Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Manvi and Virat love story

--Suhani-- Goldie

Joined: 28 November 2011
Posts: 1714

Posted: 28 November 2011 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
Background info- Jevika, viren, vanshika(virens and virats mom) and chacu(viren and virat's chacu) knew that virat and manvi liked each other and it was manvis birthday.

It was September 19 and manvi was really happy because it is her birthday tomorrow and she going out for lunch with her biji, chacu, chchi,  dabbu,and badi biji and then she had to go with her best friends navya, ritika, appy, annant, and ranbir for dinner.
Buzz!Buzz! it was her cell phone vibrating and she guessed it would be virat and it was him and then she picked up the phone:
    Virat- kaise ho?
    Manvi- mein bohot jhush hu.
    Virat- kyu? koi war jit ka aai ho...(he knew she was happy because it was her birthday because his jevika bhabi told him that its her birthday and she is sending her a gift.)
    Manvi- Nahi mein is liye khush hu Because kale mere birthday hai.
    biji- Manvi kaha hai tu? muje tujse baat karne hai.
    Manvi- biji do(2) minute mein abhi aa rahi hu. thik hai virat mein tume thodi dar baad phone karti                    hu. bye.
    Virat- thik hai bye.

IN biji's room!

     biji- Muje tuj se bahut jaruri baat kari hai.
     Manivi- kya hua biji?
     biji- vo tere bua aa rahi hai kuch dino mein.
    Manvi- (shocked) Kya, mera matlab hai kyu?
    biji- kyu ka kya matlab hai, vo yaha rehana aa rai ha.
Manvi got up and was going out of room when biji stopped her and told her to tell her pinki chachi to clean the guest room and manvi said"ok" then she went directly to her room and picked up the phone and called he di:
   jivika- manu, kaise hai tu?
   Manvi- abhi tuk to thik thi lakin biji ne hitler ke aani ke news de kar sara mood kharab kar diya.
   jivika- kon hitler tera matlab bua se toh nia hai
   manvi- ha di vahi.
   manvi told jivika every thing that biji told her
    jivika- tu chinta mat kar kuch nai hoga. thik hai chale mai rakh ti hu mai tuja badma call karungi...thik hai...bye
   manvi- thik hai di. bye...
Virat was passing by the room and heard everything and went to his room and called manvi:
virat- ha bhai mena suna tumari bua aa rai hai
manvi-vo chodo muje unke bara mai abhi baat nai karni hai.
virat- thik hai baba. to tum kal kya kar rai ho 
manvi told him about her plans for lunch and dinner, and then suddenly virat asked manvi which restuarent are you going for dinner and manvi told him and then she suddenly asked why are you asking this and virat thaught in his mind about he is going give manvi a littel suprise but then he said nothing. manvi knew he was upto some thing but didnt know what.

ok...i will write the other part later but until you think what was virat's surprise?

ignore the spelling mistake
and tell how it is?

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princess14 Goldie

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
good start!!! continue soon!
KSG_luv IF-Rockerz

Joined: 12 November 2011
Posts: 8514

Posted: 28 November 2011 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
It was wonderful plz update soon and also put on os ss or FF in front of ur Story cz I was confused eat this was but amazing story
ms.pm Groupbie

Joined: 29 May 2011
Posts: 131

Posted: 28 November 2011 at 8:08pm | IP Logged
i think he's gonna show up at da restaraunt...and it's cool
--Suhani-- Goldie

Joined: 28 November 2011
Posts: 1714

Posted: 28 November 2011 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
I m new here and i don'k know what os,ss or ff is so please tell me what it is and i m surely going to continue this soon!!!!
unnatia Senior Member

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Posts: 274

Posted: 28 November 2011 at 8:51pm | IP Logged
Hey, nice story. Pls continue :)
ShivRajput IF-Rockerz

Joined: 25 November 2011
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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
Continue ur work dear nd pm me...
luv.u.zindagi Senior Member

Joined: 07 November 2011
Posts: 310

Posted: 29 November 2011 at 2:45am | IP Logged
oooh i like it! please continue and pm when u update! great story Smile

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