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part 22
nice part...
lovely...
cont soon...

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Awesome update Jyo!!
loved it
precap seems intresting

thankx 4 pm
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lovely...

loved their teasing session...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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                           chapter 23:



After breakfast yash asked so guys what r the plans for today.

Both di n geet shouted movie.

Arey yaar what movie we will go somewhere else told maan.

Thik hain tho hamare saath shopping chalo told di.

Nahi di movie is a very good idea chalo chaltein hain told maan.

All others laughted at maan seeing his frightened expression when they mentioned about shopping.

Geet n di started walking ahead boys r just following them. They all took one car n headed towards movie theater.

After some time they reached cinema hall n was discussing to watch which movie in the parking lot.

Guys lets go to hindi movie said geet.

Geet nahi we will go to horror movie said maan.

Horror movie shouted geet n di.

All the boys smirked as they know that both r afraid of horror movies.

No we will go to bolly movie told di.

See sudha aap logon ne decide kiya ki we will go to movie n now it will be our decision to which movie we will go told yash.

Geet n sudha made a baby face. But it didnt effect them.

Their face expression changed n told with full attitude

we handa sisters dont watch horror movies.

Ek baar socho handa sisters told maan.

Its final both replied.

Acha thik hain agar aap log nahi ayenge tho hum dono (maan n yash) tum dono ko uthakar le jaate hain told yash n maan with attitude.

For this karthik n krishna burst out into laughter whereas geet n di widened their eyes in horror. (horror movie dekhne se pehle hi horror... good going yash n maan.. )

KYA?? both shouted in shock.

Sochlo kya karenge aap dono told n smirked maan.

Geet n di glared at krishna n karthik to stop laughing. They shut their mouth seeing their angry faces.

Arey yaar leave it we will go to bolly movie only told krishna.

Bhai u r the best told geet n hugged him.

Yash n maan glared at him angrily. Krishna gulped his saliva seeing them.

Chalo chalo chaltein hain told di.

We r not coming told maan n yash.

Plzz maan told di.

Plzz jiju told geet.

They both r melting seeing their cute faces but maintained straight but sad face.

Even di n geet too felt bad n accepted

ok fine chalo horror movie hi dekhte hain told di.

Geet just turned to di n made a very sad face.

Geet (st): mera movie plan flop hogaya. Inn dono ko tho main chodungi nahi. Maan dekhte hain. Geet handa se panga liya tumne tho. Geet looked up n prayed babaji horror movie itseems mujhe horror movie ki promo dekhne se hi darr lagta hain. Ab muje poori movie dekhni hain. Aapki bachi ki raksha karna babaji. Ha di ka bhi raksha karna usko bhi darr lagta hain.

Maan saw geet who is looking up n busy complaining her babaji.

Geet babaji ko kyun disturb kar rahi ho. Main yaha hi hu whspered maan in her ears.

Maan yeh sab tumare wajah se ho raha hain.

Maine kya kiya geet asked maan innocently.

Chaddo (to di) chalo di hum chalte hain. Aur ek baat bring tickets for the movie n I want popcorn n a soft drink. N di wants one soft drink n a pizza told geet authoratively.

Maan smiled at her where as others rolled their eyes.

Ji aap k hukum humarein saadankhon par told maan.


Saying so they all went inside. Boys bought ticket n girls went inside n sat calmly because they knew once movie is started they cant stay quietly. Boys will enjoy after movie will start but girls will enjoy before movie starts.


All of then seated geet sat in the corner, maan sat beside geet, then karthik, krishna, yash n then di.


Finally the HORROR movie started. Immediately geet n di closed their eyes. Geet held maan's arm tight. Maan is enjoying geet so close to him.

When geet opened her eyes she saw a horrible scene on the screen. She instantly hugged maan. Her body is totally leaning on maan. Maan too hugged her from her waist bringing her close. When maan saw her face he, she was really really very scared her eyes r tightly closed n she is shaking.


Immediately maan closed his eyes n regretted his decision. Maan kept his one hand on her waist n other hand he kept on her chin n lifted her head.


Geet called maan huskily.

Geet look at me.

Geet nodded in a no. her face is showing fear. She cluched maan's shirt tightly n her nails r digging in maan's arm. But he didnt care.

Geet plzz look at me n he lifted her chin to make her look at him.

Geet slowly opened her eyes n looked at him.

Their eyes met n slowly she lost in his eyes which reflecting his love n concern.

Maan cupped her cheeks n told daro mat geet main hu yaha. Aur uss taraf mat dekho.

Geet did what he told, she relaxed a bit she removed her hands from his arm. Then she saw her finger prints. Then she realised that she is holding him tightly.

She made a sorry face n told I am sorry maan.

Maan smiled at her n told koi baat nahi jaan. Tum mere saath kuch bhi kar sakti ho.

Geet lost in his eyes n he kissed her forehead.

Both r not watching movie. Those horror sounds r not at all affecting her.

When he kissed her forehead a smile crept on her lips.

Geet baahar jaana chati ho? Asked maan.

Geet nodded in a no n told nahi we will stay here only.

Why geet when we r not watching the movie.

um.. um.. I dont want to go told geet.

Maan teased her aisa kaho na ki tumko meri baahon mein acha lag raha hain.

Geet blushed at this n hid her face on his chest.

Maan stop it na.

Maan too held her close n told thik hain baba. Geet ek baat bolu?

Hmm replied geet.

U look so cute when u blush.

Blood ran through geet's cheek n turned into red shade.

Maaan.

Kya hua geet?

Stop teasing me na plzz.

Hmm par mujhe kya milega asked maan.

Geet instantly broke the hug n slapped his arms n told yeh milega.

Maan made face n told geet be ready for punishment. Aaj raat ko milenge told maan huskily.

Geet blushed n composed herself aaj raat ko kya? Thik hain dekhenge.

Hmmm wait n watch madam told maan.

They kept on talking till the movie ends.

Finally the movie ended n maan told geet chalo movie katam hua.

Itni jaldi asked geet.

Jaldi kya hain jaan hum yaha aake 2 hrs hua hain told maan.

2 hrs?? mujhe pata hi nahi chala told geet.

Hmm yeh tho maan singh khurana ka jaado hain g told maan.

Ha ha n wacked him.

Ouch geet tum bhi na aaj kal zyada maarne lagi ho mujhe told maan n rubbing his arm like a small kid.

Ole ole mere bache ko bura laga said geet n pulled his cheek.

Geet leave it. Main aur bacha agrhhh told maan irritatingly.

Agar aapka romance katam hua tho hum baahar chale told yash bringing them back from their world.

Geet felt embarrassed n told chalo jiju.

Waise jiju aapke haat ko kya hua asked maan.

Maan tere haat ko kya hua asked yash.

Umm.. samaj gaya told maan.

Yaar they both r vampires shayad see what they did to our poor hands told yash.

Maan laughted at him.

Hello miss handa sisters called yash.

They turned back n told yes any help. Waise hum aapko kyun help karenge hum tho vampires hain na.

Maan n yash gulped.

Ab aapka program kya hain ji asked krishna saving his friends from his sisters.

They kept their hands on their chins n patting them n thinking. All boys rolled their eyes n whispered ab kya hoga pakka shopping.

Thik hain u spoiled our movie plan so listen first we will have our lunch n then we will go to.. said geet.

We will go to asked maan curiously praying that not for shopping.

We will go to gate way of india told di.

Wow yaar awesome idea told karthik.

But can I tell something asked krishna.

Bolo bhai told geet.

Umm.. gate way of india if we go in night it will be awesome. Hum ab kahi aur jaate hain told krishna

yeh bhi acha hain told yash.

How about we go for caves chriped geet.

Too good shouted all in unison.

Geet lifted her collar n told I know.


First they all went to restaurent n had lunch. They all enjoyed having lunch.

Suddenly krishna asked waise maan movie kaisa tha.

um.. movie bohot acha tha. I liked it stammered maan.

Krishna smirked n asked really? I didnt see u watching movie.

Nahi yaar theater mein movie hi dekhte hain na aur kya karte hain told maan.

Acha?? great humko nahi pata teased krishna.

Krishna stop it yaar. Geet darr gayi thi so...

hmm humko samaj mein aya maan saab. Hamari saali ji darr gayi aur aap tho usko mana rahe the teased yash.

Jiju aap bhi kuch kam nahi. Dont tease my bro n BHABHI told karthik.

Geet n di blushed thinking that they r totally trapped.

Chinna chup kar aur yeh bhabhi bhabhi kya hain asked geet.

Ha ab aap tho mere bhabhi ban gaye ho na told karthik.

Geet felt shy n maan kept his hands around her shoulder. To avoid further consequences maan told

chalo guys lunch hogaya. We have to go to caves its getting late.

All agreed to that n headed towards the cave in the car.


Meanwhile in the car:


yash-sudha in front. Yash is driving. Geet-maan in back seat n karthik n krishna sat in the back seat of maan n geet.


Di saw geet is trying to call someone but they r not picking the phone.

Geet what happened? Kisko call kar rahi ho? Asked di.

Di dekho I am calling shanti from 1 hr. she is not picking the phone told geet.

Geet she must be busy. College gayi hogi told di.

Nahi di now time is 3 n her college is only upto 2 n how much busy she might be she will pick my call for sure. Pata nahi kya hua usko told geet again trying to call her.

But now it came as switched off.

Dekho ab switch off aaraha hain told geet.

Maan understood her tension n karthik's ears became sharp when he heard shanti's name.

Geet kuch nahi hoga shayad di is rite she might be busy told maan.


But geet is not convinced her face shows the restlessness about her friend.


Precap: what happened to shanti??? Shocked

              gang visit to caves n gateway of india. Big smile


So friends here is part 23. hope u all like it.

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Plzz friends the likes r reducing a lot. Plz tell me should I continue or not.

Silent readers plz hit like n do comment. Those who hit like plz do comment even.

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Edited by jyothikrish - 05 February 2012 at 11:11pm

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superb update dear...

maan-geet scene in theatre was superb

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