That was a great update. Congratulations on the new thread. Your story just keeps getting better and better. Love the suspense. I liked how you ended the part. Nice builds up suspense with the reader. Loved it.
HEy it was beutiful update but then why this unnecessary apology!!!!!!
Its superb th eonly disappointment was that you havenot killed Shyam...his gettin gkilled would have een wonderful...oh yeah but then it would have made Anjali a bit guilty may be right!!!!!
"She was his blessing, no longer in disguise."...this lines just tugged at my heart so beautifully..you flow flow of language is so superb!!!
