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Posted: 01 December 2011 at 7:19pm | IP Logged
Congrats neeti for the new thread and the huge success of ur ff...Party
and ur update is very nice...loved the way niyathi fooled viren...and end part  is very romantic..waiting for ur new updates...


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new thread for hum tumTongueSmile

waah waah waah waah waah waaahhhEmbarrassed
 
awesome updatesClap

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neeti jaan im glad u havent stopped writing hum tum and i am very sorry for not reading it the past few days but im sure i wud love it and i will really try to catch up if i can really really sorry

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Please update soon can't wait for you to update. Smile

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                                           NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM
                                        CHAPTER 67

Viren placed his hands around Nivi's waist and pulled her closer to his body. He moved hairs from Nivi's  neck and kissed her on the neck. Nivi shivered a bit when Viren kissed her on the neck and kept a firm grip on Viren's shoulder. Viren and Nivi looked at each other with love and intensity. Viren tapped her on the cheeks and was about to kiss her again when Nivi pushed him away and said "tum kabhi ek bhi chance chodte ho romance karne ka Viren. Let's go downstairs for breakfast."

                                 She moved towards the door when Viren caught her hand and said "kya karoon Nivi tumhe dekhta hoon to kuch yaad hi nahi rehta."

                     Viren placed small pecks on her hand and began to move closer to her. Nivi got lost in his love. She hugged him tightly.

                       They both were still in a tight embrace when Sid came in Viren's room. After he saw what's going on in the room, he turned back awkwardly and said "oh sorry I think I came here at wrong time."

                           They both broke apart from the hug and Nivi said while getting totally embarrassed "no Sid, it's just nothing."

When Viren saw that Sid is not looking at them he again embraced her from behind and began to play with her hairs. Nivi tried a lot to get away from Viren but Viren was too adamant to be close to Nivi. He caught her hands and kissed her palms passionately.

          Sid replied while laughing silently "ok Nivi I just came to say that Maa is calling you both for breakfast."

                  "yes Sid we are coming." Nivi replied while trying to get away from Viren.

 Sid went away while laughing. Nivi said "oho Viren sometimes you behave like a kid. Leave me."

                    Nivi went out of Viren's grip and ran downstairs so that Viren don't catch her again.

      After some time, Nivi came back home. She saw Divya standing in the verandah and waiting for someone impatiently. "kya hua Di? Waiting for someone?" Nivi questioned Divya.

       "Thank god Nivi you came. I was waiting for you only. Come let's go for shopping." Divya said excitedly.

  "Shopping? For what Di?" Nivi panicked.

"Stupid you forgot? We all are going Chandigarh tomorrow for Tarun and Sonia's wedding. From tomorrow their wedding rituals are gonna start." Divya said.

     "Di I just remembered that Dadi called me up for some work I am going there. You go to shopping with someone else. Haan, take Siddharth for your company. Sorry di." Nivi tried to make excuse and was about to go.

                   Divya caught her hand and said "mujhe sab pata hai tujhe kya kaam hai. Ab chal mere sath. Varna main Viren ko bulati hoon. Wo tujhe utha kar mere sath le chalega."

           Nivi made an innocent face and requested to her Di "Di I hate shopping you know that. And the way you do the shopping like bargaining with the shopkeepers for Rs.50-100 is annoying. Please Di go to shopping without me."

               "Thik hai main abhi Viren ko call karti hoon." Divya started to dial Viren's number in her phone and was about to call him when Nivi said "ok Di I am coming with you. Now don't call him."

   Divya smiled and said "good that you are coming with me otherwise Viren would have got tired while carrying you all the way. Kyunki tu bahut moti hai na."

                 Nivi picked up a pillow and threw it at Divya who ran away from there in attempt to escape from it.




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                                              NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM
                                        CHAPTER 68

Vicky and Vishal came to Sood's house while Viren was eating his breakfast. He got surprised to see them there and said "tum dono yahan?"

                        Vicky replied "bhool gaya Viren. Aaj koi bhi college nahi jaa raha sab shopping par jaa rahe hain."

                  "oh haan. Come let's go. But where is Shruti and Sneha?" Viren questioned them.

      "Wo dono Divya ke sath gayi hain. Remember Vishal what they said, hamari shopping main boys not allowed. But they don't know we are not interested a bit in their shopping." Vicky imitated what Shruti said and all laughed after watching his acting.

               Nivi was standing inside a clothes shop in a mall watching Divya, Shruti and Sneha choosing dresses for themselves Tarun and Sonia's wedding. She was feeling very bored when Divya called her and said "Nivi don't keep standing there like a statue. Choose dress for yourself."

                Nivi began to look out for dresses. She saw many lehengas and chose 2-3 dresses for trial when suddenly Divya came near her and said " Nivi Viren called up for you. Take my mobile throughout the shopping otherwise he will drive me crazy by calling again and again to talk with you."

                   Nivi took phone from Divya. Divya got busy again in shopping. Nivi picked up the phone and said "Hello."

         Viren replied "hi jaan. Enjoying your shopping?"

Nivi replied with a sad face "enjoying? You know that I hate shopping Viren. Oh god I am getting bore here."

                      "Hmm I can see this from your face." Viren replied with his voice filled up with laughter.

           "You can see my face. Are you here Viren?" Nivi began to look around while talking with Viren.

              "Yes I am here. We came to the same mall for shopping. Look outside the shop."

Viren replied back.

                 Nivi looked out of the shop to see Viren looking at her from the outside of the shop and waving at her. He was carrying 2-3 bags too with him. It appeared like he was done with his shopping. He signaled her to come to another side of the shop and entered in the shop quietly.  

                Nivi excused herself and went near Viren. She said "thank god Viren you are here. I was feeling so bored there."

                  Viren looked at the dresses she was still carrying in her hand and said "hmmm seems like you are confused in choosing the dress for yourself."

             Nivi nodded in yes. Viren caught her hand and took her in front of a giant mirror placed near the trial room.

                    He took all the dresses from Nivi and looked at the dresses. Then he took the dupatta of all the dresses. He made Nivi stand still in front of the mirror. One by one, he began to put the duppatta of all the dresses over Nivi's head. In all the dresses, he loved a purple lehenga with simple embroidery and stone work. When he placed the purple dupatta over Nivi's head, he was dumbstruck to see that Nivi looked so beautiful in that dupatta.

             He placed his hands around Nivi's waist and said "you look so gorgeous in this dress. Your beauty will complement the dress very well."

          Nivi looked up at Viren through the mirror and felt very shy. Viren rested his head over Nivi's shoulder and looked at their reflection in the mirror and said "perfect."

                   He kissed her on cheeks and ran away from there as he saw Divya's reflection in the mirror.     

              



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forgive my errors guys ...really updated in a hurry so i don't know if it's good...sorry for this friends and i will update soon this time 

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A really lovely chapter...so nice to see Viren and Nivi showing their love for each other so openly to the world, and Virenis as cheeky as ever!!!
 
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