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fanfic :love never ends- Pg 28 (Page 17)

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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 8:30pm | IP Logged
hey..... it's really nice.... plz cont. soon........
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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
v nice...cont asap Big smile
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Ranveer(picking up the receiver, half laughing): Tia....aap inhe rehene dijiye. humne aapko yeh batane ke liye phone kiya tha ki humne foreign collabaration ke saath Minkyang mein meeting fix karli hai.
Tia: ok Ranveer, main pahunch jaongi.
Ranveer(quickly): Tia agar aap chahein toh hum aapko lene aajayenge.
Tia(smiling): okay!! as you say Ranveer.

In the restraunt...

Its been two hours since they have been waiting.

Tia: Ranveer hum yahan do ghante se wait kar rahe hain. vo log abhi tak kyun nahi aaye?
Ranveer: pata nahi Tia abhi tak kyun nahi pohche. hum abhi office phone kar ke dekhte hain....Hello, hum Ranveer bol rahein hain. vo joh foreign collabaration ke log aane vale the vo abhi tak nahi aaye.....acha. Thank you.
Tia: kya hua Ranveer?
Ranveer: Tia, vo unki flight delay ho gayi hai.
Tia: Ohh!!
Ranveer: Sorry Tia, hume pehle pata karna chahiye tha.
Tia: no problem Ranveer.
Ranveer: Tia hum soch rahe the ab jab hum yahan aa hi gaye hain aur dinner ka time bhi hogaya hai toh kyun na hum dinner kha kar hi chalte hain.
Tia(hesitant): Ranveer....
Ranveer(smiling): I promise hum aapko oily khana nahi khilayenge.
Tia(smiling): okay. main abhi order karti hoon.
Ranveer: okay.
Tia: excuse me, can you get the order please.
Ranveer: lekin Tia aapne toh order kiya hi nahi
Tia: dont worry! Ranveer, Tia know what shes doing.
Ranveer: theek hai.

The waiter brings the order and puts down a cake .

Tia: thank you.
Ranveer: Tia yeh sab.
Tia(smiling): happy birthdayyy!! Ranveer.
Ranveer: lekin Tia iss sab ki kya zaroorat thi.
Tia: zaroorat toh nahi thi par nevertheless i wanted to make your special day even more special.
Ranveer(thinking): haan Tia aapne yeh din sach mein bahut special kar diya hai. hum iss din ko kabhi nahi bhool payenge, kabhi nahi.
Tia: Ranveer, what are you waiting for?

Ranveer smiling and blowing the candle.

Tia: ab jaldi se ek wish manglon.

Ranveer(closing his eyes): Tia
Tia: dekhna Ranveer tumhari yeh wish zaroor poori hogi.
Ranveer(lost): vo toh aap pe depend karta hai Tia, humari yeh wish aap hi poori kar sakti hai.
Tia: m-m-matlab???
Ranveer: kuch nahi Tia.(cuts the piece of cake while Tia claps and offers the first piece of cake to her and Tia does the same, both smile) ab khana order karein? humein bahut bhok lagi hai.(they then order the food)

Ladies and Gentlemen please join us on the dance floor. Ranveer heitantly offered tia a dance which she accepted. As they danced slowly on the tunes of dil ki yeh dhadkan lost in each other eyes. Back to the table, Ranveer pulls out the chair for Tia to sit.

Ranveer(smiling): thank you for the dance maam.
Tia(smiling): Ranveer, i am really thirsty.
Ranveer: aap rukiye, hum aapke liye juice order karte hain.

During the meal...

Ranveer: lekin Tia foreign collabaration....
Tia: unke saath maine meeting postpond kar di thi. tumhe suprise karne ka itna acha mauka mein thodi chod sakti thi.

Ranveer and Tia both smile at each other. Ranveer drops Tia at home but before Tia gets out of the car she says...

Tia: Ranveer, tumhe apna gift nahi chahiye?
Ranveer: nahi Tia. humare liye apka yeh suprise hi bahut bada gift hai.
Tia: phir bhi...(tia handed over the gift to Ranveer and gestured with her eyes to open the gift.) a very small gift.
Ranveer(opening the gift, it was a chain with a locket which when opened on one side had Ranveers dads photograph and on the other side his moms): Tia, aapko yeh kahan se....
Tia: sanganer ke trip ki kuch photograph mere pas padi thi unme se hi.
Ranveer: i cant thank you enough, aapne humara din sach mein bahut special bana diya.
Tia: you dont need to thank me Ranveer, Tia knows ki tum apni family se kitna attached ho.
Ranveer: phir bhi Tia, thank you.
Tia: bye and thanks for the lift(smiling)
Ranveer(smiling): aapko nahi lagta hum ek dusre ko kuch zyada hi thank kar rahe hain.
Tia(laughing): bye!
Ranveer:bye!

Ranveer saw Tia disappear. As a matter of fact, Ranveer had not been so contended with his life for a long time.

Edited by nikki_k - 29 April 2006 at 2:32pm
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its very nice do continue fast asap.
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Posted: 30 April 2006 at 11:38am | IP Logged
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