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guys i have finished writing part 1 of chapter 9 and posting it right now

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Chapter 9 part 1

Kriya was trying hard to escape Rey's grasp but it was not helping as rey was tightening the grip on her wrist. Kriya had her eyes closed the whole time so she could not see rey. She was too scared to open her eyes and rey saw that in her face and loosened the grip and leaned more into her and pressed his body's against hers but then he felt kriya's body stiffen and he was surprised that she still had not opened her eyes and he thought that how can she be so sensitive if she can back answer Sharon.

Rey: Kriya open ur eyes it is me rey

Kriya opened her eyes and rey saw that they were num and she was about to cry any second but kriya did not cry instead she blinked away the tears.

Kriya: let go of me (kriya said this really weakly and her voice was hoarse and rey thought that she had been crying up all night or it was because of him and the dazzlers).

Rey: look all I wanna

Kriya interrupted him: let go of me plz

Rey saw the fear in her eyes maybe the same that he saw when he was going to kiss he and he stepped back but still holding onto her wrist

Kriya: let go of my hand now (she turned to leave but rey put his free hand next to her shoulder and the other he let go of her wrist and then put his arm next to her hand and then he had trapped her)

Rey: You are such a baatcutter not ready to listen r u?

Kriya thought better and said: What do u want?

Rey: Forgiveness Look I am sorry about the kiss inci...

Kriya: Stop I don't wanna talk about it and yes u r forgiven just stay away from me do u get it? (In the last word her voice broke).

That was all rey wanted to hear but somehow his heart was not ready to leave her or he was not satisfied with her answer

Guys part 2 coming up real soon just writing it now as I only remembered this much and re-writing part 2 now.

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Edited by The007Shivani - 14 February 2012 at 4:49pm

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awesum update dude part 2 jaldi post karna..Embarrassed

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awsum update !! but short !! anyways !! loved it !! jaldi updating part 2 !!

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thanks a lot and yeah updating part 2 soon

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nice Smile... hope you update soon... eargerly waiting Day Dreaming

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