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prakriti it has already been 2 days!!!!!!!!!!!!!! since you said you will cont!!!!!! please hurry Hug
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i m typing the new part!
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prakriti IF-Dazzler

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1st Part

******Note- its gonna be all in Kripa's POV. *****

It was a cool and breezy Sunday morning and Kripa was sitting drinking her ice cold soda. All of a sudden, someone taps Kripa on the back. She whirls around and sees her Mom and Dad standing stiffly there, with a phony smile.

K- (Thinking) Oh Oh…this cant be good….

K- (Sweetly and innocently) yes mommy and daddy?

She waits anxiously. After a minute of eerie silence her Mom finally speaks up.

G= Gayatri (Kripa's mom) and SU= Suryaben   (Kripa's Dad)

G- Well, you know how being in the army means moving alot right…..

Kripa listens on- she knows what's coming next and she hates it.

K- (Nervously) ya…..

G- Well, we got posted to North Korea.

Kripa choked on her soda.

K- (Surprised) w...w….w….WAT?

Her Mom and Dad don't say anything.

K- (Thinking) Noth Korea? WTF! That's the most unhappening place in the world! And it's supposed to be in the middle of a war…..that is SO not safe!

SU- Kripa….Kripa…KRIPA?

Kripa snaps back to reality.

K- Uhh...Ya?

SU- what do think about moving?

Kripa just signs. Kripa is probably the most docile girl in the world. She never talks back to her parents, never stays out late and never disobeys her parent. But this was too much for her. It wasn't the first time she moved because of her parents. And all the times before she never minded it because she wouldn't stay in the same place for more than a year….but this was different. She was living in NYC for over 3 years now. This was going to be her year. She was finally gonna be a senior and the captain of her Tennis team. She was going to be the girl to shine. She was going to talk to Brad (her crush) and she was going to get accepted to NYU.

K- (Thinking) NO! I can't let them do this. I can't! Im not going to move again just because of their freakin' jobs! NO!
K- (Out loud) No.

Her mom and dad are surprised. It takes them a few minutes to regain their composure.

G- Excuse me? Wat did u say?

K- (Calmly) I said no.

Su- wat?

K- I said no, im not moving,

Her Mom and Dad were flabbergasted. Infact they were baffled. They moved of to the side and started conversing.

K- (Thinking) I wonder what they're talking about…

A few minutes later, they came to Kripa.

SU- well, I didn't expect this of you but u would be glad to know that u have another choice.

Kripa- (thinking) I wonder what my other choice is…..

What is the other choice?

Edited by prakriti - 01 March 2006 at 4:22pm

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hope u guyz liked it! i tried my best and i hope ur pleased! Leave ur comments and suggestions!

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