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Posted: 12 years ago
beauifully written Deepa. The note really made me cry. And I like the title also. You can really write well but why sad ending?😭
I want a happy ending for abhiya na. But nonetheless, it was lovely and I loved it.
Are you starting a story? is this a aprt of it? or is this just a small story?
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Posted: 12 years ago
@hemarawat - thanks dear 
@anji - yaar i wanted to write something sad thats y i made this OS . 
            well i first decided the title n then the story🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww..that was beautiful..but with a sad ending..abhiya deserves to be together..and ur version of being togather..was lovely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
@peehu - thanks dear i know abhiya deserves a better ending but i don't want them to end n this will be their begginning in the heaven where no one can separate them !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
So sad... I have tears in my eyes great start and thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
deepa its awsum... i loved it... its so emotional... i loved d letter part...
now d new story begins.. cool... thanks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
@alicia n akshi - thanks guys love u :-) well glad u liked it n sorry but i won't be continuing it ..!!