~Tera Mera Pyaar ty vm pg 68 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

524

Views

211958

Users

85

Likes

1810

Frequent Posters

adventure_gurl thumbnail
Anniversary 18 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
  thanks  here is the extended verison of Mere Dil Vich Hum Tum

sparikh thumbnail
Anniversary 18 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
all 3 wonderful OS...loved 'em all! 

-Sona
adventure_gurl thumbnail
Anniversary 18 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
thanks thinking to write another os and do a vm with the song Ali re from No one Killed Jessica
*Dakoo_Minzy* thumbnail
Anniversary 17 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
that was sweet one dearie πŸ˜ƒ really loved it..awww! i could feel butterflies reading uday maanyata scenes..tey are too good together..love them sooo much πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³
adventure_gurl thumbnail
Anniversary 18 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
thanks Minz, I have one more idea, should I write it up now, I wonder if I should?😳
*Dakoo_Minzy* thumbnail
Anniversary 17 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

thanks Minz, I have one more idea, should I write it up now, I wonder if I should?😳



if you are free...do do do write it down πŸ˜› πŸ€—  
WhiteNights thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 0 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
Adventure., hats off to you girl! You have come up with another incredible peice. Love your One shots. Waiting for more😍
adventure_gurl thumbnail
Anniversary 18 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
Part Four

 Dadisa was reluctant to let Manyata go out of the rajmahal without an escort. The climbing down the palace wall incident had being cautious.  However  Manyata needed  to the learn the ways of the royals. She needed someone for now who would understand her qualms and be able to be a friend to her.

 

J Nandini was too miffed with everyone to be of assistance. Things were improving with Dadisa and Komal but it was decided that Unati was the perfect choice. She did not act spoiled and she would be  geninue  objective towards Manyata. Most of all they could be friends.

 

 So Unati arrived to take Manyata for her first day of shopping and the beauty parlor. Manyata was surprised how Unati was more composed than everyone else she had  met since being brought back to the palace.

 

"Where are we going today?," Manyata asked casually.

 

She hoped Unati wouldn't get snippy like J Nandini or intense like Udayveer.

 

"Beauty parlor and shopping. I am sure you would prefer your own wardrobe rather than whatever  they could find for you on short notice. You will start to look and feel like a princess  starting today,"Unati assured her.

 

 Manyata hoped she could survive it.

 

 The girls chatted back and forth. Unati assured her before they started the facial and eyebrow threading. She flinched in pain as she had not gotten this done before.  Next came waxing through which Unati got a call from her Dada, she had to let him know to call her back.

 

"Yeh kiski cheekne ke awaaz hai?," he inquired.

 

"Aap ko kya lagta hai," Unati asked amused.

 

"Oh. What is going on?," he asked.

 

" Waxing," Unati replied not wanting to intrude on her future sister-in-law's privacy.

 

"Oh.  Aapna khayal rakhna," he said.

 

"Kyun unka khayal kyun na rak hoon?,"Unati asked teasingly.

 

 

" She is like a lioness, you have to save yourself first Unati," he retorted before hanging up.

 

"Oh that hurt  badly," Manyata exclaimed later after she had showered and changed into an outfit Unati had brought  for her.

 

" Yes but after another cool shower you will feel great. You ready to shop for the rest of your clothes?," she asked.

 

"Theek hain chalo," Manyata said.

 

She hoped the shopping part would be more fun.

 

 When they arrived at the mall, she realized it was the same one where she used to meet her old friends and Akash. She became nostalgic  but Unati's voice snapped her out of it.

 

" Chalo Manyata baut kam hai," she urged. ( We have lots of work to do).

 

 

 It was nearing 2pm. Manyata was feeling weary. She was dazed with all the choices.

 

"Chalo, Dada wants to meet us for lunch. He has some time free," Unati stated.

 

"Tumare Dada kaun hai?," Manyata inquired, not knowing who her brother was.

 

" You just met him  a few days back. I was in  exams so sorry I could  not come to see you sooner," Unati said.

 

Manyata sighed and followed Unati to the caf where her Dada was waiting.

 

 

 Manyata sat down  but nearly fell out of her chair when Udayveer arrived to greet Unati. She called him Dada?

 

He turned to face her and  grinned smugly.

 

"Aap bauth acchi lagri hain rajkumari," he stated.

 

" Yes Dada she has a natural beauty, they were complimenting her at the parlor. She should be radiant  by the time Dadisa  has that grand party next week,"Unati said with glee.

 

Manyata frowned.

 

"What is this grand party for?"

 Udayveer smiled.

 

" For your return and to announce that you and Dada will marry in the near future," Unati stated solemnly.

 

Manyata looked astounded at the brother-sister duo.

 

So the misunderstanding had to be cleared up soon. She couldn't imagine having to marry Udayveer and in fact why would he want to marry her?

 

 Udayveer was surprised how quiet she was during the meal but later there would be a slight storm to deal with.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by adventure_gurl - 12 years ago
roking_nidhi223 thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
good one Edited by roking_nidhi223 - 12 years ago
samisweethrt thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
please..write more...!!!!
i love the way u wrote them..!