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                             Kya Yehi Pyar Hai? : Part 1

We see a girl creeping into a room and in the room there is a boy sleeping peacefully. The girl takes out her camera and takes some shots of him sleeping. She goes near the boy and shouts in his ear and the boy wakes with a startle. We can now make out his and it is Pushkar.

P: (shouts) Kripaaa...I won't leave you today

K: (Laughing) Don't even think about it or else I wont cook your chocolate breakfast today.

P: (Pulls a sad face) That's not fair...Why do you always blackmail me?

Aaliya comes out of nowhere and jumps on his bed.

Aa: Its fair...She has to cook your breakfast everyday and here your sleeping late. Do you even know what the time is? You take 1 hour shower and its already 8.00 am, you're going to be late for school if you don't get a move on.

K: Remember it's our last day in school before the summer holiday

Gayatri = G

G: (shouts from downstairs) Kripa...come downstairs the food is burning

K: "OMG! I forgot about it...For gods sake Pushkar go and have a shower" Kripa and Aaliya push Pushkar in the bathroom

Aa - K: Laters Bro

Aaliya gets the table ready while Kripa does the cooking. Everybody sits down at the dining table except Pushkar who is still having shower.

Suryaban = S

S: Where' Pushkar?

K: Where else would he be in the morning except the bathroom

S: That boy does take a lot of time in the shower. I wonder who he gets ready for

Aa: Maybe he has a girlfriend who' very hygienic

G: Leave the poor boy alone

Pushkar comes downstairs a few minutes later.

P: Morning...how do i look?

S - Aa -K: How else would you look like when spend half and hour in the bathroom

G: Handsome

P: (ignoring the rest) Thanks mom... ypu're the best

G: I know i am

They eat while teasing poor Pushkar and his mum is there to help him. After they€™re finished Pushkar and Kripa go to school and Aaliya goes looking for job as a model.


Khanna House

We see a Dadi, Naina and Bani in the house mandir doing prayer.

Naina = N

Bani = B

Angad = A

Shabbir = Sh

N: Where are those two boys

B: Sleeping

N: I told you to wake them up

B: I tried but they're not listening to me

N: (Shouts) Angad, Shabbir

We see two boys running around their room while saying " mom is going to kill me today...i'm late for the morning prayer again" then they run out of their room and bump into each other.

Boy 1: "sorry" and he goes the other way

Boy 2: Hey Shabbir the stairs is this way not that way

Sh: "Oops forgot" and they both run down joining the prayer half way. After the Prayer finishes Angad, Shabbir and Bani take ashirwad (spelling?) from Dadi and Naina.

N: How many times did I tell you to sleep early and see when you don€™t sleep early you miss the Prayer

Sh -A: Sorry Mum

N: (angry) Just Forget it

Sh - A: we're really sorry

Sh: I won't take anymore night shifts

A: And I'll try come early

N: Its ok...go change and then come downstairs for breakfast

After half and hour they come back downstairs and sit down for breakfast. Bani serves them and they have a happy family time. After breakfast Angad takes Bani to school and he goes to help his mom in business.


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Posted: 25 March 2006 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
that was really good yaar...continue soon!!
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Posted: 25 March 2006 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
realy gud... cont soon
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Posted: 25 March 2006 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
I just read ur fan fic and I think it is awsome please cont. sson
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tnx for ur comment guys
i need more comments be4 i can cont LOL LOL LOL
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Posted: 27 March 2006 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
awesum first part! it roked! cont soon! (and u spelled ashirwad right...lol) LOL
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Cry

is that it no more comments Ouch
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Wow great begining! Do continue soon!

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