahe hoo..(leaves)
manasvi: acha...aaj dhir aaoge...?
suraj: kyun..?
manasvi: bas aise...
suraj: pata nahin..last minute phar kuch bhi aa sakta hai..
manasvi: ok..erm...tumhare tie...?
suraj: main hud kar longa...
manasvi: nahin..main karoge....
suraj: ok...
(manasvi does his tie...both luk into each other's eyes)
manasvi: acha...chale?
suraj: chalo...

(everyone finishes their breakfast...)

khushi: acha daddy..jaldi se mujhe school bhi jaana hai..
suraj: ok beta....abhi aaya...erm..arjun..tum jao..office..aur..main khushi ko drop karta hoo...theek hai..?
arjun: theek hai bhaiyya...
(suraj leaves wid khushi)
shaku: erm.manasvi..main soch rahe thi..ki kal holi hai..
shruti: haan mama...holi zaroor banaye gi hum...
(suddenly bhoomi feels unwell..and rushes 2 the washroom..and vomits...)

manasvi(going after her): bhoomi...kya hua?
bhoomi: pata nahin bhabhi..achanak..aise kya hogaya?
baisa: beta...tum check-up kar lo...
bhoomi: nahin..baisa...main theek hoo....
manasvi: bhoomi..ek baar check-up kar lo..
shefali: haan bhoomi..u no..in case..koi danger tho nahin hai..
bhoomi: theek hai..erm...manasvi bhabhi..aap mere saath chalenge...?
manasvi: haan kyun nahin...
shefali: baisa..mujhe lagta hai..ki bhoomi...ahem-ahem..
baisa: matlaab?
shefali: matlaab....(whispers 2 baisa)
baisa: han..yeh ho sakta hai...
bhoomi: kya ho sakta..?
arjun: kya hua...?
shaku: kuch nahin...tum office jao..abh thak surja bhi office mein hoga...
arjun; ok..aapna khayal rakhna bhavri...ok bye...
every1: bye...

(at the doctors clinic..bhoomi gets her tests done..and is waiting 4 the results)

bhoomi; bhabhi..kahiin koi serious baat tho nahin hai/
manasvi: fikhar na karo...sab theek hoga...
doctor: mrs bhoomika goenka..apke results ready hai..
bhoomi: theek hai...oh god..sab kuch theek hone deena...
manasvi: dont worry..bhoomi..
doctor: sit down..plz..
(bhoomi and manasvi sit down)
doctor: maine aapke tests ki thi...
bhoomi(worried): haan?
doctor: ek good news hai..
manasvi: kaise good news..?
doctor: mrs. goenka aap pregnant hai..
bhoomi(happy): kya? sach...main..main pregnant hoo..
manasi: oh..congrats bhoomi...(hugs her)
bhoomi: thank u bhabhi..and thank u doctor..
doctor: its ok..aur aap aapna ache tarha khayal rakhna hoga..
manasvi: dont worry doctor..hum sab hai..bhoomi ko khayal rakhni mein...chale bhoomi..?
bhoomi: theek hai..chalo...

(both reach outside the clinic)

bhoomi: mujhe arjun ko patana chahe...
manasvi: haan..lekhen usse ghar tho aane do...phir patana..
bhoomi: bhabhi..i'm so happy..
manasvi: i no..bhoomi...aur jaldi se ghar chale kar..yeh good news ko suna thi hai...ok?
bhoomi: ok..

(both reach heritage house...)

manasvi; erm...baisa..mama..papa..shefali..shruti..kahan tum log..?
baisa: kya hua manasvi..bhoomi heek thohai..?
manasvi: bhoomi..batao inku..
bhoomi(blushes): nahin..aap batao..
manasvi; bhoomi pregnant hai..
shaku: sach...congrats bhoomi
bhoomi: thank u...ma-ji..
shruti: finally..koi mujhe bua kehga...hehe...
shefali: so happy 4 u bhoomi..baisa...hume iss khushi ki liye..party rakhni chahe...
baisa: haan...tum sahee keh rahe hoo...
LK: mahabharat mein ek naya mur ayaa hai..abhimanyu ka aana...

Precap: Arjun~Suraj both get delayed at work and stay the whole night. Bhoomi is disappointed that Arjun didn't come home.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 09 April 2006 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
wow hunny its gr8888888 , Clap i love ur ff so much....... Big smile
baaki waapas aakar check karoongi. Embarrassed i m going u know . Cry
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Posted: 09 April 2006 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
great
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Posted: 09 April 2006 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
cool shirley..i jsut read this episode...u write very well..n after postin this..i'm gonna read 4rm start,,,sorry fer bein late though Embarrassed par great going... Clap
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 1:39am | IP Logged
wonderful shirley Clap thats good news .... plz continue karna ...precap s Embarrassed ounds interesting
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 3:46am | IP Logged
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Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 April 2006 at 4:04am | IP Logged
ok guys..glad u liked it...updating episode 21 Big smile

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