Writers Corner
Writers Corner

India-Forums

   

OS we kept standing there (Page 2)

cuteteddy Goldie
cuteteddy
cuteteddy

Joined: 09 May 2005
Posts: 2117

Posted: 05 December 2011 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
@prerna - thanks a lot dear m glad u like them well same case m addicted to the ffs more than the show lol

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

prerna26

hema_rawat Goldie
hema_rawat
hema_rawat

Joined: 27 May 2011
Posts: 1900

Posted: 05 December 2011 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
nice os ...
abhay letter was so touchy nd emotional...
 
anjali.K IF-Rockerz
anjali.K
anjali.K

Joined: 13 August 2011
Posts: 6044

Posted: 05 December 2011 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
beauifully written Deepa. The note really made me cry. And I like the title also. You can really write well but why sad ending?Cry
I want a happy ending for abhiya na. But nonetheless, it was lovely and I loved it.
Are you starting a story? is this a aprt of it? or is this just a small story?
cuteteddy Goldie
cuteteddy
cuteteddy

Joined: 09 May 2005
Posts: 2117

Posted: 06 December 2011 at 1:14am | IP Logged
@hemarawat - thanks dear 
@anji - yaar i wanted to write something sad thats y i made this OS . 
            well i first decided the title n then the storyROFL
--peehu-- IF-Sizzlerz
--peehu--
--peehu--

BollyCurry Production Intern
Joined: 13 February 2010
Posts: 22152

Posted: 06 December 2011 at 2:10am | IP Logged
aww..that was beautiful..but with a sad ending..abhiya deserves to be together..and ur version of being togather..was lovely...
cuteteddy Goldie
cuteteddy
cuteteddy

Joined: 09 May 2005
Posts: 2117

Posted: 06 December 2011 at 2:44am | IP Logged
@peehu - thanks dear i know abhiya deserves a better ending but i don't want them to end n this will be their begginning in the heaven where no one can separate them !!
Alisa0987 Groupbie
Alisa0987
Alisa0987

Joined: 16 July 2011
Posts: 161

Posted: 06 December 2011 at 8:52am | IP Logged
So sad... I have tears in my eyes great start and thanks for pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

cuteteddy

Akshi0019 IF-Sizzlerz
Akshi0019
Akshi0019

Joined: 05 May 2011
Posts: 16382

Posted: 06 December 2011 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
deepa its awsum... i loved it... its so emotional... i loved d letter part...
now d new story begins.. cool... thanks 4 d pm...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

cuteteddy

Go to top

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Writers Corner Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index