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Prernarbofan

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 8:43am | IP Logged
I just wrote it as an imagination of mine of the Virika wedding . Please give me feedback on this !






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She walked down the stairs wearing her lehnga . It was the most beautiful looking lehnga ever. With colours of peach , oranges it looked as if it was made for . Studded with gold and diamonds they added to her beauty . 

" di aap bahut sundar lag rahi hoo bilkul ek paari ke tarah"

jeevika smiled . She was happy that her younger sister thought she was looking beautiful but she wished the person she loved the most beside her sister thought the same . She looked at viren . He looked like a prince in his golden sherwani  adding to his royal looks . She found him the perfect man in the world . Not only his physical features but inside he was as clear as crystal and had a heart of gold .

He watched her coming down the stairs. For him she looked like an angel . An angel who had come to him straight from heaven and was going to be his in few hours.


"Bhai ! kya yahan se hi honeymoon mana lo ge "

" chup ho ja paagal koi sunlega"

" arre  sunne do ab sunne walli baat hai toh log sunnen ge hi "

Jeevikas family come with her down and make her sit  in the mandap beside viren offcourse . Jeevika sits there .

" aap aaj bahut sundar laag rahin hai . bilkul ek paari ki tarah "

Jeevika cant help blushing . She felt on top of the world . At last the day she was wishing for had come . Her marriage and that to with the man which every girl in her life would love to have . As soon as she had met him she had fallen in love with him. 

" aap bhi bahut ache lag rahe hain"

" woh toh mera bhai bachpan se hi lagta hai"

" virat !  jaa na loog se puch le ki kisi ko kuch chahiye toh nahin"

" haan haan  bhabhi aap ko kuch chahiye kya"

jeevika laughs .she always loved the jodi of the brothers

Pandit ji tells the bride and groom to hold hands.

Viren brings his hand forward . Jeevika holds it . She felt a warmth which she had never felt . She looked into his eyes she found his eyes full of love for her . She wanted to hold his hand forever .



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I will make the next update really soon . If you people like it I will think of convertingit into  a FF 

Love 

prerna






Edited by Prernarbofan - 30 November 2011 at 7:27am

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isnt anyone interested 

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Nicely written

Please continue :D

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