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Hum se juda na hona...A-K prt:7 pg11 (Page 3)

Mrs.Fr.. IF-Rockerz

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We see a girl lying on bed only her dark brown hairs can be seen as body is under pink covers. The whole room is beautiful …it is seems like made for a princess …suddenly a women enters in room ..she is wearing white collared shirt and knee length navy blue skirt seems to be a maid ..she remove curtains and light enters in the room fall on girl's face ..she seems to be irritate by this light and turn her face on other side ..! the maid pets on her hand ..which is almost out of covers now …

Maid: beti utto dekho neechey baab app ka wait kerey hein breakfast per
Girl: kya dai ma ..roz subhey subhey utta deti ho …please thori deer aur soney do na
Dai ma: no Kripa baby get up its too late ….utto werna baba ko bolaoon
Kripa: acha na utt rahi hoon ….
Finally she gets up and we see her cute face …looking really pretty …but till her eyes are closed …finally she open her eyes …..her eyes any one could say …dreamy eyes …! She leaves her bed …and make her way to bathroom for shower while dai ma..pick out a dress for Kripa …and made the bed again. Kripa from bathroom asked for clothes and dai maa hand over them to her.

She comes out wearing a simple outfit ..brushed her hairs and apply a lotion on her face and turned around although she has no make-up but still looking stunning ….! She leave for break fast she go down stairs where we see a decent man waiting for her on dinning table ..she goes to him ..and hugs him from behind and .says;

Kripa: good morning papa
So that man is none other then suryaban sharma and smile brightly when looks at his daughter ….well his day never start until kripa say a warm good morning to him . more then like other fathers he love his child …and now bit sad also;

Surya: good morning beta

Kripa: papa why are u so down

Surya: kuch nahi beta sooch raha ab tu tumhari shaadi hai ….aur tum mujey chor ker chali jao gi

Kripa: papa mujey nahi kerni shaadi

Surya: kyun bhai

Kripa: app essay react kero gye tu main nahi jaa paon gin a

Surya: acha bhai nahi hota main tensed …well tumey pata hai …ajjj vasundra aneey wali hai

Kripa: oh no

Surya: no beta essay nahi kertey …aur wesey bhi damni ..bhabi bhi hongi or mishty bhi ….shopping ke liya tumharey saath ..ab tu sirf do weeks hi rehgye hein na

Kripa: mishty and aunty ..thats good ..other wise I cant tolerate that vasu aunty ..she is pathetic papa

Surya: kripaaaa

Kripa: ok baba sorry

Surya: have u finished ur break fast …

Kripa: yes ….

Surya: go and get ready for shopping abhi wo loog attey hi hongey phone aagya tha un loog ka

Kripa: ok

Surya: and I m leaving for office

Kripa: ok papa bye

Surya : bye beta

Krpa agin moves to her room pick out a nice outfit and change in to it …and …apply light make up ….as usual...looks beautiful! While she was giving last touches to her face ….. some one enter in the room ..we see it's a another girl deep black eyes …waist length hairs …and charmng face ..kripa look through mirror and screamed !

Kripa: mishtyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy …and turn around giving her a warm big hug!

Mishty(smiles): hey tujey ager angad khanna is waqt dekh ley na ..tu definitely fida ho jaye ga

Kripa: well wo tu us ko hona hi ha …but ager karthick bhaya tujey is waqt dekh lein to …definitely abhi ke abhi …jannat main phoonch jain gye ..matlab khushi ke marey maar hi jain gye

Mishty: Kripa …..

Kripa: acha baba …khushi ke marey motey ho jaye gye

Mishty: acha ..aur main jesey honey dongi

Kripa: oye hoye …….mishty darling ko bhi bolna atta hai ……
Mishty: shut up o chal ready ho ja ..neechy mom aur …

Kripa: wo item number vasu aunty humara wait keri hai !

Mishty laughs at Kripa's comment for vasu aunty ……and se says

Mishty: Kripa tub hi na …angad kitna seedha hai ..aur tu ….

Kripa: seedha hai bachpan main dekha tha usey ……phir ajj tak nahi dekha ….siwaye photo ke …….us se milna chahti hoon sirf do haftey reh gye hein shaadi main ..or wo nawab sahib hein ke mizaaj hi nahi miltey kehtey hein shaadi ke baad hi milonga

Mishty: sachey dil se maan ho sakta ajj hi dekhley tu usey

Kripa: mishty …tu nahi kuch arrange tu nahi kiya

Mishty: bas itna pata hai ke ..ajj prithvi bhaya ,karthick ..aur angad ….park towers shopping ke liya ja rahey hein !

Kripa: whattttttttttttttttttttttttttt …itni bad tu mujey abhi bata rahi hai …well hum bhi park towers ja yengye

Mishty: ok mummy ko bhi nahi pata ye baat

Kripa:' chalo ..wo loog humara wait kerey hongye

Mishty : chalo ….and they go down stairs ….where we a decent lady ….thats for sure mrs.damni bose besides her really an item number was standing …when Kripa look at damni aunty she hugs her ..and give cheesy smile and say dull hi to vasu aunty !

They all leave the house and make their way to park towers shopping mall .

We see all four ladies walking in mall ..looking through different boutiques …..damni pointed a jewellary shop …and vasu also ..willing to buy some thing for her self ….and they move in ….while mishty and Kripa excuse their selves and prefer to go to boutique ..finally they see manish malhotra's outlet …they choose a beautiful lehenga choli for sangeet …and mishty also select a dress for herself ….they complete payments and omes out of the outlet …mishty moturn around as her ..dupatta stucked in some thing and Kripa was looking into bags and pay no attention to mishty …and bumps in to some one!
As Kripa looks up and screaming ….
Kripa: andhey ho dekh ker nahi…………..she stops …her beat skips …her heart was about to come in her mouth ….her gaze stuck to the face …of person whom she bumped with!....finally we see …a deep pair of deep brown eyes ……looking at kripa's face …with careless sights …like saying " why are u looking at me like this?" …and then his lips …….finally his face ……..and whole ..personality …he seems to be like …perfect man …..with height of about 6 fts … charming and attractive features …..some one comes from behind and pets hims …kripa also comes out of her dream world ! person who pets that man …start saying


Person : arey yaar ANGAD ..kahan reh gye they …oh Kripa tum yahan

Angad looks at person and then Kripa in disbelief manner …..and the he again looks at Kripa and smile …….and say warmly!

Angad: hi Kripa I m angad

Kripa(shyly): hi

Person: and u know me na …or may I introduced my self again ..bhabi ji

Kripa: no need karthick bhaya …wesey yaha koi hai jis ke samney app apna intro de saktey ho ..mishtyyyyyyyyyyy

Karthick becomes almost red ..angad laughs at his cousin's reaction ! and taunts

Angad: bhaya app sharmatey kitney sweet dektey ho

Kripa just enjoy being close with …angad ..and impressed with his attitude ……! Kripa then suddenly ask

Kripa: can we all have coffee together

Angad: no actually mujey office jana aur …coffee hum abhi ghar se pee ker aarrahey hein

Kripa: don't worry bill main pay kerdongi

Angad: baat bill ki nahi hai Kripa ji …baat ha ye ke app vasu aunty aur humari damni aunty ……..oper arrahey hein wo dekhya capsule main aur …jahan tak mujey yaad hai hum ..shaadi tak nahi mil saktey the rule is rule …..bye and take care !

He left ..and Kripa was stunned at his so cool reply …mishty comes from behind ..and pets her

Mishty: so ….fida kon howa wo ya tu

Kripa: us ko tu hona hi pareyga …coz …now …..ajj se balki abhi se ..angad khanna ager kisis ka hai tu wo hai Kripa sharma ….no ..kripa angad khanna .!

Coming up: ...angad's family ....kripa convince angad for a chat on phone at least !

Mrs.Fr.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 March 2006 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
nobody like this first part Cry my hear breaks down in thousand pieces
~Angel~ Goldie

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Posted: 07 March 2006 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
hugggiez cuteeeee
that was just fabbbbbbbbbbb Tongue
jaldi cont karooooo cant wait LOL
amneetkaur_24 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 March 2006 at 6:04am | IP Logged
i luved the part! In fact, im already in love with this fan fic! Plz cont. soon! Great job!
Mrs.Fr.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 March 2006 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
i m not gonna continue no body like this fanfic Cry   Angry
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Posted: 08 March 2006 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
plz continue
i think ur fan fic is brilliant
plz plz plz continue
Misfit_ Goldie

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Posted: 08 March 2006 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
I'm a silent reader of all ur fan fics...sometimes I just dont comment, but I do read ' plz dont think no one like them. Embarrassed
Mini786 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 March 2006 at 2:07pm | IP Logged
ur fanfic is just great
i love it
continue soon!!

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