The perfect couple (RTMC ff) (part 14 on pg 41) (Page 50)

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shruja

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 6:01am | IP Logged

Part 17

ohh so both kept quite in their return journey!!
so our Mr. devil had hard time to sleep also
He was more annoyed at himself than anyone else. The girl wouldn't allow him a moment of peace and still he felt an indispensable urge for seeing her again. What was wrong with him? She wasn't any goddess that his day won't start without seeing her. And he could easily see her in the morning. Surely he won't go to see her. Never…

hehehe but he went to see her again!!
adi covering charu with blanket scene was cute and she smiled peaceful in reaction!!!
ohh grandma n sanjay leaving to see renuka!
so both are alone at home

"Why? You haven't eaten anything since morning." He raised his brows questioningly. How did she know that he hadn't eaten anything? But he almost smiled when she defended herself stubbornly "I wouldn't have come if grandma didn't give me the responsibility of you"
both are caring for each other but don't want to show!!
our charu is very innocent like kid so she forgave u so easily!!

why u done this!! showing renuka dead!!
we wanted her!1 i though u will show her getting improved her health!!
we too heartbroken like charu!!
all description of whole sad scene made me cry!!
i m feeling very bad for charu!!
she din't even met her once!!
"I hate you" she whispered with a fresh stream of tears. She took away her chance of being with her in her last days. How could she be so unfair to her?
its unfair with us too!! Cry

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shruja

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Part 18
Adi consoling charu described very nicely!!
but it was very heart wrenching!!
when she saw her mother's dead body!! Cry

Charu there as she fainted the very next moment she saw her mother dead. She had not even heard of such harsh realities of life leave alone facing them with her eyes. Her mother always protected her from the real world. She was too weak mentally to accept it like a mature. That is why she knew she won't be able to endure the truth.
these lines are very true
No one on this earth could better know their child than the mother.
Clap

liked adi cared charu n made her eat!!

ohh we miss our charu who was mischeivous, irritating to adi!!
her maa's death made her silent!! Ouch

adi is very nice person to meet anki to make charu happy
and also he asked for karan too

Adi perceived the doubt on her face and said softly "Don't worry. I won't kill him and get arrested. I love myself too much for that. I – I just want him to meet Charu."

Ankita chuckled at his excuse to hide his own emotions.

"I get you Aditya but I don't think this would work. He was just a crush of hers. I know her from school days. She lived in the world of fairies and princes."

"Ouch" he said dramatically and added, "You mean I am not a prince charming."

She chuckled again and admired the light heartedness he was capable of creating even under such grave issue.

we too know anki tht adi loves charu very much n she is very lucky!!

ohh both getting out Big smile

but to meet tht karan Ouch

She came out in a dark red knee length skirt and cream top. His heart skipped a beat as he saw her coming out of the room. He smiled weakly trying to hide the storm in his heart.

you love her then y u r taking her to karan Angry

she will be happy with you only!!
ohh he made accident!1 obviously he lost his mind for charu!! Shocked

In the taxi she kept on crying with an unending stream of tears. She remembered the day she had lost her mother. She cannot afford to lose anyone anymore. Though he had told her that it was a minor accident but she felt abruptly scared.

ohh out poor charu!!

loved whole hosptial scene!1
it was beautiful n romantic!!
also cute teasing of friends sid n rohan!!!
n loved taxi driver who was
"Sorry Adi, but we found this pitiable man searching for an untrustworthy girl in the hospital"

thank u so much for these beautiful updates!!
sorry for late comments!

Edited by shruja - 24 November 2012 at 6:20am

shruja

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged

Happy Half Century dear Samy!!
we don't want you to close this FF
Still confession part remained!!
and we wanted goa n other parts
its will do even if you show them in there sweet memories!!
like DV shown at end time!!
So please continue it whenever you can!!
will wait for you to get time to upload your ffs!!
We want our Ther Perfect Couple.

Admins & Mods : Please do not close or lock this n other samy's ff topics!

Asyalover

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 12:03pm | IP Logged

plzzz update do na

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sonalimurat

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Posted: 09 December 2012 at 9:43am | IP Logged

Hey congrats dear

you completed 50 pages of ur FF

This is my one of favourite love story Of RTMC .

u made it so beautifully...

waiting for next ud of Perfect copuple

plzz update soon

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Posted: 24 December 2012 at 10:12am | IP Logged

Hey dear..
I m a new reader of ur ff..
& I hav read all d uds..
I mst say..u r really superb in writing..
Each & every scene described by u is amazing..
so happy that Adi & Charu know now that they luv each-other..
plz giv d nxt ud soon..
& plz send me also a PM..
plz plz plz..

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 2:28pm | IP Logged

Simply love it. Continue soon... please

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@samikshachauhan: Awesum n fantastic!!!!

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