MG FF:DISTANCE BRINGS US CLOSER (1-23) parts - Page 3

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Edited by jyothinajo - 12 years ago
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Hello friends I am here with chapter 1

I want to tell u one thing both khuranas n handas used to stay in banglore but due to maan n karthik s studies they all shifted to delhi.

After 1 year even handas also shifted to delhi.


chapter 1


sept 3th night 11 pm


Maan came from office very late. It was very tiring day for him had loads of work @ office. From past 1 month he started working on his dream project n decided to elaborate khurana technologies (KH) n started working on it. So tomorrow he is going to discuss about it with his family( khuranas n handas).


He decided to open a new branch in banglore as he spent his childhood there.

Next day morning maan woke up at his usual time 5 am n went directly to gym n started his workout(4m past 2 years it became his routine). After some time even karthik joined him. Maan n karthik r more like best friends rather than brothers. They share a friendly bond n they share every small n big thing happened in their life.


Karthik(k): good morning bro

maan(m): good morning chinna(nick name of karthik, only maan n geet will call him as chinna, n chinna means chote as they stayed in banglore they know kannada)

k: bro I think again u came late 4m office yesterday.

M: yes dear I had lot of work n I wanna discuss important matter with u all. So dont be late for breakfast. Come soon.

K: wats the matter bro.

M: I will tell. Come soon

k: ok bro. Sure.


After some time both completed their workout, n their hair is all wet due to sweat n they r in their pants n vests( omg... looking extremely hot... hayee I am drolling over them.. lol )


they both went to their respective rooms n had their shower n came out of his washroom n looked at his room.

Maan (self thought): oh soo much has changed in these 2 years.how colourfull our life was everything has changed. No one is happy. How our lives has changed. Mama papa r waiting for u. where r u?? plzz come soon. What happened y u left us n went away.



Suddenly he came out of his trance by knock at the door.


M: yes come in.

nakul(cook in khurana mansion): sir, mam is calling u 4 breakfast.

M:ok I will be there in 10min.u go.

N:ok sir


he got ready in his office attire n looking dashing n every girl will drool over him. Soon he went downstairs n he saw his parents waiting 4 him.


M: good morning dad , mom

pooja(p): good mrng beta.

rishab(r): good mrng maan. How r u?? I think now a days u r very busy with office work.

M: yes dad, loads of work is there.

p: I am happy that u r very responsible, but dont stress urself beta, have some rest.

M: its ok mom I love doing work. I want KH should be NO 1 position.

Mean while karthik also joined n wished elders.

K: good mrng dad, mom

p n r: good mrng beta.

K: so bro wats the matter that u told in the mrng that u want to discuss something important.

M: yes, mom dad I want to talk to u about the establishing a new branch of KH in banglore.

K(happy): wow thats great news bro. I am very excited about new branch.

p: beta I am very happy but y soo suddenly. N r u sure that u want to go to banglore.

M(sad n painful smile)(st:i want to go there mom n want to know wat happened 2 years back, branch office tho sirf ek bahana hain mom): yes mom I am sure.


Mean while vijaya handa came to KM n listened all.

V: maan, I am very happy with ur decision.

M: mama when u came. N took blessing from her.

V: when u were talking to bhai n bhabi I came. N all the best beta.

M:(tears in his eyes) thanks mama. N hugged her.

Breaking the hug he composed himself.

N even rishab n pooja r also very happy with maan decision.

M: so as all of u agreed I am going to banglore 2morow. Ok I am getting late I have to go to office n make arrangements. Bye all.

All: bye n all the best.

K: ok I too have to go to hoapital. Vijaya mama u will some with me for hospital??

v: nahi karthik I will come later. U carry on.

K: ok mama. Once u come plzz call me I will come with u.

v: ok sure I will. Karthik mmm.. umm.. I.. wa.. wan..want...

k: mama I know what u r asking. Sorry mama still no information.

v(with tears): ok beta n dont tell about this to maan.

K: (self thought: see how many r worried about u plz come back soon its almost 2 years. We all r missing u a lot see mamas n bros condition they forgot how to smile)sure mama I wont, u dont worry. Its getting late bye.

All:Bye beta.

precap: maan in office.


So friends here is the 1st part. How is it??

guys 1st 3 to 4 parts will be sad(NO MANEET ðŸ˜† ) after that our maneet moments will come. Plz hit LIKE button n plzz do comment. Critisizes r most welcome. N thanku very much 4 ur support.

N can anyone make VM for this FF.

part 2:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/49593570


Edited by jyothinajo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnx 4 pm 

really loved it 


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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely part
just loved the way u started off
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