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Hum se juda na hona...A-K prt:7 pg11 (Page 4)

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I'm a silent reader of all ur fan fics...sometimes I just dont comment, but I do read ' plz dont think no one like them. Embarrassed

Mini786 IF-Dazzler

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ur fanfic is just great
i love it
continue soon!!

khushi19 Goldie

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wow but kripa has attitude Angry
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wow rkly nice continue
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ok i will continue ..some time Big smile
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Mishty: wow ..kripa yahan bhi attitude haan

Kripa: that's what Kripa is ..pata hai mishty ..i was scared that pata nahi kesa hoga ..but seriously he is perfect ..just perfect for me …!

Mishty: ahaan ……and Kripa winks…vasu aunty comes over there and ask …

Vasu: shopping ho gai ..

Kripa: ji

Mishty: aur bhi bhoot kuch howa hai

Vasu: means

Kripa stump her feet over mishty's ..and mishty scream…..ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Vasu: kya howa mishty baby …

Mishty: n-nothing …

Vasu: chalo ..ab zara jewellary dekhlo …and they move towards jewelary section …kripa hoosed some ..and bought them ..while she took angad's cell number from mishty as she didn't have that ..and heads to home ..she was tired by the time they reach home ..she took a pleasant sleep while dreamed about angad ……she got up at 5:00 …and took shower and ..make a call to angad …

Kripa: hello mr khanna ..

Angad: hello who is there

Kripa: main bol rahi hoon

Angad: main kon

Kripa: arey main

Angad: welll main ajj pehli baar dekh raha actually bakri ko boltey howey sun raha hoon

Kripa: main …I mean Kripa here

Angad: oh Kripa ji sorry …haan

Kripa: Kripa jiiiiiii

Angad: kyun app ko acha nahi laga
Kripa: no

Angad: kyun

Kripa: arey tum fiance ho ya …..sub-ordinate jo …merey naam ke saath jiii laga rahey ho

Angad: khair chorya is baat bataya app ne phone kesey kiya …secondly app ko number kis ne diya ….main tu nahi diya tha

Kripa: kyun app ko phone nahi kersakti

Angad: kersakti hein …but acha nahi lagta na …

Kripa: what do u mean by acha nahi lagta

Angad: Kripa .wo mom mujey bula rahio hai ..i gotta go

Kripa: mujey essa kyun lag raha hai e app mujh se bhaag rahey hein

Angad: kyun ke bhaag raha hoon

Kripa: kyun

Angad: main ne suna tha ke sabar ka phal meetha hota hai main examine kerna cha raha tha pp se door reh ke aur jab app ke pass aonga tu kesa mehsoos keronga

Kripa (blushing): wow …main ghalat samjh rahi thi

Angad: kya ghalat samjh rahi thi

Kripa: kuch nahi …..well main app ko doobara call kerloon …

Angad: no

Kripa: kyunnnnnnnnn

Angad: remember sabar ka phal …

Kripa: oh magar ye two weeks

Angad: kat jayengye ….take care and byeeee

Krpa(dull) bye!

Angad switch off the cell …and guess what he was not in his home but in cafeteria …he give high five to some one ..and then we able to see the face of that man …man ..he is josh …….and the we see a smiling figure besides hm was prithvi ….and aaliyah …sitting besides angad ….they all wait for a second and then laugh uncontrollably ! we heard a voice ..and then figure out that mishty ..Coming up with a tray of some snacks and cold drinks …!

Mishty: shut up guys this is too much!

Angad: what ..bhaabi ..opps sorry mishty …

Mishty : (hold his right ear) : wo main banoogi …..magar ager tum ..apney mau per talah laga ker rakho tu ..wesey this is too bad angad ..why u bugged her so much yaar

Angad: what I bugged her ..arey yaar main tu mila pehli baar ,…..

Josh: aur baat bhi pehli baar ki hai

Angad: right

Misty: main ne na ..tum ko bata ke ghalti ke thi

Angad: but main tu ghalti nahi kin a

Mishty: ok tell me u love her

Angad: mmmmmmmmmmmm

Mishty: shut up angad just say ..yes or no

Angad: ager main kahoon YES TU

Misty: tu tum zinda bach jaonge ..werna doosri surat main …..mein tumhey jaan se maar dongi

Angad: oh my GOD ….


Angad: ok tu ab kya karoon

Mishty?: us se baat

Angad: pagal ho kya …

Aaliyah: haan bhai plz
Prithvi was about to say some thing ..when josh see him ..and says …

Josh: haan angad ab tu AALIYAH ..bhi bol rahi hai

Prithvi (give josh an angry look): yes angad plz

Angad: no means no !


coming up: ..kripa try to attract angad ..and ... Wink LOL !

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