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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 8:17pm | IP Logged
good updates...
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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
Scene404 Gunjan's playtime
 
 

Gunjan shocked: Howww?

PRS: I am 5+8=13 years old angelll

Gunjan laughs making fun: 13 years you and 13 years old ha ha haa

 
Arjun laughs. His father has become a kid only today with Gunjan. This is first time he has seen his father laugh. Otherwise his father never laughs and smiles ever not in office or at house.
 
PRS: OK, I will prove you now only and runs behind Gunjan and this time PRS catches her somehow.

Gunjan: Leave me dada leave me

PRS tickles her: No first agree I am 13 years old then only I will leave you

 
Gunjan laughs and falls on ground and pulls her daddy along. PRS puts his hand to protect her as she falls on the ground. PRS rolls over on the ground laughing with her non-stop. Arjun is imagining himself as a small kid rolling on the ground with his papa laughing non stop. Gunjan is lying on top of PRS and laughing. PRS has embraced her and both are laughing away.
 
Gunjan trying to wriggle out of PRS hold: Leave me dada

PRS holds her tight: Not till you agreee

Gunjan laughing: Okkk okkk dada you are 13 years olddd I agreee leave me

PRS kisses her cheeks and nose and releases her from his embrace.  

 
Gunjan places Guddu on the floor. Gunjan climbs her papa's legs and sleeps on them and extends her hands and PRS holds her hand and rocks her back and forth. This is one of Gunjan's favourite plays lying on PRS or Karan's leg while they rock her. PRS and Gunjan are in their own world playing and laughing away. PRS himself has become a kid in Gunjan's company and is enjoying the play time immensely.
 
Arjun has never seen his father laugh in past 3 months he knows him and smiles. Arjun imagines PRS and him playing like that and has tears in his eyes. If only he could play with his papa like Gunjan once buttt now its too late. Even if his papa comes to know Arjun is his son he cannot play like a child with his father any longer not like Gunjan atleast. 
 
Arjun feels upset and frustrated that he lost out on spending his childhood with hs father playing with him, laughing with him, being embraced by papa while lying on his chest like Gunjan, rocking on his papa's legs so many things that even if his papa comes to know Arjun is his son cannot be done any longer. The world may think all these are not important and not big things but only a child who missed out on these things will understand what all these things really mean.


Edited by myviewprem - 23 April 2012 at 8:53pm

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
who a new thread??

the updats were good prem

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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by florine_20

who a new thread??

the updats were good prem
 
thanks, its only because of dedicated readers like you that i have been able to continue till 400 scenes
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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
good update -
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Posted: 23 April 2012 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
sounds like story goes round and round around gunjan only it doesn't move forward what happen to rudra ,rashi,and arjun;s another brother?Arjun and Arohi became like an guest appearance and gunjan and karan become in lead role common move forward story line don't go in circle almost one year has finish kmh2 gone off the air but this story is not moving forward only, creative of kmh has deceived the viewers by changing the story line by keeping us in limbo and didn't open suspense and hang the story line without giving any logic explanation,i think you will move forward with the story line with viewers expectation but i am disappointed, many times don't bother to read full episode but still press like button in the appreciation of your effort to write.
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Posted: 27 April 2012 at 4:37am | IP Logged
nic updates dear!!!!bt evn i agree dat u should be shwing arjuhi parts mre rathr dan gunjan karan!!!!i am nt saying dat it's nt gud bt at d end of d day arjun-arohi r d main charactersSmile
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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 8:03pm | IP Logged
when are u updating prem??

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