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fanfic :love never ends- Pg 28 (Page 15)

nikki_k Senior Member
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Posted: 27 April 2006 at 4:32am | IP Logged
hey guys this is the longest part i hve ever written with frequent put ins from my great friend angelgirl16 who has not only given frequent put ins but has typed the whole thing.... hope u like our teamwork.
ok so here is the next part:

Ranveer opens the door

Ranveer: aap.....
Antara(ranveers cousin sister): haan main(hugging ranveer) kaisa laga suprise.
Ranveer : bahut acha. aaye(inviting her inside n making her sit)aaj aapne hume kaise yaad kiya?
Antara: yaad to main bahut dino se kar rahi thi par tumse milne ka mauka hi nahi mila. bua aur chutki nahi dikh rahe.
Ranveer: Ma toh sanganeer gayi hai, data ki barsi ke liye aur Vasu mauraya mein hai.
Antara: oh!!! lekin main toh soch rahi thi ki Muskaan ko kuch din ke liye aap logon ke pas hi chod jaon kyunki main aur rahul(her husband) toh aksar buisness trips ke liye bahar jaate rehte hain. ab....
Ranveer: koi baat nahi Antara hum manage kar lenge.
Antara: par tumhe koi problem....
Ranveer: kaisi baat kar rahi Antara, aap toh janti hain ki Muskaan aur humare beech bahut banti hain.
Antara: acha ranveer mujhe late ho raha hai...main chalti hoon.
Ranveer(getting up): theek hai. bye Antara...take care.
Antara: Ya,i will. tum bhi apna khayal rakhna.(speaking to Muskaan)Bye sweety...Ranveer mamu ko tang mat karna and no masti.
Muskaan: okayy...bye mama!!!

Antara goes away.

Ranveer(turning towards Muskaan): toh kaisi hain aap?
Muskaan(putting her hands on her waist): hum toh theek hain, aap kaise hain?
Rnveer(smiling): hum bhi theek hain.
Muskaan: Hmmmm....
Ranveer: acha aapko bhuk lagi hain?
Muskaan: Nahii mamu.
Ranveer: acha, humein office jana hain,(thinking aloud)par aap(suddenly) office chalengi?
Muskaan: Yesss!!!
Ranveer(smiling): chaliye hum tayar ho jate hain.
Muskaan: okay!

In Ranveers room...he is getting ready while Muskaan is playing with his wallet.Suddenly,she sees Tias photo.

Muskaan:yeh kaun hai mamu?
Ranveer: yeh....(looking lost) yeh, yeh tia hain, hamari dost.
Muskaan:dost,(sweetly...acting innocent and being naughty) sirf dost.
Ranveer(lost, suddenly realising Muskaans presence): haan, sirf dost(smiling cheekily and taking her in his arms) badmaash!! chalein?
Muskaan: chalo,par mamudost ki photo koi wallet mein lagata hain, i mean wallet mein toh sirf girlfriend ki photo lagti hain na...

Ranveers phone starts ringing so the topic is diverted.

In the office. Sumeet is walking down the corridor when Ranveer enters with Muskaan.

Ranveer: Good Morning, Sir.
Sumeet(suprised): Good Morning, Good Morning Ranveer. yeh kaun hain?(looking at Muskaan)
Ranveer: sir, yeh humari behen ki beti hain. woh inne humare pas chod gayi hain. Sorry Sir, humare ghar par koi nahi hain isliye humein innhe apne saath office lana pada.
Sumeet: No problem Ranveer(speaking to Muskaan) toh aapka naam kya hain?
Muskaan: humara naam Muskaan hain. aap ka naam kya hain?
Sumeet: mera naam Sumeet hain.(to Ranveer) kafi friendly ladki hain. acha Tia conference room mein hain India-International Fashion Week ke logon ke saath, tum dono Campaign ke main points discuss kar lo.

Conference Room...

Ranveer: Hi! Tia.
Tia: Oh! Hi! Ranveer.(Looking at Muskaan) yeh young lady kaun hai?
Before Ranveer could say anything, Muskaan spoke up.

Muskaan: aap mamu se kyun poochti hain... Hum Muskaan hai.
Tia(smiling): Hi! Muskaan, main.....
Muskaan: aap....aap Tia hain.
Putting her hands on her waist she goes towards Tia to analyze her from every angle, while Tia stands stll...smiling and Ranveers embaressed.

Muskaan(nodding her head): mami bane ke liye achi hain.
Tias smile gets wider and she lowers her eyes while Ranveer gets more embaressed.

Ranveer: acha dadima!
Tia(suspiciously): aapko kaise pata ki main Tia hoon?
Muskaan(before Ranveer could stop her): voh maine aapki photo mamu ke wallet mein dekhi hain na.

Tia and Ranveer get more embaressed while suddenly Ranveers phone rings.

Ranveer(on the phone): Hello......Oh! hum aate hain.

Hanging up on the phone, addressing Tia.

Ranveer: Tia hume factory jaana hoga, vahan production mein kuch problem hogayi hai....lekin Tia Muskaan....
Tia: you dont worry Ranveer, Muskaan mere saath rehe jaaygi.(addressing Muskaan) kyun Muskaan?
Muskaan: haan mamu, main Tia aunty ke saath rehe jaaongi.
Tia(smiling): Ranveer shes really cute.
Ranveer(smiling): acha Tia to hum chalte hain.Bye!
Tia:Bye! Ranveer.

Tia(turning towards Muskaan); aap chocolate khaogi?
Muskaan: haan!!
Tia(holding out her hand): come!!

They spend the rest of their time talking,laughing and playing...forgetting Ranveer and that they were in office. In these few hours they spent together, Muskaan became as fond of Tia as much as she was fond of Ranveer.

guys just wanted to ask a question how do u write on the subject that u have updated the fanfic on?

Edited by nikki_k - 27 April 2006 at 5:08am

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Posted: 27 April 2006 at 4:53am | IP Logged
soo sweet Nikki.. and thanx to angelgirl16 also...

wonderful part...

n for changing the topic, go to the first page, the first post tht YOU hv posted.. c there will b an icon called 'edit' click on tht .. n change the topic name....

plz post the next part soon...

n Muskaan is so cute.. n loved the way Ranveer said badmaash! Wink

continue soon

Divya

Edited by divya_92 - 27 April 2006 at 4:58am
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Posted: 27 April 2006 at 6:49am | IP Logged
hey yhat coolest part pleeeeeze cont fast Thumbs Up
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ur teamwork is totally awesummmmmmm Clap Clap Clap

cont. asap plzzzzzzz
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plz continue fast
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very very nice the most loved part of the fic and pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do write this much long and do continue fast asap.
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hey it was awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm n mindblowing waiting for the next part eagerlyyyyyyyy
nikki_k Senior Member
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Posted: 28 April 2006 at 6:09am | IP Logged

In Tias office....

Ranveer entered Tia office to see Tia and Muskaan chatting happily irrespective of the fact that they were in office and that Tia had work to do. Ranveer smiled at the innocence he saw in Tias eyes while she played with Muskaan. She had changed so much, she was nomore the short dressed type girl who could only think of make-up but was a trouser clad women who had learnt that there was something more to life than looks that mattered and that was happiness but yes she was as pretty as simple and as mesmerizing as she was in te college days. But somewhere in her the sense of sincerity was there which wasnt there before. It was as though if it was just yesterday that they had met, fallen in love, hurt each other to an extent that they couldnt stand each other but still somewhere deep inside their hearts they knew that they had endless love that would never end.

Tia: Ranveer(snapping him out of his thoughts)...kya hua?
Ranveer: kuch nahi hua Tia....bas yuhin.
Tia(smiling): tumhari niece, oh god!! bahut bolti hai but shes adorable.
Ranveer(smiling): Muskaan ne aapko tang to nahi kiya.
Tia: no no Ranveer, we were having a lot of fun. kyun Muskaan?
Muskaan(running towards Tia and Ranveer): mamu, Tia aunty is totally mind blasting. hum dono ne bahut maza kiya.
Ranveer(smiling): acha Muskaan ji ab hum ghar chalein. hum lagta hai Tia ke liye aaj ka masti ka dose kafi hai par hume lagta hai ki hume unka shukriya bhi karna chahiye(turning towards Tia, teasingly) thank you Tia aunty.
Tia(laughing): no problem Ranveer mamu.
Ranveer: acha hum chalte hain(holding Muskaans hand)
Tia(waving towards Ranveer and Muskaan): byee!!(and Muskaan waving back)

At Tias house, Sumeet Ahuja is busy listening to old songs and humming them too while Tia smiled at him.

Tia: papa....
Sumeet: Ranveer....
Tia: maine haan kab kaha....
Sumeet: tumne naa bhi toh nahi kaha.
Tia: oh-ho papa!!! forget it!
Sumeet: what forget it?
Tia: papa hum dono ke beech ho chuka hai....
Sumeet: Tia, life is like a beautiful melody only the lyrics are messed up and its upto us that we try and put them in the right order.

Tia is left thinking while Sumeet goes away leaving Tia entangled in her own thoughts.

In the morning, Tia opens her wadrobe to locate something when a box falls out. She opens the box only to find gifts given by Ranveer to her. Simultanously, the phone rings.

Tia: hello!
Ranveer: hello!!(with a lot of noise coming from behind)
Tia: hello??????
Ranveer: Tia, hum bol rahe hain...Ranveer.
Tia: yeh itna shor kaun macha raha hai.
Ranveer: Muskaan(refering to Muskaan) yeh aap kya kar rahi hain? hume Tia se baat karne dijiya.
Muskaan: Tia aunty!!(snatching the phone from Ranveer) hi Tia aunty.
Tia(half laughing): hi! Muskaan...kya kar rahe ho aap?
Muskaan: bore ho rahin hoon. Ranveer mamu kuch karte hi nahi hain aur humare jokes pe bhi nahi haste aur humare sawalon ke jawab bhi nahi dete.

Ranveer stood sniggering behind laughing at the way Muskaan was complaining to Tia.

Muskaan: ab aap hi bataye Tia aunty humne mamu se itna hi poocha tha agar olive oil olive se nikalta hai toh baby oil kahan se nikalta hai?

At this point of time Ranveer put her on the speaker to hear Tias answer to Muskaans innocent answer and find Tia laughing helplessly.

 



Edited by nikki_k - 28 April 2006 at 6:14am

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