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wel, sahana_125 started a great fan fic but she didnt want to conitnue it so i will do it for her....here are all the old parts....

In this FAN-FIC these are the characters

Angad- 21 years old goes to college, Really hot!!!! he has had loads of gfs changes them a lot. But has never really loved any of them. Belongs from a Rich but traditional family.Lives in Bombay.

Tanya- Angad's gf

Josh- 21 years old. Angad's really good friend, goes to college with him. Flirty guy who tries to get every girl and sometimes is succesful too. lol.

Prithvi- 21 years old. Is frnds with Angad and Josh and goes to college with them. Sweet guy. Is single rite now.

Aaliyah- Angads loving younger sister. 20 years old.Goes to the same college as her bro. Sweet nice girl.

Naina- Angad's mom. Nice and always hopes for the best of Angad.

Dilip- (Not a character tht is seen much in the story but anyways) Angad's dad A really rich guy he is a well known business man, always busy and out of the house for business.

Kripa- 20years old.Sweet girl. Really cute she lives in Nainital goes to college. Believes in love at first sight, and tht it is a really sweet emotion. She is currently going out with a guy who she likes.

Shahid- 20 years old. Kripa's Boyfrnd, goes to the same college as her. Nice guy, Pretty hot. Played by rajeev khandelwal.Likes Kripa (remember they r not in serious love with eachother or anything, they just like each other and are more than frnds )

Sania- Kripa's Bestfriend 20 years old. Goes to the Same college as Kripa. Really Nice girl.

Sahana- Kripa's younger sis gonna go to college in 3 weeks. She is currently in Canada...... She is really sweet, loving, bubbly and funny type of girl.

She is 19 and a half years old. She was adopted but she is given just as much love as is given to kripa and the fact tht she was adopted doesn't bug her.

She loves her parents and sis.

Suryabaan- Kripa's dad a really nice guy. He loves his daughter's a lot, he is a rich guy, Has a business Of his own they are spread out all around the world currently living in Nainital.His weakness is his daughters puppy faces, he gives them watever they ask for or don't ask for.

Gayatri- Kripa's mom really nice too loves her familly and 2 daughters. She has her own buisness in boutiques. She is nice and wants her daughters to be nice and traditional too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Part 1

At khanna House in Mumbai

Angad is sleeping sweetly in his nice big comfy looking bed.......he doesn't know tht it's 8 30 am already... you hear someone's payal ringing and you also see the feet the payal is in the camera is slowly moving up and u see a nice urban style cyan coloured skirt and and bright white top and then you see tht the girl is Aaliyah.

Aa- Bhai utho college ke liye late ho jaayenge!!!!!!!!!

A(sleepy tone)- Kya shubha shubha utha rahi ho, sone do na!!!!!

Aa-Bhai it's 8 30 already!

A- Kya?

he gets up and starts to get his clothes out from the closet....

A- aaj to mein gaya!!!!SHIT!!!SHIT!!SHIT!!!

Aa- aaj aap college mein late pochne ke liye itna kyu daar raha ho?

A- mujhe college nahi aaj Tanya ke saath bahar jaana tha aur mein pehle bhi kitne baar late pohocha hoon.

Aa- to kya aap Tanya se daar the hai?(in a naugthy tone and gives him a surprised look)

A- nahi to! Fine mein aaj usa pick up karne jaonga hi nahi aur keh donga ke aaj mein busy hoon kisi aur din chalte hain

Aa- Bhai dun be sooo mean!

A- Well sry can't change my natural talent! ok ok now let's go!

Aa- ok, we will pick up breakfast on the way from Mc Donalds or something.

A- ok

They both leave. And get into Angad's Great looking Red sports car....

 

.At Sharma house(kripa's house)

She has a day off from College. So she is at home on the phone talking to her boyfrnd Shahid.
They don't show her yet though. You just she a girl twisting the phone wire with her fingers, and hear their coversation.

K- Jaan i am sooo bored......I am gonna go now k

S- No!!! dun plzzz stay

K- I have to go take a shower!

S( in a cute tone)- mein bhi aaon?

K- shut up! Shahid i really have to go mom datengi!bye love you jaan

S- love u too baby!

Kripa goes to take a shower. Then she comes out. Now you see her with her hair wet and she is combing it looking at herself
in the mirror.(thinking to herself) Oh shoot mein ne mom aur dad se pucha bhi nahi 2 weeks wala trip ke bare mein.

G- Kripa jaldi naste ke liye ah jao.

k- aayi ma.

Kripa running down the stairs fast.... she is bout to trip but doesn't fall (luckly)

G- Dheere beta, dheere niche aao.

K- Dad gaya?

G- Nahi naste ke baad jaenge.

 

 

 

Part 2

K- oh ok. (Thinking to herself- yes now is my chance to ask both r here)

Suryabaan- goodmorning beta kya soch rahe ho?

K- Woh....(pause) kuch nahi dad

S- kya huya beta kuch chahiye hai?

K- Woh dad mein aur mere kuch dost soch rahe the ki.... since exams bhi abhi khatham huye hai to...um...Kya hum two weeks ke liye ghoom ne out of country ja sakte hai?(she makes the irresistable puppy face)

Su- Sure beta. Kaha jaana hai?

k- Um kahi bhi chala ga.. socha nahi hai abhi tak.

Su- Tum kiske saath ja rahe ho?

K- Um Sania(Thinking Shahid to nahi bol sakti) Aur bhi kuch log ja rahe hai... um Rita, Sowmya wagera

Su- sirf larkiyaan ja rahe hai?

K- haan dad

Su- To tum log Canada kyu nahi chala jate?

Gayatri coming out of the kitchen says

G- haan waha pe humara ghar bhi to hai... wahi par raha sakti ho aur waisa hi Sahana ko mil ke usko apne saath wapas india la sakte ho, waisa bhi uska fashion ke woh course bhi khatam hua hai.

K- theek hai Mein mere baaki sab doston se bhi pooch lete hoon waise bhi hum sab aaj shopping ja rahe hain na.

They all eat and kripa gets to her car a silver convertable mercedes.


Part # 3


Back In Mumbai

Aaliyah and Angad pick up breakfast on the way and leave to college. (they r in the car right now)

(the tune of Kaisa yeh pyaar hai starts ringing)

Aa- Bhai ur cell phone is ringing, (no response from Angad caz music was turned on really loud)
        Bhai ur cell phone is ringing!!!!!!
Angad gives his cellphone to Aaliyah

A- Tanya ka phone hoga to phone off kardo.

Aa- No!!! I will pick it up.

She turns it on and is bout to say hi just then Angad snatches it from her hand and turns it off.

Aa- Bhai!!!!

A- Sorry sis i go by my rules, Angad Khanna Kabhi kisi ladki ke peeche nahi bhaag ta, ladkiyaan uske peeche bhaag thi hain.

A- Angad khanna this, Angad Khanna that! Seriously! anyways not like she is tht nice or anything to me anyways so watever!

They reach at the college..... They get to the canteen and meet up with Prithvi and Josh....

Josh- Hello Aaliyah sup?

Aa- ( she gives josh a look like watever) Bhai i am gonna go to my friends buhbyezzz...

Josh- (with Dreammy eyes) Bye Aaliyah!

A- Josh seriously at least dun try for my sis.

P- Hey Angad werent's you supposed to go shopping with Tanya or sumthing.........pauses..... ok nvm i get it woh Angad wale rules.

A- oh yeah!

After a while of CHilling..... Tanya shows up.

T- Hey Prithvi, Hi Josh! She sits beside Angad!!! Dun even try any explanations! (she says looking at Angad)

A- Why the hell do u think main tumhe kuch explain karne ki koshish karunga! Angad doesn't need to explain!

T- First of tum ne mujhe pick up karna tha aur hum ne shopping bhi janna tha. Tumhare Phone bhi off tha, so Baby u gonna need to have a good enuff Reason for all This!
( Angad starts getting mad now)
A- You kno wat i dun like demanding girlfriends! We need to break up.

T- Jaan r u seriously?

A- Yes! hun i am damn serious!

Tanya just gets up and leaves.

J- Yeh tumne kya kiya woh kitni achi ladki thi?

A- Tumhe woh itni hi achi lagti hai to tum kyu nahi usko puchte date ke liye?

J- That is just wat i was thinking man. ( he leaves to go to TAnya)

A- It's nice to be single again....(and smiles)

P- Hey Angad humara Break abhi aane walla hai wat say hum sab kahi out country chalte hai?

A- Not a bad idea! Hum kaha chale?

J- Oh yeah me and Tanya are on man!

A- Great r u gonna bring her along to the trip then?

J- Kaunsa trip?

Then Prithvi explains it to him.

A- Hum Europe chale?

P- Already summer mein gaya tha.

J- Usa?

Tanya and Aaliyah come and they both find out bout the trip, and Aaliyah also finds out bout the break-up.

Aa- Bohot baar ja chuke hai.

T- Then wat about Canada.

They all say Great.

 

Part # 4 In Nanital

When Kripa get in the parking lot of the mall she is trying to find a spot but most of them r full so she has been driving since 15 mins in the parking lot and all of a sudden when she in the middle of this alley between these parked cars someone is honking continuously to this Kripa gets angry.....

K- (thinking to herself omg can this stupid idiot not wait the is a car in front of me)

Person kept honking ...
Now kripa looks into her rareview mirror and she sees that there is a guy in the car and the guy is none othe than sahil her bf.
Kripa gets happy now and waves, finally she finds a pot right near her spot there is another spot for Sahil.
When kripa puts her gear to park and gets out of the car she meets with Sahil and they hug.

Kripa - Hello hun!

Sahil- I missed you.

K- ok enuff lovey dovey let's go in now.

When they were walking to the door this opens the door for Kripa and then when she walks in the guy started whistling and stares at her ass while whistling, to this Sahil gets really pissed and he starts beating up this guy rite infront of the mall entrance Kripa looks back and sees him punching the guy she is trying to stop him so tht it doesn't get too serious but she is also enjoying the fact that he is being protective bout her.The guy falls down when Sahil punches him and then they leave.

K- uski kya zaroorat thi?

S- tumne dekha ki woh tumhari taraaf kaise dekh kar whistle kar raha tha?

K- Rehne do abhi chalte hai.

They start walking into some stores to check out some clothes for themselves caz there was a valentine formal prom type dance in their college that they were going to go to tonight and the best dressed couple got like the King and Queen award.


K- I think we shud wear matching colours. Wat do u say?

S- sure watever u say hun.(he was holding on to her waist and walking, he kissed her cheek)

K- Ohhhhhhhh look at this pretty dress wat do u say shud i try it on?

S- yeah sure!

Kripa tries the dress on and then it's is kinda loose on her so she calls Sahil into the change room.

K- Do u like the dress?

S- I love it but not as much as you!

Kripa turns around and faces the mirror. but isn't it kind of loose?

Sahil starts to get all lovey dovey and starts kissing her cheeks and he turn her around and holds on to her waist and slowly brings her closer and closer he can feel her heart beating quite fast and the both look deep into each others eyes.Then he kisses her lips gently and then the kiss grows more passionate and after a while they pull back from each other he still has quite a tight grip on her waist then he starts kissing her neck and cheeks then after a while.......

Kripa - Sahil choodo na....

Sahil- nahi aaj chodne ka mood nahi hai (says while kissing her neck)

Kripa- plzzzzzzzzzzzz Sahil.

Sahil- ok promise k tum yuhi mujhe pyaar karoge

K- woh toh mein karti hi hoon.

S- nahi budhu is type ka pyaar.

Kripa is near the door rite now she quietly unlocks the door and then she runs and gives him a naughty smile and says...

K- Nahi!!!!

And starts running.... he starts running after her they r running at the back of the huge store where no one is there......
Sahil finally catches her.

S- Kya kaha tumne?( he holds on to her and brings her really close)

K- I mean yes jaanu (and gives him a cute smile)

S- acha toh ye walla dress lena mat bhool na...

K- chota size lengey yeh walla bada hai.

S- maloom hai lekin yeh dress special hai kyun ki u kno is mein humne pehli baar make out kiya hai..

K- Great mujhe pehle keh dete toh mein chota walla size pehenleti na.(she says giving him a naughty smile)

They buy the one tht she was wearing and a smaller size too. The cashier asks..(ca)

Ca- Aapko dress pasand aya?

Both- Bohot pasand ayaa.

Sahil- aur apke change rooms bhi bohot pasand ayaa.Kyun Kripa?

K hits his arm lightly.

Then go to the next store to get Sahil something. They buy him a black tux with a white shirt and pink tie.

K- Sahil woh do week wale trip mein hum Canada chale?

S- Sure jaan kahi par bhi leke jao yeh banda hazeer hai.

K- Zyaada sweet bane ki koshish mat karo ( in naughty tone)
     Accha good bas tumhe hi puchna baki rehe gaya tha baaki sab ko to puch liye maine.

S- Kaun kaun aa raha hai?

K- um Sania aur uska bf Adhi, aur Sowmya aur uska bf Shamit bas aur hum dono.

S- good couples hai to thori privacy bhi milegi.

K- Sahil!

THey both have lunch and leave in their own cars. In the next post there will be pics of wat they were going to wear.
I tried to make it romantic hope u like it. Dun worry there will be way more lovey dovey scenes later or not with Angad.... well i dun think the suspense thing is working with me...lol...

Part # 5

In Mumbai

Angad is packing his clothes since they have to leave tomorrow at 12 pm.......So r all the other pplz.

Angad thinking to himself I hope i meet hot girlz there.Just then Aaliyah comes into his room.....

Aa- Bhai did u finish packing?

A- nahi bas ab tum aah gayi ho na to tum pack karlo...

Aa- Bhai!!!

A- plzzz ok ok i am done my packing anyways...

Angad is just sitting there on the bed telling her wat to pank and wat not to pack...... when Aaliyah asks a question

Aa- Bhai tumne Tanya ke saath break-up kyun kiya?

After a while he says.....

A- Aaliyah tum to jaanti ho ke mujhe acha nahi lagta ki jab log mujhe kehte rehete hai mien kya karu kya nahi.... She is just too much... aur tum toh jaanti ho ke mujhe waise bhi kuch khaas pasand nahi thi .... I am waiting for that one special girl that my heart will tell to listen to.

Aa- hope u find that girl soon.....

A- yea same here!

They both go to bed and wake up the next morning... Eat breakfast say bye to their parents.They meet the gang at the coffee shop from there they r going to go directly to the airport all together.... 

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  

Back in Nanital

Flash back a bit......

Kripa gets ready for the dance and tells her mom that there is a dance today at her college and that she is going to be late....

G- acha beta theek hai tum jao lekin tumne bag pack kar liya kal ke liye?

K- ji mom....Kal subha flight hai 8 am ko jo yaha se bombay jaye gi aur uske baad wahan se flight 12 pm ko hai Russia ke liye uske baad flight Canada ke liye hai.

G- good. Papa ko bhi bye kehe dena kyun hum aaj raat Delhi ja rahe hai business ke kam se ok mom bye ....

She gets out of her house and is waiting to be picked up by Shahid( sry guys for the mix up in the last part)
When her dad comes.....

S- Hi bacha!

K- hi dad! um bye aap aaj ja rahe ho na . mein kal ja rahe hoon aur aaj raat late hone wali hoon kyun ki aaj humare college mein dance hain.
      toh bye dad i am gonna miss u! love u.

S- Love u too beta!(they hug and then he goes inside)

Shahid comes.....

Sh- bohot dair se intezaar ker rahe ho?

K- nahi nahi mein to free hoon ne aur mujhe bhagwan ne banaya gaya hai aap hi ka intezaar karne ke liye(in a sarcastic tone )

Ah- ok ok sorry baba! ab chalen!

K- ok chalo!

They get there meet up with all their frnds and have a blast! They obviously become the king and queen for the competition of the valentines day thing. Then they all leave it's 2 am in the morning and then Shahid drops her home.

Sh- lo a gaya!

K- ok bye!(kisses him on the cheek)

And then she leaves before he cud kiss her back.... She quickly changes and then goes to sleep caz it's really late....

NEXT MORNING!!!!!!!!!!! FIND OUT WAT HAPPENS DO KRIPA AND ANGAD MEET SOON OR NO? FIND OUT!!!!!

I kno this one was a bit short but i had loads of h.w. and i was reading some other fanfics on angad and kripa too!!!they r just too good...

Part #6

Kripa,Shahid,Sania,Abhi,Sowmya and Shamit get to the nanital airport at 6:30 am caz they have to check-in and stuff ...

K- hey guys!

Everyone- hi

Ab-check-in ke liye kitna time lag raha hai na!

Sh- yeah yo i am sooo tired and all i can't wait to get into the flight and go off to sleep....

K- ye same here!

They get onto the flight Kripa and shahid sit together and so do the other couples...

Kripa and shahid go to sleep....

They all get to bombay airport at 10 30 am.......

Angad's and his frnds are already there.....

J- hey Angad u dun mind tht i am going with ur ex-girl do ye?

A- no man it's all kool!

J- k good! caz she's not worth more then our frndship man!

A- aww thnx it's k tho! as long as u can handle her bossyness!

J- if it gets too much u kno i kno wat to do.

A- good man ur learning!

they both laugh...they r all standing in the line to get their baggages checked....
Josh says hi to Shahid and then they get talking.....


J- Hi! r u going to Russia too?

S- ye we r all going to Russia and then Canada....(he points to all his frnds)

J- oh kool! We r all going to Canada too!(he points to all his frnds)

after they get out the line then the groups meet eachother... First kripa's group introduce themselves...

Sa- hi i am Sania!

Sh- and i am shahid

Shamit- and i am shamit!

K- Hi i am kripa!

Ab- and i am Abhi!

So- and i am Sowmya! wat bout u guys?

Now angad's group introduce themselves.....

A- hey i am Angad.

P- i am prithvi!

J- this is josh! (says while pointing to himself)

Aa- Hi i am Aaliyah!

T- and i am Tanya!

Sh- We still have time till the flight comes..... Is there anyplace to chill here in the airport?

A- yeah there is a starbucks here!

They all sit down..... and then angad and kripa are sitting opposite to eachother!(yay!)
Angad thinks kripa is really hot! Kripa thinks the same thing bout angad and the she says to herself...

K-(Why the hell am i getting attracted to Angad, WELL HE IS DAMN HOT!)

it's half an hour to their plane to board..........................

and now we wil continue! ooo- btw- its all gona be in english now cuz i suk at writing in hindi!!!!!!LOL

Lub,

PrakritiSmile



 



Edited by prakriti - 23 March 2006 at 4:15pm

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prakriti

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so im gonna have a part by either 2morrow or thursday!
Lub,
Prakriti

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i am looking forward to it!!!!!!!!!! and thankyou for continuing

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i'll be waiting LOL

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ANOTHER ONE??

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continue soon Smile

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Originally posted by pakigal34

ANOTHER ONE??

yup! cept Sahana will help me! it her fan fic but she wants help so....

Lub Ya,

PrakriitSmile

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ya guys i'll wait till she posts it and then, it'll be either me or her con.t the story...we'll take turns to entertain u guys!Smile

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