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Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!!

Shirley IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 11:27am | IP Logged

ok...this fanfic will continue from where suraj was holding manasvi's hand in his......

Manasvi: plz....suraj maath jao...yeh parivaar tumhare bina adoora hoga...khushi...mummy...bhoomi...arjun...

Suraj: arjun kyun adoora mesoos karega...voh tho abhi mujhe dushman samjhtha hai...

Manasvi: lekhen mera kya hoga...?

Suraj: erm....lekhen manasvi...amin ek aise ghar mein nahin reh sakte jahan....jhuth aur fareeb ka raj hai...mansen kakasaheb aur yuv ki saath main nahin reh sakta...

Manasvi: kaun kehta hai..ki tum kakasaheb ki beta bankar raho...siddarth papa ki tho beta ban sakte hoo..haina?

suraj(luking at manasvi): lekhen arjun ki yeh nafrat main nahin bardaash kar sakta hoo....baar baar voh mujhe ek bhai ki tarha nahin...ek dushman ki tarha dekhtha hai....

manasvi: arjun...nadan hai....abhi bacho ki tarha....lekhen.....hum sab tumhare zaroorat hai...aur khushi ka kya hoga...tumhare aur khushi ki kitne chalte hai...

suraj: manasvi.....voh...

manasvi(folds her hands): plz...hume chor kar maath jao...aaj ek dost pehle baa kuch maang rahe hai....

suraj(takes her hands into his his): theek hai...nahin jaaoga....ek dost ni ek request kya hai..tho phir nahin jaoga...

manasvi(smiles): thank u...so much....

suraj: hey...dost kabhi bhi ek doosri ko thank u nahin kehte.....rite?

manasvi: hmm....rite...

(bhoomi comes in)

bhoomi: arre...manasvi bhabhi.....kya hua..?

manasvi; suraj abh humare saath rehega...

suraj: kyunki manasvi ni request kiya hai...aur main iska request kaise inkar karta..

bhoomi: so sweet of u...surajji...abh ki tarha bhai ka koi mukabla nahin ho skata....

suraj; acha.....koi kaam tha.,..bhoomi?

bhoomi: haan....voh baisa aur bade dadaji.....bula rahe thi...aur vaise kakasaheb aur yuvraj bhaiyya bhi aapse kuch kehna chahti thi...

suraj(luking angry): kehne ko abh kya baaqi hai?

manasvi: suraj....arram se...nicely..huh?

suraj: theek hai...chalo....(leaves)

manasvi: chale bhoomi...

bhoomi; haan theek hai...(both leave)

Precap: Mansen and Yuv ask Suraj for forgiveness, Suraj refuses to forgive them. Manasvi feels happy over Suraj's reaction.

Howz dat, ppl?

fizzles IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 11:34am | IP Logged
sweet!!!! Clap
Mastang Senior Member
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 11:52am | IP Logged
hey not bad......yaar agar yeh real saarthi story main rahe to kiya hi baat hai.....
waise good yaar....
Suraj_Kiran Senior Member
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
That was fantastic.Keep it up. Clap
diya7000 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
Very nice Shirley.
amisha_ashvini Newbie
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
sahi hain shirleyy
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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 1:05am | IP Logged
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tunna Goldie
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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 2:23am | IP Logged
hey.... good 1... nice going gal.. main 2 din nahi ayi n u started off with a new1.. Wink LOL
but its lovely......hopefully saarthi mein bhi kuch aisa hi ho jata.. but seems suraj has forgiven kaka saheb...
but there's still hope.. waha nahi to yaha sahi jaldi suraj-manasvi ki shaadi ho jayegi... Smile Wink

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