fanfic :love never ends- Pg 28 (Page 19)

nikki_k Senior Member

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Posted: 16 May 2006 at 7:33am | IP Logged
After 1 month
Ranveer's house(the bell rings)
Raveer goes and opens the door
Ranveer:arre Antara aap,aap kab vapas aaye
Antara:bas aaj hi,to socha ki Muskaan ko pick kar lo
Muskaan comes running to her
Muskaan:mummy(and runs and hugs simran)
Antara:hi mere bachha,kaisa hai.
Antara:aapne mamu ko tang to nahi kiya
Muskaan nodded her head saying no .to which ranveer smiled.
Ranveer:aap bateya hum aapka liye coffee latee hai
Antara:hmm..lagta hai aab tumhare liye bhi ek dulhan dhodne hi paregi
Muskaan:dhoondne ki kya zarorat hai inhone to pehle sa hi dhoonde li hai
Antara:acha..ranveerji zara huma bhi to paata chale ki kaun ha wo
Ranveer(blushing a little):koi nahi aap muskaan ko jaanti ha na
Antara(teasingly):janti ho isiliye to
Ranveer:hum aapka liye coffee late hai(quickly changing the topic ranveer goes inside meanwhile Muskaan tells Antara everything)
Muskaan:she is very sweet aur mamu bhi unko bahut like karta hai.Pata hai mamu ki wallet mein bhi unki hi photo hai
Ranveer comes out with the coffee.
Antara(casually):to ranveer tia sa kab milla rahe ho.
Ranveer looks up in surprise

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Posted: 16 May 2006 at 7:47am | IP Logged
very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue fast asap dont take long tim.
amritafan IF-Dazzler

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rajii Groupbie

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Posted: 16 May 2006 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
pls continue and really good work
2kool Senior Member

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Posted: 16 May 2006 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
its gr8
plzz continue
i luv ashi Senior Member
i luv ashi
i luv ashi

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Posted: 16 May 2006 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
awsum Clap Clap Clap cont soon Smile
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tia_5 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 17 May 2006 at 1:35am | IP Logged
guyz u ppl are waiting but i cant wait 4 the next part

u no what nikki i went tghrough all the parts of our fic and let me tell u u r a realy good fic ritter
there are not many ppl who rite a ranveer tia fic but it is realy nice that someone is avtualy ritting.

i think the plot of the story is amazing
muskkabn seems very sweet to mee
i wonder what woulds muskaan call tia when they are marrien "tia mami" LOL how sweet would that sound

jey nikki plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post the next part cant wait 4 it
it is awsome Clap


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