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sweet.shona

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 1:40am | IP Logged
hey i am new here... today is my first day in forums... writing my first ff and i m in love with gohem Jodi.. the best Jodi i love their on screen chemistry.. so here i go friends.. 

                                                                  PART-1

I was taking flight to home back after a long trip it has been 6 month i was out of my home, my parents, my family and my brother and sister.. it feels so good when u be at home with your loved ones. i got my tickets and i had my security checks and all. I got my window side seat in business class .. i tightened my seat belts and i was reading a book. here my flight take off ..

after few minutes:

A girl wearing red mini skirts with silky white shirt having red coat on that with half tied long hair was looking so beautiful was standing in front of me. Her smile was like a small innocent child and she was looking at me. she didn't used much make up but a light pink gloss and mascara. 

Sir do you like to have some drink ?- a gal
yes i would like to drink one orange juice with less sugar in it... ahem said

Gal poured a fresh orange juice from a bottle. With a smile she gave to me and i was just looking at her beautiful shining eyes.

Would you like to have something else sir- a gal asked
no thanks- ahem said with a smile

gal smiles again and went forward to see other passengers with her drinks cart.

wow she is awsome- ahem thinks

I was looking to her and time flew away in seconds. I came back to my senses in when plane pilot told us to fasten our seat belts .I stopped writing my dairy with a smile on my face. Yes it was time to land.. and here the plane lands. 

Ahem comes out from airport and  jigar was standing there to receive me. He waved his hand, ahem smiles . jigar comes there running and hugs him.

bhai, i cant believe you are here.. 6 months OMG - jigar said
hmm i missed you my little bro- ahem says 
m too bhai lets go..everyone is waiting for you- jigar says

A group of girls were coming out laughing and ahem  saw that gal again. She was teasing her friends and all the gals were laughing .ahem goes but his diary falls down.. gal come and sees this...she took diary and put in her purse  When she spot two ladies... she came running to them... 

gal: mami mami i missed u so much...
Urmilla: missed u too my gopi Dikra. haye haye look it yourself u got so thin.. u didn't  eat food  properly hmm.. see yourself
Gopi: oh ho mami i got thin because i was missing home made food
rashi: if u both have finished your conversation can i meet my darling sister

gopi hugged rashi tightly...  urmilla smiled at both of gals..

urmilla: lets go home
rashi: yeah will have lots of fun

two gals were giggling and they come out... where ahem was standing and jigar was putting his luggage.

i will drive rashi ben- gopi
rashi: no i will
gopi: rashi ben please i got  rare chance to drive

ahem was looking at gopi .. she was speaking so innocently. 

urmila: dikra give her keys, see she is not in home all the time . so give her keys.. its getting late.. we have to go for party also...

rashi: okay mom ..here {gopi} take it mummy ki chamchi
gopi smiles and sits in car and drives...

here ahem smiles and get into car.

ahem reaches home where all of them were waiting for him..
ahem hugs his parents.. then his kaka and kaki.. then her loving sister kinjal and his brother in law elesh... then her sweet niece {kinjal and elesh niece his name is anay, he is just 4rs old very naughty}. ahem picks him up

ahem: what's up big boy  {he ruffled his hairs}
anay: mamu mishhh misssh... { mamu i missed u}
ahem: u missed me
anay: yes mamu
ahem: why your jigar mamu didn't gave you chocolates??
anay: no maa muu...  jigar maamu soyii soyii { he means to say that jigar always sleeped}
jigar: you naughty you always got two chocolates from me everyday lier..
hetal: jigar he is a small kid Dikra.

anay claps ClapClapClap and smiles

jigar: anay i will not give u anything from now..
kinjal: stop it bhai dont spoil my child.. he will ask for chocolates everyday..
kokila: did you forgot your days kinjal. you use to be like this.one chocolate from me , ur dad, ur kaka and your kaki... 

kinjal smiles and Elesh also...
elesh: that why i think why he is too naughty... no doubt he s gone on his mom..
kinjal makes face and everyone laughs..
hetal: Ahem Dikra we have to go for a party in evening .. so fresh up and have rest.
ahem: party where.. 
hetal: mehra's having a engagement party
ahem: okay... then i should have some rest...

ahem goes to his room when he stops and says

ahem: mom
kokila: i know your green tea
Anay: mumma anaay bi mammu saath jaaiye jaaiye { anay wants to go with ahem to his room}
kinjal: not now Anay.. we will go in evening..
Anay: okay


Gopi came out after getting bath ... Rashi comes to her room with urmilla. they both sit on bed.. gopi and rashi put her head in her lap...

urmilla: gopi Dikra your mamma has gone to village for some work.  I dont know when he will come.. but he said you to call him

gopi: ji mami...

rashi: gopi for how many days u have came?
gopi: for 2 weeks...
rashi: so short why? you leave your job yaar. we  hardly see you here.
gopi: rashiben you know i have worked so hard to get this job, i can't
rashi: tell her mummy she can look for some administrative job? what is there in your job My air hostess?
gopi: rashiben you know i love to travel then.. oh i forgot to give something? rashiben please give my bag...

rashi gave bag to gopi. gopi took out two gifts . one is for rashi and other one is for her dearest mami

rashi opened the gift and she found this



very beautiful diamond ring.. rashi sees and smiles

rashi: thank you gopi but why you spend so much 
urmilla: yes Dikra.. rashi is ryte.
gopi: oh ho mami i spend money on my family, i earn for this family
urmilla: but Dikra, god had given us everything.. we all are happy that's it
gopi: this is my love now plz plz close your eyes
urmilla smiles: okay {she closes her eyes}

gopi puts this on her mami neck


mami opens her eyes and sees
urmilla: this is so beautiful.. thank you gopi dikra..here have your tea and get ready for party {urmilla goes}

gopi: mami wait.
urmilla: what happend Dikra:
gopi: have this

gopi puts check on her hand...
urmilla: what is this
gopi: my pay mami
urmilla: gopi when will you grow big dikra you and rashi always do the same...

gopi smiles and rashi also... urmilla hugs gopi and goes.. gopi goes to rashi.. gopi sits with rashi

gopi: how is your work going on rashiben?
rashi: its fantastic. you know event management is really good option for career.
gopi: so you are enjoying
rashi: off course.. OK what are you wearing for party
gopi: party whose party?
rashi: do u know shalini mehra.. my classmate
gopi: yeah the one fatty
rashi: oey , i will hit you now
gopi: just kidding ur best friend
rashi: she is getting engaged..so we are going there
gopi: okay...



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tell me did u liked it or not friends...
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Edited by sweet.shona - 03 December 2011 at 1:45am

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 2:00am | IP Logged
first of all welcome to forums dear
ur ff is too good and i liked the title of your ff
wow gopi is air hostess ... nice start dear.. first sight love hmm
anay is soo cutee... happy family wow
hope u will continue soon...
good job dear
all the best for ur ff
 

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 2:51am | IP Logged
very good ff. Nice start.update soon.very nice to know tat everyone s good.

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
very nice gopie air hostess wow i like it update soon and welcome in forum Smile 

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
great ff.loved the start.
Welcome to the forum.

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Very nice start Cant wait to read the next part
Welcome to the ForumHug

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 7:40am | IP Logged
good start
had me intrigued 

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 9:17am | IP Logged
great start...it wonderful..

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