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fanfic :love never ends- Pg 28

nikki_k Senior Member
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 3:18am | IP Logged

guys,this is my first attempt at writing a fanfic .hope u like it.

Dear diary,
Its been 5 years since i left maurya,5 years since i met ranveer...5 years since i have spoken to ranveer.but it seems only yesterday when we were together in happy and sad times.time passes by but memories,memories always remain.Till when will this waiting last ?when will i meet ranveer? or are we destined to be separated?
Tia
tia slowly closed her diary and lay down her bed remembering the last time they met and what ranveer had told her...
flashback
in the shed
Ranveer:tia hum apse kuch bat karna chahta hai
tia:ha ranveer bolo na tia sun rahi hai
ranveer:tia ,aap to janti hai ki zindagi mein hum kuch bana chahte hai,hum apne parivaar ko vo khushi dena chahta hai jo unhe kabhi nahi millie.
tia :(smiling and putting her hand into ranveers hand)
ranveer:tia humhe US jana kay liya scholorship millie hai.
tia's smile slowly faded away.
ranveer:tia hum vaha jana chahte hai but
before ranveer could say something tia interupted
tia:its ok ranveer tia janti hai ki tum apni family sa bahut pyaar  karte ho .aur agar tum US jata ho to tumhe bahut achi job oppurtunities mil sakte hai .tia janti hai ki use tumse door rehna para ga lekin tia tumhari khushi kay liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai .tia knows that u really love tia aur tum mujhe kabhi cheat nahi karo gaye.but tia knows it for a fact that tia will really miss u.
At that moment ranveer realised that they understood each other completely
ranveer:hum bhi apko bahut miss karega.Ilove u
tia:tia loves u too.par tum  kabhi tia ko bol to nahi jaoga na
ranveer:kya koi kabhi sans lana bol sakta hai?
and smiling faintly they hug.
end of flashback.
if u like it then only i will continue


 



Edited by nikki_k - 09 June 2006 at 12:16am

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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 3:23am | IP Logged
its verry cute do continue Clap Smile
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 3:41am | IP Logged
soooo sweet Embarrassed
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Embarrassed Clap plz continue
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 4:53am | IP Logged
soooooooooooooooooo cute Embarrassed Embarrassed
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 5:26am | IP Logged
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed that was so sweet.pls do continue Clap Clap Clap
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really nice.....plzzzzzz continue...... Clap Clap
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Posted: 10 March 2006 at 5:36am | IP Logged
Ya its good please conitnue

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