Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Manvi and Virat love story (Page 4)

VirManandJeeVi Senior Member

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Posted: 01 December 2011 at 6:49pm | IP Logged
Very Nice. plzzz update soon. Big smile

--Suhani-- Goldie

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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 7:54pm | IP Logged



12 o'clock!!!!night!!!!


virat- hey... mam...kaise ho????

manvi-mein thik hu...tum kaise ho chepe????

virat- to aaj ka din kaisa tha?

manvi-din to thik tha lakin vo tanisha

virat-ha bhabi ne bataya

manvi-2 minute bua aa rahi hai 

virat-thik hai

bua-manvi kale tu aache se tayar ho jane tuje ladeke vale dekhane aa raha hai.

manvi-(shocked) kya? aap loga ne mujse puch na bhi jaoori bhi nahi samje.

biji-vo beta main tume se puch ne hi vali thi.

bua- maa use me puch na kya

manvi-mein kal nahi aa sakti mein navya, appy, aur ritz ke ssat movie pe jaa rahi hu

bua-kal tu nahi jaa rahi

manvi-lakin mena biji se pehale hi puch liya tha

bua-mene ake baar jo keh diya so keh diya aur tanisha kaha hai?muje use bhi kehana hai.

biji and bua went out of room!

virat- u OK?

manvi- of couse...

virat- tume shock nai laga?

manvi- kyu?

virat- vo bua ne kaha na

manvi- ha bua ne yeh kaha ki muje ladeke vale dekh na aa raha hai , yeh to nai kaha na ki un o ne ha kaha.

virat- ha vo bhi ha. 

manvi- hmm...thik hai ab muje bohot nind aa rahi hai...bye

virat-bye...good night... sweet dreams...

manvi- bye...good night...

they hung up...

Two days later...

The room was dark , manvi was crying and was sitting near the window and then there was a BUZZ!BUZZ!BUZZ!BUZZ! and she saw the name and it was virat the person she wanted to talk but cant because she promised biji. so she closed her eyes hard and ended the call and it says 25 miss calls from virat.

To be continued...

Hope u guys like it...






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maddy4eva Groupbie

Joined: 01 August 2011
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Posted: 05 December 2011 at 8:45pm | IP Logged
It's really nice can u pm all the parts if u don't mind
Ruchi-interest Goldie

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Posts: 1687

Posted: 06 December 2011 at 2:32am | IP Logged
it is too gus, i have just read all the parts  but u should really make virat more intense of the fact that a another boy is coming to see or marry her& do pm me the nxt part & i have sent u buddy request

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--Suhani-- Goldie

Joined: 28 November 2011
Posts: 1714

Posted: 08 December 2011 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
Viren and jevika were really tensed and they have tried calling manvi but she is not picking up and virat's phone is coming busy. so viren tried calling tanisha and she picked up and then she was shocked to hear about manvis marriage and she told her jiju that "jiju mein abhi ghar pe nahi hu lekin mein abhi ghar ja kare manvi se baat kare ti hu" and viren said ok. then jevika told him virat dosent know anything yet and what will happen if knows about this but viren told her that manvi would have told her but then jevika told him that i know that manvi would never tell him and we should tell him.

virat was really angry becausehe had called manvi 50 times or more but  manvi was not picking up his call and he was in delhi for bussiness metting. so he got in car and started driving towards her house.

virat was driving thinking why was she not picking up the call had her marragie been fixed but why would she say yes? maybe her family forced her but then he was at her house.

will continue...

hope u guys like it and please tell me what should i improve...

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--Suhani-- Goldie

Joined: 28 November 2011
Posts: 1714

Posted: 08 December 2011 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
virat climed the wall and then he saw manvi laying on the bed her and the whole room was big mess.then he went inside the room and he saw that manvi was awake:
virat- manvi! 
virat- put hand on her mouth and said hey manvi its me virat.
manvi- tum? itkni raat ko?
virat- vo tum mera phone pick up nai kare rahi thi
manvi- she gave him a hug and said ha agar mein phone pick up nahi karungi to tum yaha aa jave ge aur tume kisi ne dekh liya hota to and then told him about her roka.
virat- what? or tum ne haa ke diya
then suddenly door opened and it was jevika and viren:
manvi- di app yaha?
manvi-lekin di aap andar aai kaise
jevika- vo mera paas ghar ki duplicate chabi thi.
jevika- virat tum yaha and she raised her eye brow
virat- vo bhabi manvi mera call pick up nai kare rahi thi iss liye 
manvi and virat started a little argument and then tanisha came to the room:
tanisha- guys stop fighting!i have a really good news for you guys
viren- kya
tanish-vo jo nikhil tah na vo aab shadi kileya haa nahi kahenga 
manvi- lekin kaise
tanish- vo di uske girl friend mere friend thi to mena un dono ka patch up kara diya...simple
virat- oh how smart!
tanisha- hmm thanks...BUZZ!BUZZ!BUZZ! ok guys i think i should go now she said smiling and she went out of room... hi...kaise ho? 
now virat jevika and viren were leaving:
manvi- bye
viren- mere bhai ab chal varna koi aaja ye ga
maniv-bye di bye jiju

three days later manvi was at collage and virat was at his house sleeping... vanshika tols every one that she is going to talk to biji about virat and manvi's rishta...and she went to biji's house but manvi was at collage and vanshika and biji decided a date for their engagement and then  virat called manvi to tell about their engagement and then viren and jevika teased them a little and then all of them talked!!!

after two weeks!
It was manvi's and virat's engagement and manvi and virat were looking really good!

after 3 months!
It was their weeding!!


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inlvwithehmmbh Senior Member

Joined: 30 November 2011
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Posted: 08 December 2011 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
hmm i loved the entire SS bt found the ending a little rush thats all... BUT i must say u write well:) good job and do start on Virman if u wanna and PM me if u do i'd love to read it... Thanks:)

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sonika_virman Senior Member

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Posts: 760

Posted: 13 December 2011 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Loved it
N don't forget to pm me the next time u update the next part:D
We be waiting Day Dreaming

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