hey its really good. i love how you have involved other characters rather than focussing just on the 2 lead couples ! It makes it like a part of ehmmbh
look formward to the next part. pm the next update if possible
have u ever heard of the good getting better and then moves onto something more than excellent??..thats how ur story is going !!!!! i loved it!!!!!!!!! add me 2 ur pm list..a nd update the next chapter fats!!!...waiting...👍🏼