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                NIVEDITA AND VIREN:HUM TUM

Welcome to the new thread my sweet readersEmbarrassedHug. Well first of all I just want to say a big thanks to my readers.


 To my Readers,

           Hi to all, well frankly speaking I did not knew about the future of my ff when I wrote first chapter of my ff: Hum Tum. I thought that this is not so good and may be I will stop writing it after updating 1-2 chapters. I still can't believe that I wrote 64 chapters of my ff till now. The credit goes to all my readers who were there always to read my updates and always made me to write again and again

          But the response I got from the lovely members of CCBM forum was overwhelming and I was so happy with the response I have got from you guys about my updates. So I just want to say thank you guys for reading my ff, for making comments about my updates. I just want to say thank you for everything. I feel so proud when I think that I am a member of CCBM forum, which is my second home and you all guys are a part of me and my family. Thanks Sandhya, Sana Di, Shamima, Sunayana, Usha, Roopz, Deepti, Aysha, Yati, Vasu, Abirami, Reshma, Meera, Atiya, Jafrina, Vishdeepraju, JasNehafan Bowya, Suman, Pratibha, Aamina, Moni, Diya, GSPriya, Jyothi-Cool, Richa, Minu, Gayatri, Uzi, Janani, Ash, Archana, Jez, Lj, Gul, Rajitha, Tashu20, Nivren123 for reading my ff. Sorry if I missed anyone's name

                             Thank you all very much once again!!!!

                                             Your's truly and your friend

                                                    Neetika

 

Sana Di: Di, thank you for making me write my ff again. Well only few people know this. I stopped writing after updating 2 chapters of my ff. It was Sana Di's request which forced me to write again. No matter how many ff I will write in my ff, but Hum Tum will always remain close to my heart. It's an integral part of my life. And Sana Di love you.


Link to the previous thread :http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1647932

INDEX:

CHAPTER 65:PAGE 1
CHAPTER 66:PAGE 1
CHAPTER 67:PAGE 3
CHAPTER 68:PAGE 3
CHAPTER 69:PAGE 5
CHAPTER 70:PAGE 6
CHAPTER 71:PAGE 8
CHAPTER 72:PAGE 8
CHAPTER 73:PAGE 8
CHAPTER 74:PAGE 8
CHAPTER 75:PAGE 10
CHAPTER 76:PAGE 12
CHAPTER 77:PAGE 13
CHAPTER 78:PAGE 13
CHAPTER 79:PAGE 15
CHAPTER 80:PAGE 15
CHAPTER 81:PAGE 16
CHAPTER 82:PAGE 17
CHAPTER 83:PAGE 17
CHAPTER 84:PAGE 19
CHAPTER 85:PAGE 20
CHAPTER 86:PAGE 20
CHAPTER 87:PAGE 20
CHAPTER 88:PAGE 22
CHAPTER 89:PAGE 23
CHAPTER 90:PAGE 24
CHAPTER 91:PAGE 24

CHAPTER 92:PAGE 24
CHAPTER 93:PAGE 26

CHAPTER 94:PAGE 26
CHAPTER 95:PAGE 27
CHAPTER 96:PAGE 27
CHAPTER 97:PAGE 28
CHAPTER 98-A:PAGE 28
CHAPTER 98-B:PAGE 29
CHAPTER 99:PAGE 30
CHAPTER 100:PAGE 32







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                           NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM
                                        CHAPTER 65

Next morning, Viren woke up with a heavy head. He felt a terrible headache. He was not able to see around clearly. He shook his head 2-3 times. He noticed someone in his room. He tried to figure out about the person from their silhouettes but he was unable to do that. He again shook his head and looked back to see Nivi and Niyati standing in front of him.

                  "Di, Nivi tum dono yaahan kya kar rahe ho?"- Viren whispered.

"Good morning Viren!!! Kaisa lag raha hai? Headache ho raha hai na? Take this. Taiji made a special tea for you. We both just came to see whether you woke up or not and Taiji told us to give you tea." Niyati replied mischievously.

                "Thanks Di." Viren took tea from Niyati and began to sip tea.

"okay then we are going. Come Nivi let's go." said Niyati. They both began to go out of Viren's room. Nivi and Viren both were staring at each other lovingly when Niyati turned back to Viren and said "oh by the way Viren, do you remember your last night Basanti? She is coming to meet you!!"

                    Viren stuttered "B...B...Basanti? Who is this Basanti? I don't know her."

        Niyati replied "oh then you don't know Basanti right? What about Vartika? Your last night Basanti? She called you up but you were asleep so I picked up the phone. She told me that she will call back later. She said that she planned a quite romantic day with you after you proposed her last night."

                    Viren spitted tea out of his mouth in shock and said "No this is not possible. I can't propose Vartika. Di you are lying. I can't do this."

           Viren stood up while looking very worried and caught Nivi "Nivi you tell me it's a lie na?" Nivi looked at Niyati. Niyati shook her head in 'no' and indicated her to do the same. Viren was unable to see that as Viren's back was turned towards Niyati.

                         Nivi was about to shook her head in 'yes' when Niyati looked at her threateningly. Nivi said "no Viren it's true."

                 "oh god I can't believe this. I did a great mistake. Now how can I rectify this mistake?" Viren said in frustration.

                      "You can't do anything Viren. Now get ready, she must be coming here. Go and get ready for your date, Viren."

            "No I am not going out with her. Nivi you tell Di to make any excuse to her? I can't bear Vartika." Viren began to panic.

"No Viren a promise is a promise. You must go with her" said Nivi while trying to hide her smile.

     Suddenly, Viren's mobile began to ring. Niyati picked up the phone "Hello, hi Vartika. Viren woke up. Yes I talked with him and he is ready to go out with you."

                       Viren began to panic. "Di what are you doing? I am not going out with her" Viren thought in his mind.

                   Viren made quick movements towards Niyati and snatched phone from her. He began to blabber on the phone "Vartika listen I am sorry for what I did last night but I am not going out with you. The whole college knows that I love Nivi. I am not going out with you. Sorry Vartika"

          But when he did not heard any reply he looked at the phone and saw Niyati's number. Niyati made a call from her phone and when Viren's phone began to rang, she picked it up and began to talk like its Vartika's call.

    Viren understood the whole prank played by Niyati. He turned towards Niyati in anger. Niyati tried to look serious when she saw Viren looking at her. She said "kya hua Viren? kya kaha Vartika ne?"

                        She burst out laughing. She was unable to hold back her laughter. Nivi too began to laugh after she saw Viren's angry but cute face.

Viren picked up the pillow from his bed and began to hit Niyati with the pillow.

                Niyati ran out of his room. Viren went after her.




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                            NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM
                                        CHAPTER 66

Niyati and Viren both reached in the living room of Sood's house. Viren began to hit her again with the pillow. Niyati too picked up a pillow and hit him back. Nivi tried to stop their fight but was unable to do that. Nivi ran towards Vandana Taiji's room.

                           Niyati and Viren's fight turned into a war. They were hitting each other continuously. They threw the pillow on the floor and began to pull each other's hairs.

                  While fighting they both lost their balance too and fell on the floor but their fight continued. At the moment, Nivi came back with VD to see that the room turned into a Warfield and Niyati and Viren were hitting each other.

                     Vandana said "Niyati, Viren stop it." but they both were so lost in their fight. Vandana yelled finally "stop it both of you."

                      Niyati and Viren stopped their fight and stood up looking scared. They both always got afraid of Vandana's anger.

               "Why you both are fighting? And look at the mess you both created. You both grew up so much but still fighting like kids. Look at your clothes." Vandana shouted at them.

                    "Taiji's, it's not my fault. He started the fight." Niyati replied. "No Taiji she started all this. Actually'.." Viren began to explain the whole matter to Vandana.

                            "Shut up you both. Go to your room and clean yourself." Vandana again shouted at them.

                     Niyati and Viren shook their head in yes and went towards their room. Viren looked at Niyati who held out her tongue and again began to tease Viren.

               Viren was about to go near her when he heard Taiji's voice "Viren !!!!."

 

               Viren went to his room and got ready for the college. Now he knew what happened last night. He remembered all the things, how he got drunk thanks to his friends, how he went on the roof of the college, how he said that he is committing suicide, how Nivi persuaded him to come downstairs. But one thing that he loved the most about last night is the promise that Nivi made with him.

                              "I will never leave you Viren." that's what touched his heart. He was smiling broadly while remembering this when he heard someone's coming towards his room.

            He hid himself behind the door and began to wait for the person. The person entered in the room and looked around.

         Viren saw that it's Nivi. He went out of his hiding place.

Nivi went to Viren's room to call him for the breakfast but he was not there. She was looking around in the room when she felt someone behind her. Before she could turn around she found herself in a tight embrace.

She knew that it's Viren. Nivi turned towards him and said "Viren let's go downstairs for breakfast."

           Viren acted like he did not heard her and began to stroke her beautiful hairs with his hands.  Nivi pulled him away and began to go out of the room when Viren pulled her back.

          Now she was leaning to the wall. Viren placed his hands on the wall and trapped her. Now she was placed between Viren's hands. "You promised me last night that you will never leave me then how can you go away from me?" Viren questioned her.

             Nivedita remembered what she promised and began to smile shyly. Viren placed his hands around Nivi's waist and pulled her closer to his body. He moved hairs from Nivi's  neck and kissed her on the neck.

 



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Congrats!!!!!
Wow huni u should be proud of yourself for reaching this far with your FF. It truely is a wonderful FF and I have enjoyed reading every single chapter. Keep up the good work Hun. *hugs*

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O:O:...ohhh...ma neeti...u mentioned my name i nthis new thread...luv u ma sweet sister...

i just requested u to continue ur ff..bcz i was greedy to read more..Big smile...it's bcz of ur talents n skills u wrote s omany chapters wonderfully...u r a sweet n awsm writer...
 
n congrats for the nbew thread...u r rocking my little sister...
 
n abt the updates...as usual it's awsm...n how sweet the bro-sis fight...cuteee...enjoyed it..thnks niti dear...*hugs*...

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congrats Neeti for entering into new thread...Smile..and good start..both chapters are awesome dear..enjoying niyati n viren fight..teasing each other..n last scene of nivren was so romantic...Embarrassedcontinue soonBig smile
and thanx to u too for writing such a lovely ff..Embarrassed

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Congrats on reaching a new thread...wonderful chapter as usual...loving the cute romance at the end of the chapter.
 
No need to thank us Neetika...ur the one who puts in all th hard in writing this FF...so much easier to read an FF then write one!!!
 
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