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Originally posted by Ashley007

awesome jst loved all d parts Smile and which is ur other ff ???

thanks and u will find them here

Originally posted by asmaju

update soon shivs
Originally posted by joshyalbina

Yaar nxt update soon plzzz

Hey My holidays starting from next week so will be able to update soon after that

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Chapter 15

Kriya went closer to Sharon in order to take Kriya but she got close

 enough to whisper I forgive you to Sharon in her ears 

At this Sharon surprised everyone with her reaction she hugged kriya

 tight as if she was holding on to dear life and Kriya passed Jiya to

 Jai

 nearby and returned it 


Everyone was shocked at this reaction.


Kriya pulled her pulled her out of the hug but Sharon was not ready as

 she hugged her tight again, tears streaming down her face,

 threatening

 not to stop.


Sharon spoke through her tears, her voice hoarse: I am really sorry

 Kriya


Kriya: Ssshh


Kriya was not rubbing her back to comfort her and the weaklings and

 dazzlings were witnessing history here.


Kriya: It is ok, stop crying


Sharon: I am sorry, I am really sorry


Neha went up to Kriya and Sharon and then put her hand over Sharon's

 head. Sharon pulled out from Kriya's hug and pulled Neha into a hug as

 she also owed her an apology.


Sharon: I am sorry Neha; I was a really bad girl


Neha: Neha forgiving you rona stop karo


She pulled Sharon out of her hug and both Kriya and Neha were facing

 Sharon and her big green eyes were pleading them to forgive her, she

 was not satisfied with the answer even though she knew she was

 forgotten. Kriya and Neha repeated again together this time using

 hands to show that they had really forgotten her.


Neha and Kriya: We really have forgotten you Sharon


Sharon smiled through her tears, and Kriya and Neha wiped off her

 tears and she hugged them again choking them with her hands.


Kriya: Sharon tum bohot bhari ho gayi ho


Sharon: huh how dare you? Mein bhari nahi houn ok


Neha: Neha thinking same Sharon getting Bhari


Sharon got real angry and Kriya and Neha gave each other a look of

 mar gaye and started to run around the room with Sharon right at

 their heels ready to catch them and then beat them up. Sharon was

 smiling and not caring about anything. The dazzlers were frowning that

 Sharon has forgotten everything kya.


Simmi: What is Sharon doing with these poor people?


Rinni: Are they poor?


Nilesh: Idiot


Vicky: Let it be Na yaar she will soon forget once she is in college


Rey: No I think there should be no divide now and that is the way

 forward.


While the Weaklings were discussing


Vishakha: What are they doing? Did Kriya forget that she is a

 weakling and Neha too?


Bharat: Ab humari dance team ka kya?


Amar: Tya Taar Tahe Hain Ye Tab (Kya kaar rahe hai yeh sab)


Swayam seeing the confusion on everyone's face told Sharon, Kriya and

 Neha to explain the story to everyone and that day they got Kriya

 and her whole family and also the friends sat and heard their story

 and how each person felt after this incident


Guys hope you liked it please like and comment. I know it is small but 

sorry I am really busy. Pm's will be sent later.


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Edited by The007Shivani - 23 April 2012 at 11:32am

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itna chota sa that.
i read it twice but still speechless .
lovely update shivs.
way to go gal.
continu ethis part soon plz u cant stop it at such a point.
Amazing update.
Awesome blossom.



Edited by asmaju - 10 April 2012 at 10:40am

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