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Hum dil de chuke sanam 4 Sujal-kashish

jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 02 July 2005
Posts: 22335

Posted: 08 March 2006 at 10:59am | IP Logged
This fanfic
                                                         is my version of DEvdaS.     
                             PART-1.....Sujal is
                                                         returning 2 his native place
                          after 14yrs.after getting
                                                         used 2 the lifestyle in
                          USA,he did'nt feel like going
                                                         back but its bcoz of his
                          parents' force,he's going
                                                         back .since a few months
                          Sujal is in bombay.he was packing
                                                         everything 2 return.his only
                          friend Rishi cumes:why r u
                                                         in hurry 2 go back? Sujal
                          does'nt say anything. he helps
                                                         him 2 pack.R gets a
                          letter from a book. R:whose
                                                       letter is this? S takes
                          it & looks:this is kashish's
                                                       letter . R:who is kashish?ur
                          kitten?   S gets irritated:its
                                                         a girl.   R:o i see.u did'nt
                          tell that u've a gf in ur
                                                this is the reason
                          behind ur sudden return 2 ur
                                                         land. S:what rubbish!how
                          many glamorous girls r here
                                                         near me.i did'nt feel
                          anykind of attraction 2wards
                                                         them.then how can i feel
                          that 2 this simple village
                                                         girl?i'vent seen kashish since
                          a long period.she was my
                                                         childhood friend.1st & all
                          we used 2 send letters.later
                                                       it was stopped.   R:but i
                          realy feel that ur
                                                         relationship with kashish is
                          not sumthing that shud be
                                                         broken.i think the destiny
                          is 2 bring u both
                                                         2gether.that may be the
                          reason u r 2 b back.   S:u r
                                                the way a bad smell
                          is coming from u.u've drunk?
                                                          R:ya. S:don't u feel shame
                          2 tell it openly? S:i don't
                                                         feel shame 2 tell the truth
                          like u.u feel shame 2 admit
                                                       that u luv kashish.   S:u r
                          talking rubbish after
                                                         drinking. R smiles.   
                          S cud'nt sleep thinking
                                                         a bout R's words. he
                          takes & reads the old letter
                                                         sent by kashish:sujal,did'nt u
                          tease me when i said that a
                                                         flower is cuming the the
                          plant?tho its late,a yellow
                                                         flower has cum.when u cum
                          here,i'll giv 2 u.   S
                                                         thinks:yellow...luv's color.
                          S was carried away by
                                                         nostalgia...the days spent
                          with K.

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tarana08 Senior Member

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Posted: 08 March 2006 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
nice i like it i am waiting for next part. post next part soon as you can bye
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Posted: 09 March 2006 at 12:16am | IP Logged
good jasmine.......................... Tongue
plz continue............... Tongue
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Posted: 09 March 2006 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Clap Clap Clap cont sssooooon
jasminerahul IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 09 March 2006 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Part-2....Sujal remembers how naughty he was & how
                          sweet kashish was.K was
                                                      brilliant in maths,but S
                          was just the opposite.he
                                                      remembers their painful
                          departure when he went away
                                                      from their place.K stood
                          near him when was going.they
                                                      both cried a lot.due 2
                          laziness S stopped
                                                      writing letters,but K
                          continued. S thinks that
                                                      mayb bcoz he was not
                          replying later she also
                                                      stopped sending letters. S
                          thinks:why am i thinking this
                                                      much about k?she was
                          only a friend.i remember the
                                                      little k
                          does she look like now? he
                                                      becomes restles.Immediatly he
                          goes,paints k with a
                                                      guess. S:wil kk look like
                          the same? S feels like
                                                      seeing k like
                          anything.Rishi's words r still
                                                      in his mind. k was very
                          much trilled 2 no that S
                                                      is cuming back. she goes 2
                          the temple:God,sumeet is cuming
                                                      back after many
                          yrs.thanku so much god 4
                                                      bringing him back. she takes
                          vrith 4 sujal.then dances with
                          comes back,gets grand welcome.
                                                      S goes 2 k's
                          house.K's parents did'nt
                                                      recognise him. S:don't u
                          recognise me?i'm sumeet. they
                                                      were surprised. k's
                          mom:sujal!wow! dad:i can't
                                                      believe ur change. they
                          chat. M:sujal,don't u want 2
                                                      see k? he wants 2 see
                          her very badly.but he does'nt
                                                      say that. M:she was always
                          enquiring whether u r back. S
                                                      becomes happy 2 hear
                          it. M:kashish...cum here.see
                                                      who has cum. k cumes.she
                          was really happy 2 see s.he
                                                      cud'nt believe his
                          eyes.bcoz K was exactly the
                                                      same person in his
                          painting. he thinks:without
                                                      seeing k's present
                          look,i was
                                                      right.its a gud omen.but k
                          looks more beautiful than in
                                                      my painting. M:k,did u
                          recognise him? K:yes,sujal.
                                                      su-k look at each
                          other. he cud'nt sleep
                                                      thinking about k.he was
                          impressed by her beauty.he
                                                      sings dreaming about her:woh
                          chand jaisi ladki {Devdas}.

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Posted: 09 March 2006 at 11:08am | IP Logged
wow!!jasmine gr8 going....but me warning u beforehand.... no tooshaarr plzz Big smile
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Posted: 09 March 2006 at 11:51am | IP Logged
jasmine nice cont soon
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Posted: 09 March 2006 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
veryyyyyy guud!!! Clap   Clap plz cont wen possi! Smile

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