Read your poem just now! Wonderful!!
Loved the way you brought out their silence, their pain.
Whatever they don't say, is all there in their eyes. All of it, in fact, rests in those pools that they look into everyday. Their pain is recognised by each other's hearts, but they refuse to acknowledge it in front or speak out, only because they just do NOT want to admit it...to each other or themselves... As usual, their Ego. His was already there, but now, it's Khushi's turn to be the same, all because of his outburst that he doesn't care for her..
Edited by AnnieKittWatt - 11 December 2011 at 9:27am