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Miss.Colorfull

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
When I look into your eyes
I see silence and sadness
But if you could look into mine
You would see pain and loneliness
our silence is greater than words
Because our eyes talk when we can't.

Hum aur tum mile kismaat se
Pyar hua nafraat se
Iqrar toh kisse ne na kiya
Nahin inkaar kiya
Ab bole bhi toh kaise
Ki Hume pyar hua sirf tum se

Edited by Miss.Colorfull - 28 November 2011 at 10:46pm

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Posted: 11 December 2011 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Hey Miss.Colorfull!
Read your poem just now! Wonderful!!Clap
Loved the way you brought out their silence, their pain.
Whatever they don't say, is all there in their eyes. All of it, in fact, rests in those pools that they look into everyday. Their pain is recognised by each other's hearts, but they refuse to acknowledge it in front or speak out, only because they just do NOT want to admit it...to each other or themselves... As usual, their Ego. His was already there, but now, it's Khushi's turn to be the same, all because of his outburst that he doesn't care for her..
 
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AnnieBig smile


Edited by AnnieKittWatt - 11 December 2011 at 9:27am

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