Hello! :D
Loving your fanfiction! Obviously, I can't prod you onto asking what is up with the sadness - i love mysteries! :P
Anyways, snippet I liked from Chap 1:
-Virat being Viren's shadow. That was well done and showed a great bond between the brothers.
-Madan and Jeevika's relationship.
snippet I liked from Chap 2:
-Manvi and Dabbu. It's adorable on TV, it's adorable in your fanfic. Period.
-Ram and Lakhan. Hehehe. So cute!!
-"He found himself missing the old Manvi; his Manvi." 😳 & of course, their bandariya-chep- ness :P
Over all, I like your way of writing.
Keep updating!
And please add me to the PM list, too! :)
TC.
Edited by tvlover92 - 12 years ago