Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon


Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon

Arhi OS: Garden of Shadows (Page 3)

nyxx IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged

Wow! That was beautiful really! Loved how had the mix of Arnav, his garden, his nightmare of his father, and then, Khushi as well. The last bit was fab! Both of them looking at the two stars, wishing for two different things, yet the same :) You should definitely continue to write lots moree...and do pm me :)

..Anita.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Very nice!!!! I loved it!!
lara3110 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 27 March 2011
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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Amazing piece of work.  You have brought out the fears and demons hiding inside Arnav's mind, which he does not show to the world.
Thank you so much. 
Loved it very much.  Your style of writing is awesome.

Edited by lara3110 - 27 November 2011 at 1:28pm
love_kuki IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
It was beautiful!! Loved how u brought out hidden emotions, fears and past memories that haunt Arnav 24 x 7!! It's those memories which r up untill now hidden from us viewers but we can see it's harsh repercussions and outcomes in the form of emotionless & anger filled Arnav (as far as the world knows.. but is not true)

But the last 4 lines take the cake for me for sure!! which is Arnav & Khushi both looking at the twinkling starts.. Khushi talking to her star parents and for a change even Arnav accepting the tale of Khushi's belief that her parents have become stars, and asking forgiveness from her parents for hurting her & whatever she's going through bcoz of him!! Somewhere along the line it shows how much Khushi's thoughts have started to get embeded in his rakshas mind & heart! LOLLOL He surely getting affected big time by her!!

Loved ur analogy and the way to bring out the fear and Arnav affected by Khushi's belief!!

Keep writing.. Loved it.. waiting for another good one from u!! SmileSmileSmile
meenaluma IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 2:22pm | IP Logged
nice os
whisperer Goldie

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 5:00pm | IP Logged
Beautiful. Gracious you are a wonderful, yet creative writer. Big smile

the_rain IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 5:24pm | IP Logged

Hey, that was really beautiful...keep writing, you are really good at it..Big smile
koolgurl IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 March 2012 at 8:19pm | IP Logged
gr8t one

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