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Posted: 12 years ago
          
hello every one! welcome to the fourth game of the week of hitler didi forum. this week the gaming gets more creative. and the game we are going to play this week is -**Group Poems** !!

i know we have many creative members in this forum. so i thought it'd be great if we could have all the creative minds working on the same piece of poetry! the game is pretty simple actually.we'll write one poem cumulatively.which means we just write the next line to what has already  been written.i'll star it by giving a line and the next person writes another line. and i'll keep updating the poem as it progresses so that everyone can see it together as one piece. and we'll see where it goes in the end!!

sounds fun right? writing a poem with everyone not knowing where it might end!


so the poem starts-
i open my eyes but i cant see the light.
There is always a feeling of emptiness in my  heart
dont know end up where i might
joys of life seem far apart
but still i'm trying to find it in your eyes
which has pure love and is full of life
but my breath leaves my heart in sighs
and one question captures me, 'what if you too leave me alone?'
but then i remember those beautiful moments we spent together
and those beautiful moments spread a smile on my face
the dream breaks right there, just at the highs
and then i realize, i was running behind an empty dream
which couldnt be ever fulfilled
still it looked so real
but life is more than cruel
so i shut my eyes again, in the brightest day and the darkest night.


so lets begin the game guys. happy writing.😛
Edited by -roshnee- - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ther is always a feeling of emptyness in my heart
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dont know end up where i might.
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joys of life seem far apart. Edited by orshashah - 12 years ago
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but still I'm trying to find it in your eyes
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which has pure love and is full of life
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Posted: 12 years ago
but my breath leaves my heart in sighs...
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and one question captures me,"What if you too leave me alone ?"
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omg this is going better than i anticipated! well done guys!
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But then i remember those beautiful moments we spent together