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                                                NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM
                                        CHAPTER 70

"Sorry Niyati, actually mom got a major heart attack." Aditya told the truth to Niyati while looking very tensed.

              "Oh my god! then we should reach there as soon as possible. Just leave from here Aditya." Niyati too got tensed now. They both left together on the bike to reach to the nearby airport and get a flight for Nainitaal.

              It was around midnight when Viren stopped the bike and Sid stopped the car nearby a tea stall to take a break from driving. All others fell asleep in the car using one another's shoulder as pillow. Sid went out of the car and sat on a nearby bench.

           Viren was about to join Sid when he felt Nivi's grip around his stomach and saw Nivi sleeping peacefully while holding him and head resting on his back. He did not wanted to wake up Nivi. He placed her head on his shoulder and wrapped her hands around his waist quietly making that sure that Nivi does not wake up and  then sat  on the bike facing the tea shop.

        Viren and Sid quietly began to sip tea and samosas when Divya too joined them. She woke up due to Hemlata's call on her mobile to enquire about their journey.

                                     When Divya saw Nivi sleeping, she woke her up before Viren could stop her from doing the same. Nivi woke up while rubbing her eyes innocently and said "what happened? Did we reach Chandigarh?"

                          "No Madam we are still on the way, just taking a break." Viren replied while Nivi yawned.

                     Nivi decided to take a walk while Viren got tea for her. He saw her looking up the sky. He joined her and said "kya dekh rahi ho madam?"

                                     "Stars dekh rahi hoon. You know Viren, whenever I used to cry while remembering Maa, Dadi ma used to take me to the terrace. She used to point at the most shining star in the sky and told me that my mother became a star and she is there. But the funny thing is I used to look at the chand and always said one thing "that's my mother watching me and smiling at me". I always saw chand as my mother and I loved to watch chand. You know I feel like maa is smiling at me and blessing me." Nivi replied still looking at the sky. Viren wrapped a shawl around her shoulder as it got quite cold and offered her tea. Nivi smiled at Viren and again looked up in the sky.

                      In Nainitaal, Aditya was sitting on a chair and was waiting outside the ward where the doctors were treating his mother. He did not knew when tears fell down from his eyes. After 4-5 hours, Niyati who was also there looking after his mother with the fellow doctors came out of the ward and sighed in relief. Anurag looked at her and questioned her "Maa kaisi hain?"

            "Anurag she is out of danger now." Niyati informed him. Aditya felt a bit relaxed. He looked up at Niyati and hugged her. He began to cry like a small kid. Niyati felt awkward when Anurag hugged her. She did not knew how to console Aditya. She hugged him back and said "it's alright Aditya."

                                         Aditya got a call from Nivi. He broke from the hug and glanced at Niyati and picked up the call. He informed Nivi that his mother is alright now. After talking with Nivi, he turned to see Niyati standing there holding a glass of water. He took glass of water from her and thanked her. Niyati smiled sadly and went in the ward. Aditya kept looking at her till she disappeared into the ward again.

                       "Thank god auntyji is fine now." Nivi told Viren. "poor Aditya, he have to go through all this. Glad Di is there with him." Viren said quietly.

              Nivi remembered the moment when Niyati told her that she love Aditya and smiled thinking maybe their journey of love might begin now. Viren saw her smiling and He questioned her "why are you smiling?"

                      " Nothing." Nivi lied quickly. "I know what you are thinking. You are thinking about Di and Aditya." Viren replied her coolly.

              "How come you know what I am thinking?" Nivi got confused. "Nivi I know you since our childhood and I know my Di too. I know she love Aditya. You know it's not difficult to know about your loved ones feelings when they are so close to you. I know this from 3 years but never told this to anyone as I know telling this to anyone might hurt Di. I am waiting to see what destiny has stored for her" Viren told Nivi the truth he knew from a long time.

                         Viren stared at Nivi and continued "and when you love someone, you don't need to find them." He caught her hand and placed it over her heart "you will find them in your heart. Your mother is there in your heart, not in the sky."

                  Nivi and Viren caught each others hand lovingly and hugged each other. The moon in the sky was the only one who witnessed this beautiful interaction.

      




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hi all ...sorry for not updating since a long time as you all know that i was ill...i don't know if the parts i updated make any sense or not...nowdays giving my pre boards exams...will try my best to update soon...forgive my mistakes

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Loveed the parts ... u r doing great ... u r super through what u r going through i mean exams and all this u gave us a awesome parts u r awesome ... god bless u and all the best in ur exams Big smile


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Well written chapters neeti.
I loved this  particular lines very much   :
 when you love someone, you don't need to find them." He caught her hand and placed it over her heart "you will find them in your heart. Your mother is there in your heart, not in the sky."
Continue soon neeti..

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Beautifully written chapters..luvd it..thnx for d pm sweets..

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