Ekta-part 3

kitty468 IF-Dazzler

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ok im starting a new fan fic. im sorry abt the pervious one. but its me, i dont really put endings to my stories.  Confused . i cant think of a deccent one. this new fan fic, is how KA started but continues without the pregnancies, divorce n remarriage stuff. n the characters r alittle different hope u like it.  today  ill post the characters n liitle bit of the story line.

Anjali- Sweet, caring, nice, hard working and simple, bubbly n cheerful  girl. Loves kavy.

Anjum- Anjali's twin sis, she is like anjali but a little different, she is more bindaas, hangs out with guyz, n more rough. bad points possessive. she has a crush on sum1.  her love interest is a surprise.

Disha- is anjali's college friend, she is quiet n a sensitive girl. she encourages anjali alot, the back bone of anjali. basically she is there in all difficult times.

Ruhina- I know why add her, but she really doesnt paly a role, like get a dialogue, but is a victim of abuse.

Arpita- Remember the crazy arpita in the begining always behind yug. she continues to be, n quite happy that way.

ok thats the girls, now the guyz

Kavya- wats there to say. KA

Shlok- he is totally different in here, he is cheerful, a little crazy, n funny. n stands for his rights, helps anjali alot. u'll get to know in the first few parts.

Yug- the bad guy behind anjali n uses arpita alot. he understands only the lang of revenge.

Vansh- where did he cum from, a competitor of the Nandas, n wants to take over their company. he is sly, n has a unique way of impressing the nandas n fooling them .

the last guyz is unknown, wont tell- suspense. but without him, n his wife. no plan works.

There is also Vanshita n Nitya ji the base of the story.

the trouble makers, only want money, greedy, n selfish. n out to trouble their bahus. with their wicked plans, they try to get rid of kavy. both hate each other n immense competition who will get the whole property.

oh how can i forget Sandeep is there too. he is only 18 here, just starting college, n looking around for girls, but cant find one. i his tendency of forgetting.

shlok is vanshita's child, n kavya is not nitya's child as in serial. but both r only a month apart n almost like twin bro's. but becoz kavy is more responsible he acts like the big bro.

ill write my first part in the nite. hope u like it

Edited by kitty468 - 11 March 2006 at 5:24pm

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wow kitty Wink cat wait 4 ur new fan-fic Embarrassed Clap
interesting characters n thanx alot 4 putting yug as da bad guy Embarrassed LOL
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 11:29am | IP Logged
Clap its sounds gr8 cant wait!!!
kitty468 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 11:43am | IP Logged

In the plane:
Kavya- Why r u crying bro? U shud be happy u'll be seeing ur parents after 2 yrs.
Shlok-Im not crying becoz of that. Till now we were in college though it was alot of hard work n studying we still had a lot fun, u now. but now (crying)
Kavya- God, wat now?
Shlok- we will be working day n nite, man i want to take a break this summer holz, go around see things. once we start work there r no holidays breaks, only the 1 day public holidays once in a while.
Kavya- think postive, dont u want to see that girl. (teasingly, n he winks).
Shlok's face lightens up n smiles continuously. n humming the song mere kayalon ki malika, charoon taraf tere....
the rest of the flight they dont talk. Kavya is busy reading the business week magzine, n shlok listening to music.

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gud start kitty Wink Clap continue soon Embarrassed
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
thats gr8 kitty Wink Tongue
do continue Big smile Tongue
kitty468 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 March 2006 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
sorry the first part was small, i realised that i had a class in 2 mins.

Part 2
Shlok flipping the channels, as there is nothing worthwile coming as TV.

Kavya busy with work in the study.

Suddenly shlok stops on ZEE tv. the title of tumhari disha is going on, he dreams of Disha n him together.
maan se maan ka jo rishta hai.....
tumhari Disha.....
He starts to dance with imaginary disha.

Kavya cums in and sees this, he quickly calls sandeep, ruhina n arpita. ruhina cums with a video cam, n records him dancing n singing.

Bauji cums in
Bauji- are putr tum sab yahan deewar the piche chupke chupke kya dekh raho ho (children why r u all hidin behind the wall n peekin into the living room)

Arpita- Bauji udr toh dekkho shlok ko.( see shlok there)

Bauji goes into the living room towards shlok, everybody tries to stop him. He taps shloks on the shoulders. raises his eyebrows and asks

kya kar rahe ho, kisse bat kar rahe ho.

Shlok is utterly embaressed, looks down at the floor as if a punishment was just given to him.

Shlok- jee bauji, kuch nahi. bas idar udar ghar ka design dekh raha tha.

shlok quickly runs away before bauji questinos him anymore. then an arm stops him from entering his room.

ruhina- kahan ja rahe ho bhai. pata hai is cassete mein kya hai. (shlok nods his head) socho, guess karo. is mein tumhara pyara dance hai, jo mein sare college mein (show). Disha bhi dekhe legi.

Shlok- Mein tumhe chodunja nahi. cum back here.

Ruhina n Shlok run all over the house, she passes the casette to arpita. all three are running abt crazy.

Kavya cums with a file in his hand. all engrossed in his new found work.

Kavya- Chachaji, mujhe kuch teek nahi lag raha hai, pointing to the numbers in the file.

then chachaji explains to him the concept behind why that was done. the trio cum into the room n make a mess of it. they r all screaming abt like crazy.

Chachaji gets really angry- Vanshita!!!! kuch sikhao apne bete ko. Awaara bacha ki tarah behave kar raha hai. ghar mein bethke kuch nahi karta.
pulls shlok close to him and screams at him.
Chachaji- Kuch toh seekho apne bhai se, pehle din se kaam kar raha hai, office bhi ata hai. i want to see in office tomm sharp 9am ok.

shlok sulks, n mutters shuru ho gaya barbadi ke din

Edited by kitty468 - 11 March 2006 at 2:25pm
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LOL LOL shlok dancingg
woww itss gr8 Big smile
plzz continue Wink Tongue

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