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Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!! - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwww its really superb.....gr8888888 imagination............plz cont. 😊
tunna thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
great!!!!!!!!!! lovely!!!!!!!! work of art surely!!!!
i think tum suraj ke dil ke haal bayan kar rahi ho ekdum.... keep it going lik this gal 👏
Shirley thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
hey..thanx ppl..4 the remarks....adding episode 13 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 13

(The wedding is going to take place. Suraj dressed in a white shirvani..and manasvi in a light pink lengha..wid embroidaery and matching jewllery...arjun is wearing a black suit wid gold shiny shirt..wid his collar open 😉 😛 😳 and bhoomi is wearing a lilac suit wid matching jewllery and hair..curled up..and the suit covered in embroidery..both couples are luking cute and gorgeous)

priest: larki ko bulai....
baisa: umm..shakuntala...jao manasvi aur bhoomi ko lao...
(shaku goes upstairs 2 fetch mansvi...bhoomi is puts teh bridal dupatta on manasvi...)

shaku: arre manasvi..buhut khoobsurat lag rahe hoo...
bhoomi: koi shaq..ma-ji...nazar na lage...(puts a bit of eye liner on the back of neck)
shaku: chalo..beta..punditji bula rahe hai....
bhoomi: chale bhabhi...
manasvi: chalo..(takes a last glance at satya's photo..then leaves..and comes downstairs..both suraj-manasvi sit down at the mandap)

siddarth: beta...varmalas kaha hai..?
arjun: yahan hai....yeh lao bhaiyya...
(suraj takes the garland and puts it around manasvi...)
shaku: beta....tumhare bari..(manasvi picks up..the garland..waits 4 a while..then puts it around suraj)

punditji: abh..pheras ka waqt hogaya hai..
arjun: bhavri...aao..
bhoomi: theek hai..(goes up..and ties the bridal knot..both s-m get up..and take the pheras...)

pundit: sindoor aur mangulsutra....
suraj:jee...(puts the sindoor in manasvi's hairline..and the mangulsutra around her neck...the wedding is over...and both couples are in their rooms)

(arjun-bhoomi in their room)

arjun: pata hai..bhavri....aaj main buhut khush hoo...
bhoomi: aisa kyun?
arjun: aaj pehle baar..humare paivaar main khushi phirse wapis aa rahe hai...abh manasvi bhabhi ki shaadi hogaye hai..aur mujhe pata hai...ki bhaiyya unka buhut khayal karenge....aur...hum dono bhi ek hogaye hai..
bhoomi(blushes): arjun....
arjun: kya arjun...?
bhoomi: aise baatein maat karo....(about 2 go..but arjun grabs her hand)
arjun: mujhse itne door kyun jaa rahe hoo....?
bhoomi: tumse kaha door jaa rahe hoo....haar waqt tum mere paas ho..door ho kar bhi..aur paas ho kar bhi..
arjun(arms around her):lekhen..phir bhi...
bhoomi: jhetji theek kehte thi..tum control se bahar nikal thi ja rahe hoo...
arjun: bhavri...pyar mein koi control nahin hota....
bhoomi: arjun..raat hogaye hai...bed time..
arjun; nahin...raat ka matlaab romance time...
bhoomi(blushes): arjun....tum bhi...
(arjun coming towards bhoomi...but a knock on the door)
arjun: kaun hai voh?
bhoomi: main thi..
arjun: huh..(sees bhoomi knocking on the dressing table)
bhoomi; daar gaye....?
arjun: bhavri..?
bhoomi: hmmm...
arjun(puts her on the bed): i luv u....
bhoomi: i luv u too...

(next scene: suraj and manasvi r in their room)

suraj: manasvi...tum iss shaadi se khush tho hoo?
manasvi: haan...main khush hoo...
suraj: erm...main um..jaanta hoo..ki main satya ki jegga nahin li sakta....aur...
manasvi: isse baari mein main tumse baat karna chahti thi..
suraj: kaho...
manasvi: dekho suraj..abhi mujhe thora waqt chahe...iss rishtaa ko accept karne mein...
suraj: koi baat nahin..ajb thak tum aapne maarzi se iss rishtaa ko accept nahin karte....main theek hoo...
manasvi: thanx..4 nderstanding..
suraj: no worries...
(manasvi goes towards the sofa)
suraj: arre..tum sofa phar kyun...tum bed sleep karna..
manasvi; lekhen..
suraj: lekhen kuch nahin...i'll sleep on the sofa..and u sleep on the bed...
manasvi: ok....(manasvi lies on the bed, and closes her eyes. She sees a dream in which a guy dressed in black is standing wid his back turned to her. Manasvi thinking its Satya runs up2 the guy..and touches his shoulder..the guy turns around and manasvi sees its suraj..manasvi wakes up)

manasvi(thinking): mujhe aise sapne kyun aate hai...mujhe kya ho raha hai...zaban phar satya ka naam..lekhen dil mein..suraj..?

Precap: Shefali tells Baisa that now Manasvi is a bahu of the parivaar again, the kangan should go to her. Yuv is furious.

Howz dat, ppl?
tunna thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
whoopie 👏
suraj n manasvi ki shaadi ho gayi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great part girl.......
Mastang thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
wowww..yaaar...its really good....
at last shaadi ho gayi.....cant wait 2 c romantic scenes b/e them... 😳 ..yaaar kaash aisa real serial main bhi hota........
goood work.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
u rite really nice..i started reading ur ff from yesterday and completed it today its reallyyy gud..u should rite serials in real life
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 👏 👏 congrats shirley for starting a new ff
itz wonderful 😉
Shirley thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
thanx ppl 4 yur comments....updating episode 14 😃

Shirley thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 14

(The whole goenka parivaar is downstairs...shefali wnats 2 say sumthing)

shefali: bausa...main kuch kehna chahti hoo...
baisa: haan..kaho shefali...
shefali: baisa..abh manasvi bhabhi phirse iss ghar ki bahu bangaye hai..phir iuss kangan ka ziada haaq unka hai..
(yuv and his family r shocked)
baisa: matlaab...?
shefali: matlaab..yeh kangan manasvi bhabhi ko deena chahe...
yuv(angry): shefali..dimag kharab hogaya tumhara?
shefsli: yuv..plz...bhabhi humse badi hai..aur badi sadysya ko kangan milna chahe..
yuv: shefali..tum haar waqt arjun aur uski parivaar ka saath deeti hoo...aapne parivaar ka socho...
shefali: aapne..parivaar ka soch rahe hoo yuv...
bhoomi: bhabhi..plz...yuvraj ko gussa hoga...yeh kangan aapke paas rahe...phir ziada better hoga...
shefali: nahin bhoomi..
bade dadaji: lekhen..maansvi kiya chahti hai..beta..tum kya kehna chahti hoo?
manasvi: mujhe yeh kangan..nahin chahe....shefali buhut acha kaam kar rahe hai..ghar ko luk after karne mein.,.aur..
shefali: lekhen..bhabhi...kangan mujhe iss liye mila..kyunki aap iss ghar ki beti thi..abh aap bahu bangaye hai...tho aapka zaida haaq banta hai...
manasvi: lekhen shefali...
shaku: manasvi...shefali tho theek keh rahe hai...
baisa: haan manasvi...
(shefali takes off the kangan and gives it to manasvi..mnaasvi puts it on her wrist..mansen and khushal r furious)

(upstairs ...mansen and khushal discuss about the kangan)

mansen: dekha khushal...yeh siddarth aur uski parivaar aisa kya jaadoo hai..jo haar insaan uska saath deeta hai...pehle suraj...phir shefali..phir kaun hoga...gunvanti...phir vishakha...phir aksh..aur phir vikram...aur hum sab akele ho jayege..
khushal: jeeja...aisa kuch nahin hoga....bas yuv ki nazar mein shefali ko galat banao....aur yuv ussi divorce deega...aur yeh shefali ki tension kaam ho jayege...
mansen: khushal..mere sabse baari tension hai..manasvi aur uska yeh kangan...voh phirse power mein hogaye hai..
khushal: arre jeeja..aap tho aise kar rahe hai..jaise manasvi koi politician hai...humare tension manasvi nahin..voh do bhai hai..arjun aur suraj...
mansen: un dono ko main nahin choroga....aaj suraj humare saath hota...phir manasvi humare saath hote...aur yeh sab nahin hota...iss yuv ki galati...
khushal: jeeja...abh hume un dono bhai ka baarbadi ka sochna chahe...(grins)

(manasvi is upstairs....suraj is wid her)

manasvi: suraj..maine theek faisla kya...yeh kangan wapis lekhar...?
suraj: nahin..yeh koi galat kaam nahin hai....kangan ka ziada haaqdar tum ho...
manasvi: really...?
suraj: really...
manasvi: thanx..
suraj: no worries....

Precap: Himraj Dadaji makes 4 new caretakers of the whole property. Mansen is shocked to hear the results.

Howz dat, ppl?