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They stood there for what seemed like eternity...neither of them looking at each other...
Then..their eyes met. She was lost in his eyes..he was lost in hers...
"Manvi! Virat!" chachi ji cried, walking towards them. "Haye mein mar javan! Tum dono yaha ho! Maine tum dono ko kaha kaha nahi dhoonda!" Virat turned away from Manvi to look at Chachi. Chachi seeing them both unusually quiet said: "Arre kya huwa?! Yeh shayad pehli baar hai jo mein tum dono ko jhagarte huwe nahi dekh rahi hoon."Still no response. "Tum dono to bilkul Shahrukh aur Kajol ki tarha silent khare ho, jab kuch kuch hota hai mein kajol ki shaadi salman se hone waali thi, yaad hai?"Chachi assuming that either of them were not going to say anything, said: "Acha ab andar chalo. Manvi tumhare jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai".
"Theek hai chachi.." Manvi walked away, making sure to not look at Virat. Chachi was just about to follow her, when she saw Virat staring at Manvi walking away. "Virat..kya huwa?!" said Chachi, tapping him on the shoulder. "Huh kuch nahi chachi, chalo chalte hai..."replied Virat following Manvi inside.
Scene shift: Inside the Vadera mansion
"Lo agaye yeh dono". Vanshika smiled as Manvi and Virat walked into the house. "Kya huwa Manvi beta? Mere bete ne phir shuru kar diya tumhe satane mein?" she said walking towards Manvi. Vanshika placed her hand on Manvi's cheek. Manvi looked towards her, trying her best to put a smile.
"Didi kaha thi aap?! Mein aap ka kab se intezaar kar raha hoon. Aap ne kaha tha do minute mein wapas aajaongi. Kaha chali gayi thi aap?" Manvi was not paying attention to what Dabbu was saying at all. Uski taraf mat dekhna.."Di! Kya huwa?" insisted Dabbu. "Huh..kuch nahi.." said Manvi, not looking up.
"Acha to hum chalte hai Swamini ji. Jeevika ghar pe humara intezaar kar rahi ho gi" said Beeji.
"Ji, theek hai, kal mulakaat ho gi, namaste."
Manvi started walking towards the door, not looking up, when suddenly she bumped into someone. She looked up to see Virat standing in front of her. Their eyes met for a split second..then Virat moved out of the way, letting Manvi go through. Vanshika who was looking at them, sensed them both behaving a little strangely with each other. In dono ko kya huwa? Just then, without taking another look back at Manvi, Virat walked straight up to his room. Kuch to huwa hai'thought Vanshika.
Scene shift: At night
Yeh sab kya tha? Yeh mujhe kya ho gaya tha? Mein..aur...she couldn't even say his name. She was sitting on her bed, leaning her head against the wall, unable to sleep. Maine usko..woh mujhe...she sat there irritated, not being able to find any answers...yeh sab kaise..hum dono...nahi manvi..iss sab ke barre mein sochne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai..lekin yeh sab bhoolna itna aasan bhi nahi hai...humne..jab usne mujhe chuwa toh..toh mein..yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai...?
Virat stood by the window, in the dark, lost in his thoughts. Yeh mujhe kya ho gaya tha...maine Manvi ko..woh mujhe...yeh sab kya tha...iss sab ka matlab kya hai? Jo huwa woh thik nahi tha...lekin mujhe bura kyun nahi lag raha hai..kya jo sab huwa..kya woh sach mein thik nahi tha...?
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