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Troll Master Gogo! @S.H.I.E.L.D. IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

Hello! :D

Loving your fanfiction! Obviously, I can't prod you onto asking what is up with the sadness - i love mysteries! :P

Anyways, snippet I liked from Chap 1:

-Virat being Viren's shadow. That was well done and showed a great bond between the brothers.

-Madan and Jeevika's relationship.

snippet I liked from Chap 2:

-Manvi and Dabbu. It's adorable on TV, it's adorable in your fanfic. Period.

-Ram and Lakhan. Hehehe. So cute!!

-"He found himself missing the old Manvi; his Manvi." 😳 & of course, their bandariya-chep- ness :P

Over all, I like your way of writing.

Keep updating!

And please add me to the PM list, too! :)

TC.

Edited by tvlover92 - 12 years ago

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delete1234 @delete1234 Senior Member

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys, it's been a busy couple of days. 😊

Sooo sorry for the wait; I've been bogged down with school and my manager at works annoying the hell out of me.

Just some things I want to say: firstly, thank you guys for commenting and liking. I do actually sit and read every comment, it's a source of inspiration. I'm not the best of writers so it's really encouraging 😃 Secondly, hope you guys like this chapter; but I am warning you guys, this is chapter is a bit of a 'filler' chapter. Don't worry no flashbacks, but just exploring more bonds/relationships. Hopefully, there'll be lots of VirMan and Virika next chapter. (PS: anyone else love the whole Virat-Vanshika-Viren relationship, I love it 😛)

(PSS: Guys it would be really helpful if you added me as a friend/buddy for the PM;s, but you don't have to (: )

Hope you guys enjoy this 😛

Chapter 3: (My Immortal)

Re-write in progress...

Edited by sabeeha - 11 years ago

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