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Shirley thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 5

(Arjun-Suraj r discussing their business issues....)

arjun: bhaiyya...mujhe lagta hai ki...yeh contract leena chahe?
suraj: main bhi yeh chahtha hoo...aur hume careful hona chahe....kyunki humara ek loss bhi kakasaheb ke liye jeeth ho sakte hai..
arjun: i agree....acha...main zara bhavri ko bata hoo...main abhi aaya...
suraj: sure....take yur time...(arjun leaves..mamaji comes)
mamaji: kaise ho...bhanje?
suraj: aap....?
mamaji: dekho....jo bhi hua...yuvraj ko maaf kar do....
suraj: mamaji...jhuth boli wale mujhe ache nahin lagte...
mamaji: lekhen...
suraj: lekhen kuch nahin....main aapne parivaar sa saath donga....arjun ka saath...bhoomi ka saath...aur....jo saath aap aur kakasaheb ki saath karta tha...voh mera ateet hai....my past...(leaves)
mamaji(thinking): aabh kaniye bachaiye....tumhare manasvi ko...hehehe(grins)

(manasvi is in her room...yuv comes in)

manasvi: yuv...kya baat hai?
yuv: tum log samjhthi kya hoo aapni aap ko?
manasvi: kya hua...aise kyun..?
yuv: shut up.....shut up....
manasvi: dekho yuv...better hoga..agar tum yahan se chali jao...varna...
yuv: varna...varna kya...?
manasvi: varna..acha nahin hoga....
yuv: theek kaha tumne....acha nahin hoga....(pushes her down on her sofa...and tries 2 force himself on her...maansvi tries 2 scream...but yuv covers her mouth...manasvi deliberately knocks over a vase...the vase breaks and suraj hears the noise...and goes in manasvi's room...and is shocked 2 see yuv misbehaving wid manasvi...)

suraj: YUVRAJ!!!!!
yuv(turns around): main...voh...
(manasvi's sari comes off her shoulder...there are scratchmarks on her arms....manasvi puts her sari over her shoulder...suraj takes off his jacket...and wraps it around manasvi)

suraj: manasvi....jao..mere kamri mein...jao..
manasvi: lekhen...?
suraj: jao...
manasvi: theek hai...(leaves)
suraj: himmath kasie hui tumhare.....huh....(slaps him hard...)...HIMMATH KAISE HUI TERE......manasvi ki saath aisa.....shame on you.....
yuv: haan....haan...maine manasvi ki saath aisa kiya....tho phir mera badla pura hui...
suraj: badla leena tha....tho mujhe lo...lekhen maansvi ki saath....
yuv: kyunki...main jaanta tha...ki manasvi ko kuch hogaya tho phir tum zinda ho kar bhi tum jee nahin paogi....kyunki tum manasvi si buhut mohabbat karte hoo....
suraj:just shut up....shut up.....chalo mere saath.....chalo....aaj tumhara ek aur insult nahin kiya tho phir mera naam suraj nahin....(pulls him forcefully downstairs..)
suraj: mansen goenka.....kaha hai aap aapna chehra chupa kar.....samne aaye...
mansen: kya hai....kyun itna shout kar rahe hoo....?
suraj: dekhe.....aapni beta ki kartoot ko dekhe....iss ne ek innocent larki ki izzat cheene ki kohsish ki hai...
gunvanti: kya matlaab?
suraj: matlaab...yeh gunvanti kaki....ki yuvraj ni manasvi ki zabardasti karne ki koshish kiya hai...(everyone is shocked...tears come out of shefali's eyes...and at the same time is angry)
(shefali wallks up2 yuv)
shefali: how could u.....HOW COULD U...YUV?????
LK: kaise mor aagaya hai iss mahabharat mein...?
shefali: how dare u....try 2 force yurself on manasvi bhabhi....how dare you(keeps slapping him...continously)
yuv: shefali...voh...
shefali(interrupts): SHUT UP.....dont take myname wid that dirty tongue of yurs.....I....cant live wid u anymore yuv....how did u do that...?
yuv: because...i wanted 2 avenge...
gunvanti: yuv...today...u abused my mamta...meremamata ki zilat kiya tumne.....u insulted my womb....i'm not yur mom.....u cant be my son...i had a true son...suraj...but..bcoz of that misuse cheque situation i lost him....
mansen: I did not expect this from u...yuv....
suraj: aaj main aapke saath sab rishtee jala donga main...(holds out the documents which he signed that made him mansen's legal heir...)
suraj: pehchana isse....yeh voh documents hai..jo maine sign kie hai...phir main aapka beta ban gaya....aur aaj main usse jala donga...(burns it...and what is left of the document r just ashes..)
suraj: yurs and my relationship is just bits of ashes....aaj ki baad aap sirf mere liye kakasaheb hai...mera baap....aur ma....yeh dono hai(points 2 siddath and shaku)(and then leaves)

(manasvi is upstairs, sitting on the bed...suraj comes in and sits next 2 her on the bed)

suraj: manasvi....r u ok now?
manasvi: he....tried....2...(stars cring and hugs suraj tightly...suraj is surprised..but hugs back)
suraj: sshh.....its ok.....main hoon na...
manasvi(hugging suraj more tight): dont leave me....satya left me...now u dont leave me...plz...
suraj: i wont....i promise i wont....(hugs her back)
suraj: ok...u should go 2 bed now....ok?
manasvi: ok....(lies down....suraj puts the blanket on her)
suraj: and manasvi...i want u 2 be the old manasvi again...
manasvi: meaning?
suraj: one that neva luks dul...one that used 2 luk really bright...full of life...
manasvi(smiles): ok...(suraj leaves)

Precap:Shefali tells everyone that she has an announcement, meanwhile Arjun wants to confess something to Bhoomi.

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tunna thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
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Shirley thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 6

(morning time...and manasvi comes downstairs dressed in a pale yellow trouser suit, hair plaited from the sides, a pair of earrings and a necklace..)

shaku: arre manasvi beta...aaj tum buhut khoobsurat lag rahe hoo..
manasvi: thank u..mummy....
bhoomi: kya hua..bhabhi aaj itne jewllery aur dresses...koi special din hai kya?
manasvi: nahin..aaj kisi dost ni request kiya hai..iss liye..
LK: haan..suraj tumse kaha hai..aur tum inkar kaise kar sakte hoo....after all...tumhara hone wala pati jo hai....
arjun: wow bhabhi...kitne achi lag rahe hai aap....buhut patli aur khoobsurat..kaash bhavri aapke tarha hote
bhoomi: matlaab...main moti hoo...?
arjun: kaine aisa kabh kaha?
manasvi: acha..umm..khushi kaha hai..?
suraj: oh...khushi school gaye hai..maine usse drop kiya hai...
manasvi: oh..thanx...tum mere liye itna kuch karte hoo..aur main...
suraj: bas...dost kabhi bhi issan nahin karte....rite?
manasvi: rite..
suraj: aao bhoomi..tum bhi nashta karo...aur vaise bhoomi....humara ek meeting hai..tumhara uss meeting mein hona bhi buhut zaroori hai..
bhoomi: theek hai...abhi nashta karte hoo..phir chalti hai...
(shefali comes down)

shefali: um....bade dadaji..baisa....main aap sabse baat karna chahti hoo
baisa: haan beta..kya baat hai..?
shefali: main yuvraj ko divorce karna chahti hoo? (everyone is shocked)..
yuv(stands up): lekhen...kyun..maine kiya kya hai..?
shefali: kya kiya...tumne manasvi bhabhi ki saath jo bhi kuch kiya..uss ki vaijaise...
manasvi: lekhen shefali..uss choti baat ko lekhar...
shefali: choti baat...manasvi bhabhi..yuvraj aapka devar hai...aur kya ek devar aapne bhabhi ki saath aisa kuch karta hai kya?
manasvi: lekhen shefali...
bhoomi: bhabhi....main shefali bhabhi ki saath saymaath hoo...
shefali: aur vaise...thalak ki baad...yeh kangan main baisa ko wapis kar dongi...iss ka asli haaq dar..bhoomi hai
bhoomi: nahin baisa....mujhe yeh kangan nahin chahe...aur shefali bhabhi...yuvraj ko maaf kar deena...bechari se galti hui hai...
shefali: nahin...pehle tumhare arjun ko barbaad karne ko koshish kiye...phir suraj ka isthamal kiya...phir manasvi bhabhi ki saath...aise mard ki saath maine nahin rahe sakte...
suraj: shefali....relax...yuv ko thora waqt do..aur yeh main yuv ki liye nahin...tumhare benefit ke liye keh raha hoo....theek hai...
shefali(wipes her tears): theek hai....(puts her head on suraj's shoulder, suraj consoles her)
arjun: umm....bhaiyya....chale office...ka time hogaya hai..
suraj: acha..main chalta hoo...(they leave)

(arjun-suraj r at office..bhoomi needs 2 go home...2 take care of himraj dadaji...arjun is sitting down..luking upset)

suraj: kya hua?
arjun: huh?
suraj: kya hua?
arjun: oh..kuch nahin.....
suraj: kuch tho hua hai...tumhare chehre se pata chalta hai...
arjun: umm....bhaiyya voh...umm...bhavri...
suraj: kya hua bhoomi ko..?
arjun: bhaiyya....main bhavri se pyar karta ho... 😳 😃
suraj: haan...tho...har pati aapne patni se pyar karta hai
arjun: umm...bhaiyya jab mere aur bhavri ki shaadi hui thi...
suraj: haan...?
arjun: abhi maine usse accept nahin kiya...
suraj(surprised): kya....?
arjun: haan...lekhen....abh main usse accept karna chahta hoo...kyunki...kyunki.....usse pyar karta hoo....
suraj: theek hai...tho phir jao...aur usse batao...
arjun: haan..lekhen koi na koi aata rehta hai..kabhi mummy...kabhi bhabhi...kabhi ghanu kaka....aur...
suraj: samjh gaya....aisa karta hoo...ki aaj main dekhtha hoo..ki tumhe aur bhoomi ko koi nahin disturb nahin karega...aur main tum dono ki liye tockets book karta hoo....italy ki liye...
arjun: italy kyun?
suraj: hmm..switzerland..typical romantic place...
arjun: ok...bhaiyya...u r the best....
suraj: pata hai..batani ki koi zaroorat nahin hai...

(in the evening...)

bade dadaji: acha bachao....hum sab jaa rahe hai...
manasvi: theek hai..gud nite...
shaku: gud nite...(everyone leaves, except arjun-bhoomi-suraj-manasvi)
arjun: umm..bhavri...chale...mujhe koi file chahe thi...?
bhoomi: theek hai...dekhti hoo...(both go upstairs..)
manasvi: tho suraj...umm....kaam kaisa chal raha hai..?
suraj: theek....kyun?
manasvi: suraj..ek baat kaho..?
suraj: haan kaho..
manasvi: main ghar phar rahe kar..buhut bored hogaye hoo....main kuch karna chahti hoo...apne do pairon phar kara hona chahti hoo..
suraj: wow...sach...yeh tho achi baat hai....
manasvi: lekhen.....umm....bura na maano..tho kaho kuch?
suraj: kya..kaho na...
manasvi: main....business karna chahti hoo...
suraj: business?
manasvi: haan...mere dil ki sabse bada armaan yeh tha..ki main business karo....
suraj: haan...tho phir...aisa karte hai..ki hum dono aaj se office chalti hai...
manasvi: acha....?
suraj: haan....arjun bhi yeh chahta hoga..ki tum office aaya karo...
manasvi: theek hai...
suraj: vaise..aaj itne bright dress aur jewllery kyun?
maansvi: tumne kaha tha..ki tumhe purani manasvi chae..
suraj: mere baat ko tumne suni...?
manasvi: haan...ki dost ni kaha..
suraj: buhut achi lagti hoo...u luk pretty...
manasvi: thanx....

(upstairs, bhoomi is trying 2 find the file...arjun walls up2 her)

bhoomi: arjun...voh file nahin mil rahe hai..
arjun: rehni do...vaise mujhe voh file nahin chahe?
bhoomi: tho hpir kya chahe?
arjun: tum...
bhoomi: kya..?
arjun: mujhe tum chahe...i want u...
bhoomi: yeh kaise baatein kar rahe hoo...?
arjun(coming towards bhoomi):tumse main door nahin reh sakta...kabse mujhe isse pal ka intazaar tha...
bhoomi: kaisa pal...
arjun: voh pal...jo main kaho ga...ki...(whispers)....I love......u.....
bhoomi(blushes): arjun....
arjun(puts his finger on her lips): kuch maat kaho...kuch maat kaho....aaj sirf hum dono ki hamoshi boligi....(makes bhoomi sit on the bed gently)
bhoomi: arjun......main bhi tumse pyar karte hoo....i love....u too......(hugs him...arjun hugs her tightly....and then....arjun opens bhoomi's hair loose...and takes off her earrings, and takes off her necklace, and kisses her on the forehead, then on the cheek, and on the neck...)
arjun: main tumhare beegair jee nahin sakta....(holds her wrists tight...and takes off her bangles...)
bhoomi: arjun...ek vaada karo...
arjun: hmm...
bhoomi(holding arjun tightly): tum kabhi bhi mujhe chor kar nahin jaogi....neva leave me....
arjun: kabhi nahin...neva...(the lights switch off, arjun-bhoomi r close together....)
LK: yeh tho hona hi tha...

Precap: Manasvi gets ready for her first day of work, meanwhile Arjun is uncontrollable of his feelings for Bhoomi.

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Posted: 18 years ago
WOOOOWWW....it si jus tooooooooooo goooooood shirley........ 👏
tunna thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
lovely girlllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll............ ..........................................        arjun-bhoomi scene is fab..... 👏   s-m one no less... 👏 👏 .n even the part where shefali comes is great... (though for a while mujhe laga ab shefali suraj par fida ho jayegi 😕 😆 )
plz update it soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey lovely shir........ 😉
arjun bhoomi scenes were really fantastic...soooooooooo romantic... 😳
bas ab suraj aur manasvi ki chemistry dekhni baaqi hai.... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
so romantic.i did'nt no that u cud write such romantic scenes
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG OMG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 shirley that was AMAZING!!! im telling u man......i abosolutley loved it!!!!!!!! 👏
great writer u are!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 7

(the next day starts off wid a fresh morning..bhoomi is still asleep in arjun's arms..suddenly the alarm clock rings)

bhoomi: oh...arre arjun...wake up....alarm has started ringing...
arjun(still asleep): huh....bhavri...(gets a pillow..thinking its bhoomi..and starts hugging it...)...mm....bhavri...tum itne patli aur soft kaise hogaye hoo?
bhoomi: kyunki...voh main nahin...voh ek pillow hai..
arjun(wakes up): huh...bhavri...mujhe office nahin jaana....
bhoomi: jaldi sey...uthao...(arjun pulls bhoomi towards himself)
arjun: ek condition phar...
bhoomi: kya?
arjun: mujhe ek kiss do..
bhoomi(blushes): nahin...ofice ka time hogaya hai...
arjun: plz...just one....
bhoomi: um...ok..(kisses him on the cheek..but arjun holds her back still)
arjun: bhavri...kiss cheek phar nahin...yahan karte hai...(points 2 the lips)
bhoomi: arjun..plz...
arjun: bhavri..?
bhoomi: umm...(comes close...and kisses arjun lightly)
bhoomi: now..go...
arjun(still holding bhoomi back): bhavri..?
bhoomi: abh kya hai..now what?
arjun: i luv u...
bhoomi: i luv u too....
bhoomi: abh jaldi se.....get dressed....
arjun: ok....(arjun quickly gets dressed...and opens the door..suraj is waiitng 4 him..)
suraj: kaise ho..arjun?
arjun: theek hoo....
suraj: mujhe laga ki tumhare sehat theek nahin thi...
arjun: kyun..kya hua?
suraj: kuch nahin..jaldi se chalo...office ka time hogaya hai...
arjun: ok...ready hoo....
suraj: haan lekhen...aapne pants ko tho handle karo..(leaves)
arjun: huh...? (sees that he is wearing his pants the wrong way)...oh god....bhaiyya ki samne...uff....
bhoomi: kya hua..arjun?
arjun: i...erm....wore my pants the wrong way..when bhaiyya came in...
(bhoomi bursts out laughing)
arjun: ha-ha-ha....laugh...so nice of u...laughing at yur own husband.....
bhoomi: uff....arjun...i told u....after such nites...u cant handle yur brain...
arjun: ssshhh.....now.....make sure...the other family members dont find out about this...
(arjun-bhoomi go down...)
shruti: oh..hi..arjun bhaiyya...
arjun: hi....
preeti: kyun...arjun bhaiyya...had some problems wid yur trousers..?
(the whole family starts laughing)
arjun: who told u that? (sees suraj sniggering)
suraj: umm....manasvi...where is she....umm..i'll go and check up on her
arjun: oh...u r not going anywehre...bhaiyya
suraj: why not..?
arjun: bcoz....this is why..(starts chasing him...both brothers r going around the house...and accidently bump into mansen and his family..)
suraj: oh sorry..kakasaheb...but i need 2 run..(starts running)
arjun: hey...bhaiyya....aaj aap mere haath sey nahin bachi gi...
mansen: uff...dono abhi bachay hai...
(both brothers r tired...and take a break)
arjun: bhaiyya...u r jsut like satya bhaiyya...i neva get 2 catch him..
suraj: huh...what?
(bhoomi hears this)
bhoomi: if.....jhetji cna take satya's place as a brother...then he defintely cna take the place of a husband...
LK: yeh tum buhut acha soch rahe hoo bhoomi.....arre manasvi puri zindagi akele kaise spend kar sakte hai..lekhen voh maani gi ya nhain...yeh tum socho..
bhoomi: manasvi bhabhi tho...agree anhin karegi..lekhen...

(upstars manasvi picks her churidaar dress for office...suraj joins her)

manasvi: suraj...yeh dress kaisa hai..(shows him the churidaar dress)
suraj: hmm..acha hai.,..lekhen tum yeh lagao...
manasvi: kya..?(sees a blouse, blazer and a skirt)
manasvi: skirt?
suraj: koi baat nahin...its below the knees...
manasvi: hmm...but skirts r tight..and...
suraj: neva mind manasvi...u no..the office luk is important...
manasvi: hmm..ok...
(later manasvi comes down wearing the hair loose, a skirt..while blouse and a black blazer)

bhoomi: arre wah..bhabhi..u luk so smart and different...
manasvi: thanx bhoomi...
arjun: acha bhavri...chale?
bhoomi: haan chalo...
suraj: umm...hum dono bhi chale..?
manasvi: haan...lets go....
suraj(whispers 2 arjun): just control yur romantic feelings....
arjun: huh...oh...yeah..i will...
suraj: gud..ok...bye....everybody..

Precap: Suraj~Manasvi begin their first day, meanwhile Mansen plans sumthing against the two brothers.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 jod shirley this all claps are for u dear...
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