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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 6:18pm | IP Logged

Brother WTH? Woah tht was a shock dang it loved it to the core wow this was amazing and i still not over the fact brother well cousin r u sure oh goddd poor viren my baby's gonna b depressed but why fear when virat and man... Oh my bad wen virmaan is here their name should never b taken for two always as one loved ittt avian and thnx forth pm

This was very short and u left me in a shock nd umm wen will u update next hopin it's sooon m sure u kno wht tht means ssooonn no pressure lol

Thnx for the pm and plz pm me wen u update the cousin"brother" part lol

Edited by Brklyn_gal - 19 December 2011 at 6:27pm

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 6:45pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Brklyn_gal

Brother WTH? Woah tht was a shock dang it loved it to the core wow this was amazing and i still not over the fact brother well cousin r u sure oh goddd poor viren my baby's gonna b depressed but why fear when virat and man... Oh my bad wen virmaan is here their name should never b taken for two always as one loved ittt avian and thnx forth pm

This was very short and u left me in a shock nd umm wen will u update next hopin it's sooon m sure u kno wht tht means ssooonn no pressure lol

Thnx for the pm and plz pm me wen u update the cousin"brother" part lol

:L Thank you for replying Smile

And yeah the whole cousin/brother thing, I consider my cousins as my own brothers and sisters, like I don't differentiate between my real siblings and my cousins, so I guess that's why that is.

Also, what's a story without a bit of drama LOL

All will be explained as it goes on... (TBH: I personally have nooo idea where or how or what is gonna happen, so I'm actually as clueless as you until I actually get round to writing it. [Like Jeevika's starting to like Kunal?] <-- I have no idea why I wrote that in. But stay tuned for Virat's back story, no-ones as straight forward as they seem.)

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 11:32pm | IP Logged

Ohh... this was unexpected but really interesting...
Thanks for the PM and hope to read the next part soon

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shiningstarz

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 11:47pm | IP Logged

FINALLLYYY U UPDATED!!!
was waiting for u to continue frum such a longgg tym!!

bt well, at last u did
and well the part was gud, relly gud!! The virman deal was fab!!
nd viren being cold towards his dadaji and badi ma shows how badly he's been hurt!
oh well nd the TWIST!! kunal is virat & viren's cousin!! OH shitzzz!!

bt am nt worried, as pakka aftr the drama with the help of VirMan VirIka wil cum togethr

continue SOON!!

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 12:09am | IP Logged

ohh nooo...kahani mein twist??? LOL

...luvd viren's attitude..its high tym to stand against those 2...i wish kunal gangs up wid virmaan.

wonderful update Big smile

plz do continue soon...

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 12:55am | IP Logged

Thanks for the PM, like the new twist in the story. One brother in, another out. Smile

Hope to read the next part soon.

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 12:56am | IP Logged

Omg ur terrific!!
I really like how u understand each character and weave ur story. I am glad u give a complete scenario as to what is happening with each family memberinstead of just giving an isolated story of virman and virika

Coming to chapter 4.
Kunal being there was a surprise ! I was expecting viren :( but good twist
Virat lost in thoughts was very well written. I really like the part where he is thinking about the innocence he once had and that immediately reminds him of manvi! Well done at that
Dadaji viren part was short but very effective. It completely shows the tension building between them
Viren shlok!! Aww loved it!!!
And yes twist of kunal being their cousin is amazing !!
Waiting for the next part :)

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Posted: 20 December 2011 at 5:30pm | IP Logged

wow!! nice...what a twist diya !! do upddate sooon

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