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myviewprem IF-Sizzlerz

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Scene470 Gunjan back to life 

His secretary takes the call and tells her that Karan is busy but Yashu senses some problem and insists on speaking to Karan right now.

Karan is busy trying to help her breathe

Akash(secretary): Karan, Ma'am wants to speak to you right now

Karan switches phone on speaker and keeps it down he is trying to revive her.

Karan: Hello mama

The crowd is buzzing too much. Karan continues giving her mouth to mouth breathing.

Yashu: Where are you Karan? Why are you not picking call?

Karan chokes: Sorry I was busy

Yashu: When are you and Gunjan coming home? What is that noise of crowd?

Karan is busy and does not respond immediately

Yashu repeats: Karan When are you and Gunjan coming home?

Karan stops giving her resuscitation and says: In some time. I will call you later bye mom and abruptly switches off phone

He continues trying to revive Gunjan

Now Arjun also has tears. Will his baby live? Its more than 5 minutes Karan is trying to get her to breathe.

Finally after what seems like eternity Gunjan coughs.

Arjun, Raj and others in party sigh in relief

Karan helps her sit up with his folded legs as support and rubs her back.    


Gunjan cannot still breath as so much dust and the various gases in the room has gone into her chest.

Gunjan keeps on coughing non stop unable to breath. She has turned pale without breath. She vomits out everything she has ate or drank in the wedding.

Karan rubs her back and chest continuously. Gunjan starts crying in between vomiting and choking.

Karan consoles her: Chutki Do not worry I am there na. Nothing will happen to you. Try to breathe

Gunjan tries to breathe but keeps coughing instead
Gunjan now crying nonstop scared: Ba                        B                      a                        Ba
Karan embraces her: Do not speak chutki do not speak nothing will happen. Please try to breathe slowly.
RPS gets angry. PRS is one lucky man he thinks and leaves from there 

Edited by myviewprem - 05 June 2012 at 8:33pm

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Arjuhisis IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 04 June 2012 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Where were u prem - I was missing ur frequent updates
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Good update prem - pls continue

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Posted: 04 June 2012 at 7:37pm | IP Logged

Scene471 Amrit's wedding night


Meanwhile Amrit sitting in a dim lit corner thinking of her past. Amrit's parents were best friend with Kartar Singh. Her father was a police officer too but died in a train accident. He did not have parents and siblings and hence Amrit at age of 10 years came to stay at Kartar's house as an orphan. Kartar and his wife showered her with love like a daughter.

But when she fell in love with Rudra(RPS) in college and wanted to marry him they did not find him of their stature and told him to first earn enough to give Amrit a comfortable life she was accustomed to. Rudra tried his best but he was not that educated as his father died when he was 14 years old and he could complete only his 10th STD and went to work to support himself and his mother.
Rudra loved Amrit very dearly and hence to make her his wife started indulging in illegal activities and started robbing his employer's the Sisodia's. Luck ran out the third time as Yash Sisodia refused to forgive him for swindling money and he was sent to jail at the age of 23. So at the age of 16 years Amrit was forced to marry Sudhir, Kartar's son.

Amrit was sitting on the bed in tears with her ghunghat when Sudhir came in at midnight. Sudhir did not know much of Amrit's love affair with Rudra as Kartar had not told him anything or so Amrit and Kartar assumed. But in reality Sudhir had seen her secretly meeting Rudra and had a whiff of the affair. But he could not go against his father and reject her proposal as then he may lose favour with his father. And since Sudhir was just starting his career as a lawyer he did not want to risk his relationship with his father and inheritance with Ahluwaliah family. Sudhir opened her gunghat and found her in tears.

Sudhir: Amrit, what happened?

Amrit in tears: Nothinggg

Sudhir knows Amrit has been forced to marry him: Nothinggg orrr

Amrit wiping her tears: Orrr?

Sudhir thinking: Orrr are you crying remembering your lover  

Amrit has been adviced by Kartar to not reveal her love affair with Rudra to Sudhir and spoil the married life. So Amrit keeps quiet.


Edited by myviewprem - 05 June 2012 at 8:33pm

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Good one
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nic updates premSmile
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Scene472 Amrit's honeymoon

Sudhir does not consummate the marriage and its almost a year. Amrit was still going to class XI and one day Rudra who is released from jail comes to meet her. Amrit takes him to a secluded park to talk to him to tell him not to meet her ever again as she is bahu of a respected family and a wife who considers husband as God.

Sudhir who is going to court sees them talking in the garden and gets upset and angry. So what if he has not consummated marriage with her she is his wife and his reputation may go for a toss if his wife is roaming around with a former lover. Kartar arranged for both of them to go to honeymoon as soon as Amrit's summer holiday's start in college. Sudhir and Amrit leave for the honeymoon.   Sudhir has been quiet and not speaking to Amrit from the day he saw her with Rudra.   

That night an angry Sudhir is sitting in hotel bedroom waiting for his wife to get ready and come.

Amrit comes out after bath: You did not sleep Sudhirjiii

Sudhir angry but does not show: Nooo, I was waiting for youuu

Amrit smiles: Why????????

Sudhir: Today I want to make you my wife

Amrit does not understand: That I am always for all life

Sudhir: Nooo, we are just two strangers staying in a room

Amrit looks at him and bends her eyes. Sudhir stands up and throws her duppatta and drops it on the ground. Amrit scared to death but she has no option but to submit to her husbands wishes as a dutiful Indian wife. Rudra has only hugged her never crossed his limits with her. Amrit has no idea of what to do? Amrit actually had no idea of what a first night meant as she had no mother, elder sister or babhi to tell her all these things.
Sudhir starts kissing her purposely hurting her by holding on to her wet hairs tightly.

Amrit: Aaah Sudhirji its paininggg

Sudhir only looks at her and then lifts and takes her to the bed and moves on top of her. He has only one intention to punish her for her unfaithfulness towards him.

Amrit tries to stop: Sudhirji

Sudhir does not allow her to speak and kisses her lips. Sudhir has no intention of giving pleasure to his wife he only wants to punish her by giving her pain, pain for betraying him, pain for being forced to marry her.

Edited by myviewprem - 05 June 2012 at 8:34pm

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Good one

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