Originally posted by: GumshudaJenny kissed me when we met,
Jumping from the chair she sat in.
Time, you thief! who love to get
Sweets into your list, put that in.
Say I'm weary, say I'm sad;
Say that health and wealth have missed me;
Say I'm growing old, but add-
Jenny kissed me!
nice poem ghumshuda ji...was it your invention or did you read it some where?
acha then ish peom kah view itnah acha nahi raha...i hope kih ish poem kha koi jandha mathlabh nahi hoπ
Originally posted by: gudia8712
acha then ish peom kah view itnah acha nahi raha...i hope kih ish poem kha koi jandha mathlabh nahi hoπ
i wouldn't know kyun ki marah koh gandha double meanings itnih jaldhi nahi samjh man atha
lakin it seems like ghumshuda jih kih aap shayarih main interest rakh tha hain
Originally posted by: Gumshudamujhay maaf kar do..mein ayenda classics post nahin karoonga
nahi nahi marah mathlabh woh nahi tha...main bhi classics padh thi hoon but since main sirf single meaning poetry padh thi hoon and i have not been exposed (thank god) to double meaning (joh gandha ho) i wouldn't be able to catch it quickly...though i can catch satire and undercurrents pretty quickly...and i am sorry agar mainah aap koh hurt kiyah hain gumshuda ji...sorry once again
Originally posted by: sangeetaaGudiya rani, tere yeh uncle-ji thoda bahut paagal hain... inse door hi rehna
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hahahahπ acha didi abh aap kih bharih kuch likh yah nah pleaseπ
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