Arhi OS: Garden of Shadows (Page 3)

Wow! That was beautiful really! Loved how had the mix of Arnav, his garden, his nightmare of his father, and then, Khushi as well. The last bit was fab! Both of them looking at the two stars, wishing for two different things, yet the same :) You should definitely continue to write lots moree...and do pm me :)

Very nice!!!! I loved it!!

Amazing piece of work.  You have brought out the fears and demons hiding inside Arnav's mind, which he does not show to the world.

Edited by lara3110 - 27 November 2011 at 1:28pm

It was beautiful!! Loved how u brought out hidden emotions, fears and past memories that haunt Arnav 24 x 7!! It's those memories which r up untill now hidden from us viewers but we can see it's harsh repercussions and outcomes in the form of emotionless & anger filled Arnav (as far as the world knows.. but is not true)

But the last 4 lines take the cake for me for sure!! which is Arnav & Khushi both looking at the twinkling starts.. Khushi talking to her star parents and for a change even Arnav accepting the tale of Khushi's belief that her parents have become stars, and asking forgiveness from her parents for hurting her & whatever she's going through bcoz of him!! Somewhere along the line it shows how much Khushi's thoughts have started to get embeded in his rakshas mind & heart! He surely getting affected big time by her!!

Loved ur analogy and the way to bring out the fear and Arnav affected by Khushi's belief!!

Keep writing.. Loved it.. waiting for another good one from u!!

nice os

Beautiful. Gracious you are a wonderful, yet creative writer. 

gr8t one