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tvlover92

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Hello! :D

Loving your fanfiction! Obviously, I can't prod you onto asking what is up with the sadness - i love mysteries! :P 

Anyways, snippet I liked from Chap 1:
-Virat being Viren's shadow. That was well done and showed a great bond between the brothers.
-Madan and Jeevika's relationship.

snippet I liked from Chap 2:
-Manvi and Dabbu. It's adorable on TV, it's adorable in your fanfic. Period. 
-Ram and Lakhan. Hehehe. So cute!!
-"He found himself missing the old Manvi; his Manvi." Embarrassed & of course, their bandariya-chep- ness :P

Over all, I like your way of writing.

Keep updating!

And please add me to the PM list, too! :)

TC.



Edited by tvlover92 - 03 December 2011 at 11:56pm

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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 2:34am | IP Logged
Hey guys, it's been a busy couple of days. Smile

Sooo sorry for the wait; I've been bogged down with school and my manager at works annoying the hell out of me.

Just some things I want to say: firstly, thank you guys for commenting and liking. I do actually sit and read every comment, it's a source of inspiration. I'm not the best of writers so it's really encouraging Big smile Secondly, hope you guys like this chapter; but I am warning you guys, this is chapter is a bit of a 'filler' chapter. Don't worry no flashbacks, but just exploring more bonds/relationships. Hopefully, there'll be lots of VirMan and Virika next chapter. (PS: anyone else love the whole Virat-Vanshika-Viren relationship, I love it Tongue)

(PSS: Guys it would be really helpful if you added me as a friend/buddy for the PM;s, but you don't have to (: )

Hope you guys enjoy this Tongue

Chapter 3: (My Immortal)

Re-write in progress...



Edited by sabeeha - 18 February 2013 at 7:11am

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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 3:08am | IP Logged
plz pm me wen u update the next part

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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 3:22am | IP Logged
Hope things will get better soon... Thank you so much for the pm Big smile

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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 3:32am | IP Logged
thanx for d pm...looking fwd for next part... :)

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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
awesome 

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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged
hey i love it! specially viren - vanshika part
thanks for the pm. please continue writing :) and let me know when you update next
 

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Posted: 04 December 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
waiting for the next part which will hav maanvi and her chep in it...Day Dreaming

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