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Posted: 18 years ago
Originally posted by: tunna

waiting already............. 😃

intazaar khatam....😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
waiting for the next episode..... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: bismazaman2000

waiting for the next episode..... 😃

already on it bismazaman...updating episode 19😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 19

(the grown-ups r in the hall)

baisa: abh sochna yeh hai..ki mansen ko bail kaise kare..
siddarth: baisa..mansen ni buhut bada gunaah karne ki koshish ki hai..bail kaise hoge...
gunvanti: agar...bhoomi ni aapne complaint wapis liya tho..
arjun: kabhi nahin!!!bhavri aapna complaint wapis nahin lege...
suraj: arjun...
arjun: lekhen bhaiyya...
manasvi: lekhen..agar kakasaheb ki badnami hoge..phir puri goenka parivar ki bhi hoge....
suraj: haan arjun..aapne parivaar ki izzat bachani ke liye...bhoomi ko aapna complaint wapis leena parega...
bhoomi: main iss ghar ki bahu hoo...mera farz baanta hai..iss ghar ko raksha karna...iss liye main aapna complaint wapis longe...
arjun: theek hai...aapne parivar ke liye....
suraj: thats better brother....
gunvanti: thank u bhoomi...mere situation ko samjha tumne...
bhoomi: nahin..gunvanti kaki..iss mein thanx kehne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai...
yuv(2 aksh): aapne sympathy dekh rahe hai...kaash..main inn 4 ko...uff...
aksh: relax...yuv..relax...abh dad wapis aayege..phir kuch plan karte hai..(grins)
yuv: theek kaha tumne....kuch plan karna parega...(grins)
shefali: phir police station kaun chaliga...?
bade dadaji: hud bhoomika jayege....
bhoomi: jee?
shaku: complaint tumne kiya...phir...
arjun: compliant bhavri nahin..maine aur bhaiyya kiya tha...
baisa: phir...tum dono jao...aur bhoomi ko saath lekhar jao...
suraj: jee baisa...
yuv: abh dad ko bail karke....dono bhai ke pehle haar hoge....
(arjun-suraj give a dirty luk 2 yuv-aksh)
arjun: chale bhaiyya...?
suraj: chalo..
(both r about 2 go....when manasvi grabs suraj's hand)
suraj: kya hua..manasvi?
manasvi: main saath chal sakte hoo..?
suraj: kyun..?
manasvi: bas aise...aapni pati ki saath jaana chahti hoo..(smiles)
suraj: ok...chalo...
bhoomi(2 arjun): sweet..na...?
arjun(luking at bhoomi): very sweet....and beautiful...
bhoomi: stop it..arjun...

(at the police station)

arjun: erm..inspector..mere patni....aapni complaint wapis leena chahti hai..
inspector: aap samjh thi hai..madam-ji..ki agar aapni complaint wapis liya..phir mansen bahar aa sakte hai..
bhoomi: jee...
inspector: ok...constable..chor do inhe...
(constable lets mansen out)

mansen: acha..hud mujhe arrest karvaya....aur tum dono ni mujhe bail kiya..
manasvi: iss ka galat fyda..maath uthaye...kaksaheb..humne aapni parivar ki izzat ko soch kar..yeh faisla liya hai..aapke hathar nahin..
suraj: manasvi theek kehti hai..kakasaheb...agar aap yahan rehti phir goenka parivaar ki baari mein kya baadnami hote..
mansen: chalo..aapni parivaar ka izzat tho socha...
arjun: whateva...chalr..bhavri..bhabhi....bhaiyya...?
bhoomi: chalo...
(the 4 leave..mansen leaves afterwards)

(the 4 and mansen come in)

baisa: mansen...yeh kya karne ki koshish ke tumne...?
mansen: baisa..aapne kaha ki main shefali se maafi maango...phir badla zaroori tha....
shefali: lekhen papaji..badla leena tha..phir mujhse lethi..bhoomi ni kya kiya..?
mansen: sirf bhoomi ni nahin..tum teen kiya..manasvi ki paas kangan hai..bhoomi sughandi creations ko join kiya hai..aur tum....
gunvanti: dekhiye...aapne bahus mein farq nahin karte..yeh tho humare betas jaise baarbaar hai...
mansen: gunvanti...uff...rehne do...
vishakha: aap tired honge papa....go and rest..
arjun: jee kakasaheb..arram se neend kariye...varna kya pata..kal aapke shanti ko...who knows...
suraj: hehe..aap arjun ki baat ko seriously maat lo...arram karliye...varna...kal aapke shanti ko kya ho sakta hai..who knows...
mansen(thinking): dono bhai ek jaise hai...i'll sort u out...

(the 4 r still in the hall)

arjun: erm....bhavri..maine socha ki hum dono...kahiin holiday ke liye..jaye...
bhoomi: kaha?
arjun: erm...kyun na...erm....paris jaye...
bhoomi: paris..?
arjun: haan...wahan...kitne romantic places hote hai...
suraj(whispers 2 arjun): arjun..paris itna romantic nahin hai...choose another place...
arjun: ok...erm..italy...yeah..italy..
suraj(whispers 2 arjun): erm...greece....nice one..
arjun: kyun na greece chale..
bhoomi: romantic hai...kya?
arjun: buhut...
bhoomi: chalo..phir..tickets book hogaye hai..?
arjun: main kal book kar tha hoo....ok..phir next week chalti hai...
bhoomi: theek hai..lekhen manasvi bhabhi aur jhetji ko bhi aapi honeymoon jaana chahe...
arjun: haan...iss kakasaheb ki tension main tho bhool gaya...bhaiyya...aap jayega..na..
suraj: erm...nahin..
bhoomi: arre...aise kaise../
arjun: bhabhi...some response...
manasvi: erm..nahin..aur khushi ka kya hoga..?
bhoomi: arre...khushi ko main luk after karoge..bas aap jao aapni honeymoon phar..
suraj: nahin..ek yeh business...
arjun: uff...business ko main handle karoga...ok...?
suraj: ok...
arjun: phir aap dono jayege...haina?
manasvi: theek hai..jayege...

Precap: Bhoomi discovers something shocking, meanwhile Arjun~Suraj have a face-to-face argument with Yuv-Aksh.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovely.... lovely... lovely...lovely.... 👏
sprry......i don hav any other words.... its amazing girl... do write soon... if possi'll check b4 leaving..
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Posted: 18 years ago
i can only say one thing IT'S AMAZING.....u should really write u have the potential 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok..ppl....updating episode 20... 😃
Shirley thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 20

(Arjun~Suraj r getting ready for office...arjun calls bhoomi 2 do his tie)

bhoomi: acha...arjun...ghar jaldi aana ok?
arjun: kyun..sab theek hai..?
bhoomi: bas..aise...u no..like that..
arjun: wah..itne english kahan se seeka tumne..?
bhoomi: manasvi bhabhi aur shefali bhabhi se...
arjun: nice improvement..ok..mere tie karo...
bhooi: yeh kya arjun..tum aapne tie bhi nahin kar sakte..?
arjun: kar sakta hoo..lekhen jab mere itne cute aur beautiful wife hai..phir main nahin kar sakta...
bhoomi: kyun..nahin?
arjun: kyunki main haar waqt uski taraf dekh tha hoo...
bhoomi(blushes): arjun...stop it...
arjun:kya hai..?
bhoomi(finishing doing the tie): acha..hogaye tumhare tie...abh jao...
arjun: jaata hoo...(kisses her on the forehead..and hugs her..)
bhoomi: so sweet...
arjun: acha...nashta ke liye chale..?
bhoomi: haan chalo...

(both go down...meanwhile suraj is getting ready 4 office)

manasvi: khushi..jao nashta karo..phir daddy tumhe school drop off karnege...ok?
khushi: ok..daddy..?
suraj: haan beta?
khushi: main neeche honge...aap jaldi karo..ok..?
suraj: ok..my chhwweet gal...(hugs her)
khushi: ok..main jaa rahe hoo..(leaves)
manasvi: acha...aaj dhir aaoge...?
suraj: kyun..?
manasvi: bas aise...
suraj: pata nahin..last minute phar kuch bhi aa sakta hai..
manasvi: ok..erm...tumhare tie...?
suraj: main hud kar longa...
manasvi: nahin..main karoge....
suraj: ok...
(manasvi does his tie...both luk into each other's eyes)
manasvi: acha...chale?
suraj: chalo...

(everyone finishes their breakfast...)

khushi: acha daddy..jaldi se mujhe school bhi jaana hai..
suraj: ok beta....abhi aaya...erm..arjun..tum jao..office..aur..main khushi ko drop karta hoo...theek hai..?
arjun: theek hai bhaiyya...
(suraj leaves wid khushi)
shaku: erm.manasvi..main soch rahe thi..ki kal holi hai..
shruti: haan mama...holi zaroor banaye gi hum...
(suddenly bhoomi feels unwell..and rushes 2 the washroom..and vomits...)

manasvi(going after her): bhoomi...kya hua?
bhoomi: pata nahin bhabhi..achanak..aise kya hogaya?
baisa: beta...tum check-up kar lo...
bhoomi: nahin..baisa...main theek hoo....
manasvi: bhoomi..ek baar check-up kar lo..
shefali: haan bhoomi..u no..in case..koi danger tho nahin hai..
bhoomi: theek hai..erm...manasvi bhabhi..aap mere saath chalenge...?
manasvi: haan kyun nahin...
shefali: baisa..mujhe lagta hai..ki bhoomi...ahem-ahem..
baisa: matlaab?
shefali: matlaab....(whispers 2 baisa)
baisa: han..yeh ho sakta hai...
bhoomi: kya ho sakta..?
arjun: kya hua...?
shaku: kuch nahin...tum office jao..abh thak surja bhi office mein hoga...
arjun; ok..aapna khayal rakhna bhavri...ok bye...
every1: bye...

(at the doctors clinic..bhoomi gets her tests done..and is waiting 4 the results)

bhoomi; bhabhi..kahiin koi serious baat tho nahin hai/
manasvi: fikhar na karo...sab theek hoga...
doctor: mrs bhoomika goenka..apke results ready hai..
bhoomi: theek hai...oh god..sab kuch theek hone deena...
manasvi: dont worry..bhoomi..
doctor: sit down..plz..
(bhoomi and manasvi sit down)
doctor: maine aapke tests ki thi...
bhoomi(worried): haan?
doctor: ek good news hai..
manasvi: kaise good news..?
doctor: mrs. goenka aap pregnant hai..
bhoomi(happy): kya? sach...main..main pregnant hoo..
manasi: oh..congrats bhoomi...(hugs her)
bhoomi: thank u bhabhi..and thank u doctor..
doctor: its ok..aur aap aapna ache tarha khayal rakhna hoga..
manasvi: dont worry doctor..hum sab hai..bhoomi ko khayal rakhni mein...chale bhoomi..?
bhoomi: theek hai..chalo...

(both reach outside the clinic)

bhoomi: mujhe arjun ko patana chahe...
manasvi: haan..lekhen usse ghar tho aane do...phir patana..
bhoomi: bhabhi..i'm so happy..
manasvi: i no..bhoomi...aur jaldi se ghar chale kar..yeh good news ko suna thi hai...ok?
bhoomi: ok..

(both reach heritage house...)

manasvi; erm...baisa..mama..papa..shefali..shruti..kahan tum log..?
baisa: kya hua manasvi..bhoomi heek thohai..?
manasvi: bhoomi..batao inku..
bhoomi(blushes): nahin..aap batao..
manasvi; bhoomi pregnant hai..
shaku: sach...congrats bhoomi
bhoomi: thank u...ma-ji..
shruti: finally..koi mujhe bua kehga...hehe...
shefali: so happy 4 u bhoomi..baisa...hume iss khushi ki liye..party rakhni chahe...
baisa: haan...tum sahee keh rahe hoo...
LK: mahabharat mein ek naya mur ayaa hai..abhimanyu ka aana...

Precap: Arjun~Suraj both get delayed at work and stay the whole night. Bhoomi is disappointed that Arjun didn't come home.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow hunny its gr8888888 , 👏 i love ur ff so much....... 😃
baaki waapas aakar check karoongi. 😳 i m going u know . 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
cool shirley..i jsut read this episode...u write very well..n after postin this..i'm gonna read 4rm start,,,sorry fer bein late though 😳 par great going... 👏