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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
@prerna - thanks a lot dear m glad u like them well same case m addicted to the ffs more than the show lol

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hema_rawat

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
nice os ...
abhay letter was so touchy nd emotional...
 

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
beauifully written Deepa. The note really made me cry. And I like the title also. You can really write well but why sad ending?Cry
I want a happy ending for abhiya na. But nonetheless, it was lovely and I loved it.
Are you starting a story? is this a aprt of it? or is this just a small story?

cuteteddy

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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 1:14am | IP Logged
@hemarawat - thanks dear 
@anji - yaar i wanted to write something sad thats y i made this OS . 
            well i first decided the title n then the storyROFL

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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 2:10am | IP Logged
aww..that was beautiful..but with a sad ending..abhiya deserves to be together..and ur version of being togather..was lovely...

cuteteddy

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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 2:44am | IP Logged
@peehu - thanks dear i know abhiya deserves a better ending but i don't want them to end n this will be their begginning in the heaven where no one can separate them !!

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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 8:52am | IP Logged
So sad... I have tears in my eyes great start and thanks for pm

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Posted: 06 December 2011 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
deepa its awsum... i loved it... its so emotional... i loved d letter part...
now d new story begins.. cool... thanks 4 d pm...

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