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Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!! (Page 10)

Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Episode 16

(episode continues....baisa and the grown-ups r downstairs)

baisa: mansen ni yeh acha nahin kiya...
gunvanti: baisa..dekhe....
baisa: gunvanti...main jaante hoo...tumhare koi dosh nahin hai...
shaku: shefali..kaha hai..?
preeti: ma...bhabhi..upar hai..saath mein hai manasvi bhabhi aur bhoomi bhabhi..
siddarth: sab ko neeche bulao..
shruti: jee papa...
(shruti goes upstairs)

shruti(coming in): bhabhi..?
manasvi: kya hua..shruti?
shruti: papa...aap sab ko neeche bula rahe hai...
bhoomi: hum teeno ko?
shruti: jee...
shefali(wiping her tears): theek hai..tum jao..hum ate hai..
shruti: acha...(leaves)
shefali: chale..bhabhi?
manasvi: chalo..

(the three bahus go down..)

baisa: gunvanti...mansen ko bulao..
mansen(entering): main yahan hoo..bula ni koi zaroorat nahin hai..
bade dadaji: mansen...shefali phar gussa kar ki..tumne acha nahin kiya....yeh humare bahus nahin hai..humare betis ki tarha hai....shefali se maafi maango...

(mansen and khushal shocked)

mansen: main isse maafi hargiz nahin maango ga...
gunvanti: galti shefali nahin..aapne kiye hai..
mansen: lekhen..gunvanti...
gunvanti(interrupts): maafi maange...
khushal; lekhen behena....
gunvanti: khushal..tum shoro maath ho jaana....

(mansen goes over 2 shefali...wid his head down...)

mansen: mujhe maaf kar dena shefali..
shefali: kar diya...its ok...
baisa: abh jao...yahan se....
LK: Dhrutrashtra yahan draupadi se maafi maang raha hai....kis mur phar aagaya hai yeh mahabharat....

(upstairs..in his room)

mansen: aaj mujhe uss shefali se maafi maangna parha...itne zilaat mujhe aaj thak nahin hui..khushal..
khushal: jeeja...teeno buhut chalak hai..kisi bhi tarha humare zilat karte hai..unn teeno ko hume haar deene hai...manasvi...shefali...aur bhoomika....kisi bhi tarha yeh teen bahus haar jaye....(grins)
mansen: aur mujhe pata hai kaise haare gi yeh bahus...(grins)

(manasvi....shefali..and bhoomi r in the hall)

shefali: bhabhi..mujhe kisi baat ka daar hai..
manasvi: kaisa daar..?
shefali: kyunki aaj papaji ko mujhse maafi maangna parha...aur..iss liye...gar unhe koi badla leene ka plan banaya phir..
bhoomi: bhabhi..aisa kuch nahin hoga....arre papa hai..ma-ji..baisa hai...bhabhi hai..main hoon...shruti..reeti hai...bade dadaji...arjun hai...aur jhetji hai...tho hpir kakasaheb kya kar sakti hai..?
shefali: haan..lkhen phir bhi mamaji aur papaji buhut dangerous hai....voh tho kuch bhi kar sakti hai..
manasvi: fikhar maath karo..shefali...dheeri dheeri sab kuch theek ho jayega...ok?
shefali: ok..

Precap: Mansen asks Bhoomi to put her thumb impression on the papers. Vasudev tells her to do so, but Manasvi forbids her. Bhoomi is in a dilemma.

Howz dat, ppl?

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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 11:43am | IP Logged
good one yaar........
kakasahib ko maafi mangni padi.....now he wount spare shefali.....lets c what happens....
tunna Goldie
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Posted: 02 April 2006 at 3:27am | IP Logged
lovely..... i wonder wat mansen's planning next.... Angry Angry ????
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Posted: 02 April 2006 at 4:40am | IP Logged
hey guys...updating episode 17 Big smile
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Episode 17

(Arjun-suraj-manasvi-bhoomi r at the dining table working)

arjun: bhaiyya...aaj hume mr. ahuja se baat karne chahe...aur..iss deal ko final karna chahe...
suraj: mujhe bhi aia lagta hai..isse pehle kakasaheb kuch bhi kare...hume kuch karna chahe...
bhoomi: arjun...erm..main aaj bauji ki ghar jaa sakte hoo..?
arjun: haan kyun nahin..
bhoomi: lekhen kaam ka..
manasvi: tum kaam aur business ki koi tension maat leena...suraj aur arjun haina..?
bhoomi: haan..aap bhi chale na bhabhi...plz...
manasvi: theek hai..lekhen khushi ko pick up bhi karna hai..
suraj: main pick up karoge usse..
manasvi: nahin..suraj tumhe business ka kaam pehle hai..khushi ko main pick up karloge....ok?
suraj: ok..
manasvi: chale..bhoomi?
bhoomi: chalo..
(both leave)

arjun: tho mujhe lagta hai..hume chalna chahe..office mein...
suraj: haan..chalo...
(both brothers leave)

(bhoomi and manasvi r at vasudev's house..mansen comes over)

mansen: namaste samdhanji..
vasudev: namaste....aap yahan?
mansne: main aapne bahu ki ghar mi hoon...kyun...acha nahin laga?
(bhoomi and manasvi sense sumthing suspicious)
bhoomi(whispers 2 manasvi): bhabhi...kakasaheb aur yahan...aur itne bade pyar se bul rahe hai..?
manasvi: zaroorar kuch garbaar hai..varna kaksaheb aise....
vasudev: tho kaise aana hua?
mansen: bas mujhe iss papers phar bhoomi ki thumb impression chahe...
(bhoomi and manasvi r shocked)
manasvi: kyun..kakasaheb...aise kis cheez ke liye?
mansen: business ki liye...
bhoomi: lekhen..jab thak arjun nahin hota...main thumb impression nahin laga sakte...
vasudev: beta..lagao...tumhae kakasaheb hai..
bhoomi(thinking): iss baat ka afsoos hai...bauji..ki yeh mere kakasaheb hai...kuch bhi kar sakte hai..
vasudev: bhoomi...lagao...
manasvi: nahin bhoomi....kaksaheb tumhareimpression ka galat advantage le sakte hai..jaise yuvraj ni kiya....
vasudev: dekho..manasvi..jo yuvraj kar sakta...mansen aisa nahin kar sakte...kyunki yeh inke bahu hai..
manasvi: agar bhoomi inke bahu hai..tho phir yeh yuvraj ki bhabhi hai..aur main bhi hoon...lekhen phir bhi yuvraj ni mere saath zarbardati karne ki koshish ki hai..inko rishtee ki koi care nahin hai..uncle...
bhoomi: bauji..main impression nahin lagao gi...
vasudev: beta...lagao na...kaunse badi baat hai...?
bhoomi: theek hai..lekhen mujhe pehle arjun aur jhetji ko bulani do...phir main sign karoge...(phones arjun...and tells him 2 come over)

(arjun-suraj come over)

arjun: kya hua..bhavri..?
bhoomi: kakasaheb chahti hai..ki main yahan impression lagao...
arjun: lekhen is paper phar likha kya hai..?
suraj: one minute..(reads the paper and is shocked)
manasvi: kya hua..suraj?
suraj: iss phar likha hai..ki main mrs bhoomika goenka...aapne pati arjun goenka aur jhet aur bhabhi suraj aur manasvi goenka ki permission se goenka khandan ki saare property mansen goenka ki hand over karte hoo....

(everyone is shocked)

arjun: aapse aur umeed bhi kya ho sakte hai..kakasaheb?
manasvi: aur uncle..apa chahti thi ki bhoomi aapna impression de aur..pata nahin kya loss hota humara...
vasudev(luking guilty): bhoomi...main..
bhoomi: koi baat nahin..bauji...koi baat nahin....
suraj: iss jurm ke liye..aap jail jaa sakte hai...
mansen: kaise jail jaoga...main...kaisa?
suraj: aise...(luks outside..police r there..)
inspector: mr mansen goenka..u r under arrest 4 the attempt of taking signatures through deceit..
(mansen is furious)

Precap: Yuvraj-Aksh have a fiery confrontration with Suraj-Arjun after hearing about Mansen's arrest.

Howz dat, ppl?
tunna Goldie
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Posted: 02 April 2006 at 11:42am | IP Logged
wow........... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lovely yaar... Clap      mansen behind bars Big smile    n bhoomi saved..... wish this had happened in the serial Big smile
great part
Mastang Senior Member
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Posted: 02 April 2006 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
gr8 yaaar......
kaash yeh kakasahib ..real serial main bhi jail main jaldi chale jaayain.......
good yaar.... Clap
Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 05 April 2006 at 10:05am | IP Logged
glad u liked it gals....updating episode 18 Big smile

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