Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

OS: Virmaan something unexpected

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Posted: 12 years ago
Maanvi had performed her dance but by the
Looks of all except just one swamini buas everyone seemed to enjoy it
Maanvi had sat down by force from her dear beeji who was agravated
Maanvi cudnt handle the looks she was getting so she got up and walked out but she should have known better to look before she started walking she had just collided with a waiter who looked like a murderer but who knows maanvi eyed him one last time and said srry and walked away

Scene shift
Everyone seems to be enjoying the dance of ragini and jai wen the waiter points a gun at virrn from the back

The red light goes thru manvis eyes and she follows it and sees it behind her jeejus back she follows where the light is coming frm thu her eyes and sees the waiter pointing it at vireo. He triggers the gun

Maanvi unknowingly screams
Jiju

Everyone turns toward maanvi and see her running towards viren
She pushes viren but before everyone start questioning her before she has the time to move herself the bullet goes and hits maanvis arm.

The vaderahs and Maanvis Family look on shock unable to move a muscle

Virat who had just seen the whole thing happen Luks towards the shooter in rage

He starts to run after him but then he sees maanvi falling and catches her

He stares at her as her eyes close

Maanvi the silent is broken by jeevika

Maanvi opens her eyes and struggles to get up

The guards of vadhera have already been chasing the shooter

Maanvi maanvi virat luks at her

No one knew maanvi had just gotten hit by the bullet all they thought was she save viren and he had fainted bcoz she got too scared

But a single drop of blood dropped from maanvis arm alarming everyone

The room went crazy it was chaotistic everyone running towards maanvi

Scene shift

Maanvi had gotten the bullet out of her arm but was in the hospital bed for rest

The shooter had been caught and had been taken to jail

Scene shift
Virat viren and jeevika enter the room with everyone else

Maanvi smiles at them

Nobody smiles back

Arrey Kia hai yaar ek smile bhi nahi return ker sakte itne cheap huh he pretended to look away but then she felt a hand on hers and she looked to see her jiju and jeevika di near her

Maanvi yeh Sab tumne kuin Kota viren asked

Kuin ka kya matlab maanvi said

Maanvi agar tumhe kuch hoja ta to

Jiju agar aap ko kuch ho ja ta to

Maanvi tht was very dangerous

Jiju Maine some jiju ko nahi balk apne bhai ko bachaya hai so issey apko Kia problem hai

Viren smiled but like everyone still felt unconvinced

Arrey yaar mujhse itni nautanki nahi handle ki jaati koi to kuch bolo arrey oh samba she looked at virat itna sanata kuin hai

Virat smiled the smallest smile in the world

Arrey yaar main theek hu so can I get a smile she smiled so widely tht everyone had to laugh

Scene shift
Maanvi had returned home and everyone was asleep swamini had even thanked maanvi and had set her bed for her

She felt gratitude towards maanvi

Maanvi was on the terrace wen she felt something wrong she Felt someone climbing up the terrace

Before maanvi cud scream virat jumped up and covered her mouth the two had never gotten this close their faces almost touching

Ssshhh rishikesh ki sherni Ji height to itni choti hai Lekin awazz dade mile jaati hai uuufff

Maanvi pulled his hand down our chep tumhari height itni bari hai lekinn akal ussey bhi chotiEdited by Brklyn_gal - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
its mindblowing😛
plz PM me wen u update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love! Love! Love!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey its gr8...
I hope to see Maanvi saving viren in the show too
Plz update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it! plz continue! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! Why are you the best writer in the world!!! You are my fav.!!!Plzz update soon and can you plzzz PM me next time?😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg it so good plz pm when u write the next part :)😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
omgg!! that was awesome!!! please pm me when u update =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice yaar...
hope the same will happen in the show...:)
Posted: 12 years ago
Aww I totally love maanvi.
Especially saving viren like that.
Please pm me.