Paper Boats - A Poem Dedicated to Khushi - Page 2

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Smriti

@serialjunkie

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: minimuffin86
why is every body hell bent on making me sad?!?!

that was beautiful. mere words can not convey how it made me feel all choked up yet free inside... u get what im saying?

brilliant!

🤗 would this help?

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Paro Khan AKA Choti Ki Di

@P4RO

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

"Paper boats, paper boats made of pages of my life
Putting smiles on children as they grab boats aside
Floating down the river in a silent parade
Paper boats, paper boats with pages of my life I made"

Wow...that was just beautiful🤗
I'm left speechless😊
You are talented my sister...well done.👏

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

IF-Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

khushi is really fantastic and can do anything for others happiness and she cares about others ,kind &lovely.❤️ Edited by bridgeofdreams - 12 years ago

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Mihika

@banditqueenn.

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

That was Written Pretty Well...I loved it to the core ! xD

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swaram

@swaram

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

That was so touching! Suits Khushi perfectly!

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FairyLiquidSoap

@FairyLiquidSoap

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

Very evocative and haunting of special times in any one's life and reminded me of something I gave up in my past and yes a very apt dedication.

i never knew you could write poetry so lyrically Hats off to you Serial👏

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smitar

@smitar

IF-Rockerz

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

Absolutely superb!

And applicable not just for Khushi, but for doddering oldies like me who look back at their past life and feel happy & sad in turns.

U made my day!

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