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IPKKND: All I want: Chap-5:43 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely update...so many things coming up to light...bt I as usual have questions...

So why is Khushi hidin in da dark corner...I too am worried after reading da flashback.

Why ask Arnav about his trip n nt even meet his eyes...wats happenin 2 her...the whole nite the Arnav in flashback n I thout the same...why she asked ids?...was she afraid of sumthing happenin while hes nt there n didn't wanted him 2 leave..thus shyin away nt meetin his eyes so as not to look needy or greedy 4 his presence or is she truly hidin something...if her troubles r nostalgic den his r burning.

Here Arnav knws about Shayams truth ..bt does Anjali knws it?...bt if Arnav knws the truth den why hide anything....n if her family(or wat these ppl call emseves)had insulted hr on da loss of their beloved Shayam so dat means they too don't knw da truth...n if Arnav has doubts about hr behavior den dat means no confession has taken place either...why Khushi sent JP to village n how come Shayam knew Arnavs absence?...

Bt I knw sumthing Arnav doent knw...da attraction was mutual nt just him...she equally yearns 4 him...hes her Poseidon all da way

I love dis chapter coz I see a more human Arnav here...hes bravely afraid of losin her...hes confidently confused about her feelins 4 him...n acutely clueless as to how he'll survive without her...Yup hes soo human n feeble with da strength of TITANIUM...

ur a just WOW!!! Ur writin reminds me of dis thing Richard Wright  said..

"I would hurl words into this darkness and wait for an echo, and if an echo sounded, no matter how faintly, I would send other words to tell, to march, to fight, to create a sense of hunger for life that gnaws in us all."ur writin makes me hungry 4 more echos... 

I don't knw why bt these poems r nw makin themselves remembered(wished I had em in my head durin exams)bt Arnav is lossin Khushi n my heart jst turns around to dese lines...

". . . Hearing great rain above me, I now remember
A girl who stood by the door and shut her eyes:
Her pale cheeks glistened with rain, she stood and shivered.
Into a forest of silver she vanished slowly . . ."--
Corad Aiken

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sanchari...such a lovely update dear!!!πŸ€—
 
 
Gosh I was so excited that I was almost bitting my nails off and sitting on the edge of my chair!!!😳⭐️
 
Hats off to u dear!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
 
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
update soon plz πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow Sancho!! Read two parts at a stretch and i love your story.
Its so emotional and you write it so well. Gosh its making me cry.
So much pain? Ahh this shyam needs to die. 
Please update the next part soon girl.
Cannot wait for it πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
love this story ..plz add me in your pm list ..
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luved it!!! plz add me as ur buddy n pm me!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey...i just started to read ur story its really good...plz add me to urpmlist :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Continue pls dear waiting to read the next part =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh please please post soon...pleaseee😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh next part ... when will you come ...