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sur001

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Posted: 12 years ago

And those beautiful moments spread a smile on my face
Edited by sur001 - 12 years ago

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Wings-of-Fire

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IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

the dream breaks right there, just at the highs.

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sur001

@sur001

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

And then I realized I was running behind an empty dream

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Pratamesh

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Posted: 12 years ago

A dream Which couldnt be ever fulfilledEdited by Pratamesh - 12 years ago

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sur001

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Posted: 12 years ago

But the dream looked so real

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Wings-of-Fire

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IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

guys dont you think four consecutive lines with the word 'dream' would feel like kinda dragging it?

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-Rinky-

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IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

but life is more than cruel

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Pratamesh

@Pratamesh

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -roshnee-
guys dont you think four consecutive lines with the word 'dream' would feel like kinda dragging it?

yep i knew its becoming kind of a paradox nw

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sur001

@sur001

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Posted: 12 years ago

At a moment it looks like bed of roses but the next moment it become path of thorns

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Wings-of-Fire

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IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey guys i have written the last lines and lets call it the end of this poem and start a new one!
and btw great jobs all of you. i think its turned to be a beautiful work!👏

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