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Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!! (Page 11)

tunna Goldie
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Posted: 05 April 2006 at 10:10am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Shirley

glad u liked it gals....updating episode 18 Big smile

waiting already............. Big smile

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Posted: 05 April 2006 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Episode 18

(The inspector arrests mansen....)

vasudev: bhoomi beta....mujhe maaf karna...main bhi..
bhoomi: bauji..aap ko maafi maangne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai...koi baat nahin...
suraj: acha...chale?
arjun: haan..yuvraj aur aksh ka reaction ka hoga?
manasvi: arjun...stop it...
arjun: sorry bhabhi..
(the 4 go home...)

shaku: arre suraj..arjun..bhoomi..manasvi..aagaye ho tum char..?
sidarth: erm..beta bhoomi...mansen gaya tha tumhare ghar phar...aur kaha hai voh?
arjun: papa...uski baari mein aapse baat karne hai..
siddarth: kya?
suraj: kakasaheb ni dukhi se bhoomi ki signatures leni ki koshish ki hai..aur iss liye...kakasaheb arrest ho gaye...

(yuvraj and aksh r shocked and furious)

yuv: eh nahin ho sakta....zaroor inn dono bhai ni kuch kiya hai...
suraj: humne kuch nahin kiya...
aksh: tumse aur umeed bhi kya ho sakte hai.?
arjun: aksh....zaban baand rakho...
baisa: bas..enough..agar mansen ni koi gunaah kiya...phir uski sazaa usse suffer karne parege...
yuv: lekhen baisa...?
baisa: yuvraj....chup...
khushal: bhanje...relax...kuch kar lenge....theek hai..sab kuch theek ho jayega....
(the three leave)

(aksh, gunvanti, yuv and the rest r upstairs)

aksh: dekha mom...arjun aur suraj ni humare dad ko jail beeja...
gunvanti: chup...aksh...khushal..koi bail ho sakte hai...?
khushal: main bail karne ke liye jaa raha hoo....

(goes 2 the police station)

khushal: main mansen goenka ki bail karvana chahta hoo..
inspector: i'm sorry...unki bail nahin ho sakte...
khushal: kyun?
inspector: kyunki..humare iss gunaah ki buhut witnesses hai...bhoomika goenka...arjun goenka...suraj goenka...manasvi goenka...aur vasudev...
khushal: phir...koi court ka case hoga?
inspector: agar bhoomika ji ni hud..yeh complaint wapis le...phir mansen ko chor deenge...
khushal: ok..thank u inspector..(leaves)

(khushal returns)

bade dadaji: kya hua..khushal?
khushal: inspector kehte hai..ki agar bhoomika ni aapne complaint wapis lee hai..phir jeeja ghar aa sakte hai...
yuv: phir iss naukarani ko aapne complaint wapis leene parege..
arjun(angry): yuvraj!!!! agar phirse tumne mere bhavri ko naukarani kaha..hpri mujhse bura aur koi nahin hoga...
suraj: sssshh....control yurself arjun..
manasvi: koi baat nahin arjun...yuvraj se aise ummedi hai...
yuv: hey.....u bloody....
suraj(angry): hey....mere maansvi ko ya phir mere parivaar ka koi bhi sadasya ko kuch bhi kaha..phir tumhara kya hoga...yeh tho sirf voh jaante hai..(points 2 LK)
LK: mahabharat mein duryodhana ki kismat kya thi..yeh tho samay bataye ga...yuvraj...
yuv: tum sabse mein badla longa....

Precap: Arjun decides to take Bhoomi on a holiday, meanwhile Bhoomi suggests that Suraj-Manasvi have their honeymoon.

Howz dat, ppl?
Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 05 April 2006 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tunna

Originally posted by Shirley

glad u liked it gals....updating episode 18 Big smile

waiting already............. Big smile

intazaar khatam....Wink

bismazaman2000 Goldie
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Posted: 05 April 2006 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
waiting for the next episode..... Big smile
Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 06 April 2006 at 6:54am | IP Logged

Originally posted by bismazaman2000

waiting for the next episode..... Big smile

already on it bismazaman...updating episode 19Big smile

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Posted: 06 April 2006 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Episode 19

(the grown-ups r in the hall)

baisa: abh sochna yeh hai..ki mansen ko bail kaise kare..
siddarth: baisa..mansen ni buhut bada gunaah karne ki koshish ki hai..bail kaise hoge...
gunvanti: agar...bhoomi ni aapne complaint wapis liya tho..
arjun: kabhi nahin!!!bhavri aapna complaint wapis nahin lege...
suraj: arjun...
arjun: lekhen bhaiyya...
manasvi: lekhen..agar kakasaheb ki badnami hoge..phir puri goenka parivar ki bhi hoge....
suraj: haan arjun..aapne parivaar ki izzat bachani ke liye...bhoomi ko aapna complaint wapis leena parega...
bhoomi: main iss ghar ki bahu hoo...mera farz baanta hai..iss ghar ko raksha karna...iss liye main aapna complaint wapis longe...
arjun: theek hai...aapne parivar ke liye....
suraj: thats better brother....
gunvanti: thank u bhoomi...mere situation ko samjha tumne...
bhoomi: nahin..gunvanti kaki..iss mein thanx kehne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai...
yuv(2 aksh): aapne sympathy dekh rahe hai...kaash..main inn 4 ko...uff...
aksh: relax...yuv..relax...abh dad wapis aayege..phir kuch plan karte hai..(grins)
yuv: theek kaha tumne....kuch plan karna parega...(grins)
shefali: phir police station kaun chaliga...?
bade dadaji: hud bhoomika jayege....
bhoomi: jee?
shaku: complaint tumne kiya...phir...
arjun: compliant bhavri nahin..maine aur bhaiyya kiya tha...
baisa: phir...tum dono jao...aur bhoomi ko saath lekhar jao...
suraj: jee baisa...
yuv: abh dad ko bail karke....dono bhai ke pehle haar hoge....
(arjun-suraj give a dirty luk 2 yuv-aksh)
arjun: chale bhaiyya...?
suraj: chalo..
(both r about 2 go....when manasvi grabs suraj's hand)
suraj: kya hua..manasvi?
manasvi: main saath chal sakte hoo..?
suraj: kyun..?
manasvi: bas aise...aapni pati ki saath jaana chahti hoo..(smiles)
suraj: ok...chalo...
bhoomi(2 arjun): sweet..na...?
arjun(luking at bhoomi): very sweet....and beautiful...
bhoomi: stop it..arjun...

(at the police station)

arjun: erm..inspector..mere patni....aapni complaint wapis leena chahti hai..
inspector: aap samjh thi hai..madam-ji..ki agar aapni complaint wapis liya..phir mansen bahar aa sakte hai..
bhoomi: jee...
inspector: ok...constable..chor do inhe...
(constable lets mansen out)

mansen: acha..hud mujhe arrest karvaya....aur tum dono ni mujhe bail kiya..
manasvi: iss ka galat fyda..maath uthaye...kaksaheb..humne aapni parivar ki izzat ko soch kar..yeh faisla liya hai..aapke hathar nahin..
suraj: manasvi theek kehti hai..kakasaheb...agar aap yahan rehti phir goenka parivaar ki baari mein kya baadnami hote..
mansen: chalo..aapni parivaar ka izzat tho socha...
arjun: whateva...chalr..bhavri..bhabhi....bhaiyya...?
bhoomi: chalo...
(the 4 leave..mansen leaves afterwards)

(the 4 and mansen come in)

baisa: mansen...yeh kya karne ki koshish ke tumne...?
mansen: baisa..aapne kaha ki main shefali se maafi maango...phir badla zaroori tha....
shefali: lekhen papaji..badla leena tha..phir mujhse lethi..bhoomi ni kya kiya..?
mansen: sirf bhoomi ni nahin..tum teen kiya..manasvi ki paas kangan hai..bhoomi sughandi creations ko join kiya hai..aur tum....
gunvanti: dekhiye...aapne bahus mein farq nahin karte..yeh tho humare betas jaise baarbaar hai...
mansen: gunvanti...uff...rehne do...
vishakha: aap tired honge papa....go and rest..
arjun: jee kakasaheb..arram se neend kariye...varna kya pata..kal aapke shanti ko...who knows...
suraj: hehe..aap arjun ki baat ko seriously maat lo...arram karliye...varna...kal aapke shanti ko kya ho sakta hai..who knows...
mansen(thinking): dono bhai ek jaise hai...i'll sort u out...

(the 4 r still in the hall)

arjun: erm....bhavri..maine socha ki hum dono...kahiin holiday ke liye..jaye...
bhoomi: kaha?
arjun: erm...kyun na...erm....paris jaye...
bhoomi: paris..?
arjun: haan...wahan...kitne romantic places hote hai...
suraj(whispers 2 arjun): arjun..paris itna romantic nahin hai...choose another place...
arjun: ok...erm..italy...yeah..italy..
suraj(whispers 2 arjun): erm...greece....nice one..
arjun: kyun na greece chale..
bhoomi: romantic hai...kya?
arjun: buhut...
bhoomi: chalo..phir..tickets book hogaye hai..?
arjun: main kal book kar tha hoo....ok..phir next week chalti hai...
bhoomi: theek hai..lekhen manasvi bhabhi aur jhetji ko bhi aapi honeymoon jaana chahe...
arjun: haan...iss kakasaheb ki tension main tho bhool gaya...bhaiyya...aap jayega..na..
suraj: erm...nahin..
bhoomi: arre...aise kaise../
arjun: bhabhi...some response...
manasvi: erm..nahin..aur khushi ka kya hoga..?
bhoomi: arre...khushi ko main luk after karoge..bas aap jao aapni honeymoon phar..
suraj: nahin..ek yeh business...
arjun: uff...business ko main handle karoga...ok...?
suraj: ok...
arjun: phir aap dono jayege...haina?
manasvi: theek hai..jayege...

Precap: Bhoomi discovers something shocking, meanwhile Arjun~Suraj have a face-to-face argument with Yuv-Aksh.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 06 April 2006 at 10:01am | IP Logged
lovely.... lovely... lovely...lovely.... Clap
sprry......i don hav any other words.... its amazing girl... do write soon... if possi'll check b4 leaving..
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Posted: 07 April 2006 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
i can only say one thing IT'S AMAZING.....u should really write u have the potential Smile

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